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高中英语考点精析精练 看图作文类(书面表达)介绍

高中英语考点精析精练 看图作文类(书面表达)介绍



第一篇:高中英语考点精析精练 看图作文类(书面表达)介绍

看图作文类

本类考题解答锦囊

近几年来,看图作文在高考书面表达中占有相当大的比例。如2000年的全国卷、20典型例题季高考卷、20典型例题卷、20典型例题、20典型例题季高考卷、20典型例题考卷、20典型例题,20典型例题考卷及20典型例题卷等都是看图作文。由于这类题型的特点是:形象、直观、内容具体,且在图画的前面一般还有文字说明,因此考生一般都有话可写且不会走题。但在写作时应注意的是:

1.仔细阅读图画及文字说明,首先应确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文或说明文为主。

记叙文:要抓住记叙文的六要素:时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(w~)和过程(how)。即:五个“W”和一个“H”。根据图画提示把这六个问题写清楚了,至少可得及格分数。如2000年的全国高考题,时间:2000年2月8日清晨;地点:公园外的公园路上;A物;“我”、一个老头;事件;这个老头被一辆黄色小车撞倒,“我”把他送到了附近的医院;原因:司机害怕承担责任而逃走,过程:“我”当时正沿着公园路散步。

说明文:一般先要把图画联系起来,弄清楚图画的目的、意图;然后进行抽象概括,找出一个说明对象,接着根据图画从时间、过程、步骤等方面加以解释、说明;最后进行总结,得出结论。对事物进行说明时,一定要做到条理清楚,明了易懂。如20典型例题考英语试题,作者首先告诉对方已经为他找到了房间,接着介绍房间的情况,最后征求对方的意见。2.确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写,一般采用第一人称;如果是以讲故事的形式来写,则一般采用第三人称来写比较方便。但不管用哪种人称,全文都必须一致。

3.确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁,确定文章所要用的时态。切记全文时态的一致性。

4.发挥联想要合理、适度。这类文章的说明一般都要求考生作适当的联想和发挥,以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。但联想和发挥一定要根据图画做到合情合理,不能过多地胡乱联想和发挥。如20典型例题考题,如果告诉对方:我几乎把城市找遍了,终于为你找到了一套房子。这样联想显然是可以的。然而,倘若你写成:我到东城区去找,那边的房子太贵;于是,我又到西城区去找,而那里正在建设之中,条件不太好;接着,我又到南城区去找,发现那里离新建的华文学校又太远了……像这样的联想和发挥就太夸张了。

5.虚实结合,详略得当。对于图画中的内容,该详细叙述、描写的,就必须要详细、具体;可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。也就是平常老师所讲的有时要泼墨如水,而有时又要惜墨如金。如图画中所有的时间、数字或言论需一词不漏地写清楚,而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。Ⅰ 高考最新热门题 1(典型例题

假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生,暑假打算去乡村度假。请根据下面两幅图提供的信息,写一篇短文。简要说明城市生活的不足,重点说明你去乡村度假的原因。

注意:

1.短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息,并做适当发挥,使短文内容连贯、完整;

2.词数:100左右。

命题目的与解题技巧:本题考查图表作文。

【解析】 此书面表达有图画兼文字提示,因此考生在动笔前先要审阅提示。如:文章的体裁为说明文,说明要去乡村度假的原因。

人称:第一人称。

时态:以将来时为主。陈述城乡环境差别时可用一般现在时。

关联词:although,still,so,what’s more,besides,also,above a11等。

写作要点:

1.“我”要去乡下度假的打算。

2.城市化所存在的问题(拥挤、嗓音、空气污染)。3.乡下的环境(空气、山、水、树木、鸟儿等)。

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One possible version: I will spend this summer holiday in the countryside.Although the city is modern and convenient, there are still some problems,such as air pollution, crowdedness and noise.In the countryside I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life.There, the air is fresh and the water is clean, trees are green and birds are singing.I can also go boating, fishing and swimming in the lake.What's more, I can climb the hills.All this will be interesting and good for my health.Above all, I can learn more about nature.So I want to go to the countryside for a change.I'm looking forward to the coming of my summer holiday.2.(典型例题

假设你是图①中的男孩。请根据以下图画提供情节线索,以SharingH。usework为题,用英文叙述你帮妈妈做家务的经过及感想。

注意:

1.书面表达必须包括图画所表现的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使其连贯、完整;

2.词数:100词左右.

题目的与解题技巧:本题考查看图写一个故事。

【解析】本文记叙“我”帮妈妈做家务的经过,叙述的是已经做过的事,因此用过去时。要点:1.见妈妈同时做几件事情,觉得妈妈太累,决定帮妈妈做一点家务活;2.在帮妈妈洗衣服时,“我”的朋友来叫我去踢球,“我”拒绝了;3.等把衣服洗完时,“我”累得满头大汗;4.妈妈见“我”把衣服洗好了,夸“我”是个好孩子,“我”感到非常高兴。

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One possible version: One day when I was about to play football, I saw Mother was taking a lot of dirty clothes to wash and a bucket to carry water.I thought Mother was very tired, so I decided to help her wash clothes.While I was doing the washing , Li Ming came and asked me to play football with him.I refused him and told him that I would help Mother finish the housework first.When I got the housework done,I was so tired that I was sweating all over.When Mother came back home, she found I had washed all the dirty clothes and said that I was a good child.I felt very happy.3.(典型例题卷)20典型例题日,你的美国朋友给你写了一封信,祝贺北京申奥成功。收到信后,你给他写了一封回信,介绍了你们是如何庆祝申奥成功的。回信应包括下列图画所示内容,并邀请他在2008年来中注意:

1.词数100左右; 2.信的开头和结尾已写好。

参考词汇:竞标成功win the bid for 出墙报put up a wall newspaer Dear Bill,Very glad to receive your letter of Julyl3... Sincerely yours,Zhang Hua 答案:Dear Bill, Very glad to receive your letter of July 13.Thank you for your congratulations.I was very excited when I heard that Beiing won the bid for the 2008 Olympic Games.Immediately I called Wei Guo and Li Hong to my house.After a brief discussion we decided to put up a wall newspaper for our class.We hurried to our classroom and began to work: Wei Guo wrote a poem.Li Hong copied some news from the newspapers.I drew an Olympic flag.The

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假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。

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1.词数:100左右。2.参考词汇:房租rent(n.)Dear Bob,_____________________

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__________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案:Dear Bob, I'm ,so glad to learn that you're coming in September.I've found a place for you.It's a small flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.The rent is 500 yuan per month.The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school.In fact, it is only one stop.Do you think you'd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you.Just let me know.Yours, Li Hua 5.(典型例题卷)(1)某英文报“健康生活”栏目正在讨论有关健康食品、体育锻炼与少年儿童肥胖的问题。下面六幅图画是李明

一年中的变化,请根据李明的情况写一篇短文。

注意:

1.词数不少于60。2.短文的开头已给出。

提示词语:

junk food好吃但不利于健康的食品snacks各种零食

A healthy diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity(肥胖)among childern.Take Li Ming for example. ___ _______ __________________________

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__________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案:A healthy diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity(肥胖)among children.Take Li Ming for example.Li Ming used to be a healthy boy.But over a year ago, he got into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks.Besides, he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV, and did little exercise.As a result, Li Ming used to be a healthy boy,but_________________________________ ________________

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用心 3 he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs.So Li Ming decided to change the unhealthy life style.He began to have a balanced, healthy diet.He also took part in various sports activities such as swimming, skating, running and playing basketball.Months later, Li Ming became as fit as before.6.(典型例题

你和李明参加了一次野外生存训练。以下面5幅图画表现了野外训练的过程,请根据图示写一篇英文日记。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.日记的开头与结尾已为你写好。

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指南针:compassn n.手电筒:flashlightn n.急救包:first—aidkit 宿营地:campsiten n.SaturdayCloudy LI Ming and l took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday,and it has been one Of the most unforgetable experiences since high schoo1.

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The two Of us spent the night in the forest.

We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solveproblems.hwasquiteanexperienceforusboth,which I'll never forget for the rest Ofmy life.

答案: Saturday, May 4,20典型例题 cloudy Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday, and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.Early in the morning, we set out.Li Ming was carrying a compass and a tent in his backpack and in mine there was a flashlight, a map, a knife, a first-aid kit, some matches, candles , food, and clothes.On the way to the campsite, we climbed a hill, and then we swam across a river, pushing the backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by the river.As we got into a forest, we lost our way.Luckily, we found the right direction with the compass.By the time we arrived at the campsite, it had already been dark.Li Ming then put up the tent, and I made a fire and started cooking.The two of us spent the night in the forest.We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems.It was quite an experience for us both, which I'll never forget for the rest of my life.Ⅱ 题点经典类型题 1.(典型例题卷)简要描述上面图片,并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。命题目的与解题技巧:本题考查对温画的理解。

【解析】这是一个识图题,体裁为说明文。说明自己的观点看法。2.本文要求用第一人称。3.时态:一般现在时。4.写作要点:

①业余时间,学生补习太多,没有自己的时间。,May 4,20

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用心 4 ②表达自己的观点:学生应有自己的时间。

③理由。

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One possible version: We Want to Have Our Own Time As we all know , today students have more and more homework , they use their spare time to do the homework and to take lessons.Then , students have no time for themselves.In my opinion.I think, students Should have more time to develop themselves.First, students should have some time to relax and play.This doesn't mean that they will waste time.We can also study and learn from the play.After doing the homework for a long time , it is necessary to have some time to relax.“No play and no games makes Jack a dull boy.We don't want to be dull boys.We want to be good students in many ways.Second, we can have our own time in order to make our body strong enough, this can be helpful in our further study.After all, I want to say, students should have their own time to develop themselves.writing 2.(典型例题)请根据下面这幅漫画及提示,以“乐极生悲”(Extreme Joy Begets Sorrow)为题目,写—篇100个词左右的小故事。

故事的开头已为你写出:

Mike was Mr and Mrs Smith'sonly son... 答案:Extreme Joy Begets Sorrow Mike was Mr and Mrs Smith's only son.They loved him very much.One day Mr Smith bought Mike a new bicycle.The moment he had the bike, Mike rode it around and around.How happy he was!Mr and Mrs Smith stood nearby watching happily.Now Mike managed to ride with his hands off.He shouted,” Look at me!' How proud he felt!While he was looking at his parents cheerfully, Mike spee ded up the bike.Oh, no!Off the bike fell the overjoyed boy.He got badly hurt.Mr and Mrs Smith went into deep sorrow.It was the right saying “Extreme joy begets sorrow”.The accident teaches that we must think of danger in time of joy.3.(典型例题)你是Tom,五年后再次来到这个城市,发现它变化很大(如图所示),你给朋友Rose发电子邮件,告诉她这里的变化。注意: 1.字数:约100字。

2.注:立交桥overpass;私家车privatecar 答案: Dear Rose, Now I'd like to tell you something about the city.Great changes have taken place in it.First, more high buildings have appeared, which are modern and beautiful.Many overpasses have been set up.Besides, a lot of families have got cars of their own.The people's life here has become rich and colorful.People from other countries come here They can enjoy them selves travelling on holidays.To my delight, I can taste delicious food of different coun tries.I live a happy life today.Welcome to the city again.yours truly, Tom

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用心 5 4.(典型例题中学)观察下面四幅图,以图中小女孩为第一人称,写一篇100词左右的日记(日期、星期、天气自拟)。

要求:日记须包括所有图画的内容,可稍增加细节,使日记通顺连贯。

生词:希望工程theHopePuJect;零花钱pocket money中 答案: Monday, May 18,20典型例题 Fine This morning our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class.She said, “Now in the countryside many children still can't go to school because of poverty.Can you help them?” After school, I went home.When I entered my room, I saw the little box in which I kept my pocket money.Though I wanted to buy a pocket recorder, I decided to send my money to the children who are eager to go to school.I began to write a letter to them at once.After finishing writing it,I went to the post office and posted all my pocket money.I felt very happy today because I've done a good deed.5.(典型例题附中)请以寓言“ACrowAndAJar“为题,简要叙述图中内容,并谈谈此寓言给你的启示。注意:

1.第一句已为你写好,不计人总词数。2.词数100左右。3.参考词汇:寓言proverb A CrowAndAJar _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A crow is very thirsty.She finds some water in a jar, but unfortunately she can't reach the water because the mouth of the jar is too small.She looks around and sees some stones nearby.A good idea comes to her mind.She picks up some small stones and drops them into the jar.By and by, the water rises up so that she has a nice drink at last.What a clever crow!From the proverb we've learned that nothing can't be done so long as we use our mind and make our efforts.The crow sets us a good example indeed.6.(典型例题)下面三由幅图体现的是学生的课外学习、课余活动和社会实践活动三个方面的课外生活。请根据每幅图的内容,写一篇题为My Out—class Activities的短文,并分别写出你的感受(或收获)以及你对整个课外生活的看法。

词数120个左右。My Out-of-class Activities My spare time is full of interesting activities.I read all kinds of books in the reading-room whenever I have time.I learn a lot more in the library than in class in this way.Sports and games keep me healthy and strong enough to deal with all difficulties.Among all games, volleyball is my favourite.I of-ten play volleyball with my classmates.Sometimes I go in for social practice with my classmates outside school.For exam-ple, we go to plant trees in spring.In this way, I gain a lot of social experience and learn to work for the good of the society.Out-of-class activities are quite necessary for us students.Through A crow isverythirsty.She _______________________________ _________

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用心 6 these activities we can learn many things that can't be learned in class.Ⅲ 新高考命题探究

1.你班李明和王英同学在高三阶段有不同的学习方法,请描述下列各图,适当增加细节使文章连贯,并谈谈你的看法。

Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have different learning methods. _______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________

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but he to _______________________________ _______________________________ 答案: Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three.They both work hard they have different learning methods.Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher.As a result, misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time finish his home-work.So he has to stay up late and doesn't get enough sleep.However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning.She listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class.Because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it posible for her to go to bed early.In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer her learning method.2.根据下面的图用英语写一个题为”Such a Help“的小故事。故事须包含所有图画内容。可以适当增加细节,使故事连贯。

词数:100—120个。

提示:图中的小孩名叫Tom,老人叫MrSmith. 答案: Such a Help One day Tom was kicking a ball under some trees.He once kicked it so that it got stuck between two branches of a tree.He was too short to the ball.Just as he was won-dering how he could get it down, a man was passing by with an umbrella in his hand.Tom went up and asked for help.Theman threw his umbrella at the ball and it was knocked down.But unfortunately, the umbrella was caught on the tree.Tom was happy to have his ball back and went away with it.He did not even say a word to the man.How could the poor man get his umbrella back? No one knows.3.下面五幅图画叙述了胡先生”热爱“动物的一段经历。请根据图画内容,写一篇100词左右的短文,描述他的经历并发表一点你的个人看法。

答案: Mr.Hu is one of the men who like animals in such a way that all he does only causes harm to animals, because he likes animals only for the purpose of satisfying his own needs.He kept some birds in cages for fun and wore clothes made of wild animals'fur and skin.Worse still, he even ate wild ani-mals in restaurants and fixed some heads of rare animals on the wall of his living room to show off.In the end, he caught SAPS and had to stay in hospital.In my opinion, we should treat wild animals as our friends instead of catching killing them, or we'll be punished.4.下列图描述的是Mr.and Mrs white购物后,到停车场取车时发生了一场误会。英语将下列图示叙述清楚。短文必须包括图画的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使贯完整。

词数80—100。

答案:After shopping, Mr.and Mrs.White went back to the car park.Mr.White carried a lot of packets in his arms.And just as his hands were full, Mrs.White asked him where he put his key to the car.He told her that it was in his pocket.But she was unable to find the key in his right pocket.Mr.White told her it was in his

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用心 7 left pocket and she got it.But when she was unlocking the door, the key just didn't fit in it.Mr.White was wondering what had gone wrong, when the owner of the car came up, asking angrily, ”What are you doing to my car?“ It was then that they realized it was a wrong car that was exactly like theirs.Mr.White answered, ”We are very sorry, we've made a mistake.“ 5.某家中学生英文杂志以交通安全为题向读者征文,请你根据下列图画中UncleLi的一次经历写一篇短文应征,短文可以适当增减细节。

词数:100左右。

生词:三轮车tricycle. 昏迷losecomsciousness _______________________________ _______________________________

_______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案:The other day Uncle Li left the bus station with a heavy box on his shoulder.Just then a young man riding a tricycle came and asked Uncle Li to pay four yuan for riding him home.On the way Uncle Li asked him to ride slowly, but he just smiled and rode even faster.Suddenly the tricycle turned over.The young man was badly hurt and lost consciousness.Uncle Li was slightly hurt in the forehead.They were sent to hospi-tal.Coming out of the hospital, Uncle Li made up his mind to take a bus.6.请用英语简要地写出《守株待兔》的故事,以刊登在我国对外发行的某英文刊物上。

词数:不得少于70,不得多于140。

故事大意:宋人有耕者,田中有株(stump),兔走触株,折颈而死。捡之甚喜,农而守株。一年后,田地荒芜,终不再获,而身为宋国笑。

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_______________________________ __ _ _______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ 答案: One day a farmer of the kingdom of Song was ploughing the field.Suddenly he saw a rabbit dash into a stump.The rab-bit broke its neck and died soon.The farmer was very glad that he got a rabbit without any effort.From that day on, he left his ploughing and kept watching by the big tree all day long in hope of getting another rabbit this way.But a whole year pas-sed and he got none.Looking hack, he saw the field lie waste, overrun with weeds.He became a laughing-stock of Song people.7.下图是你在从部队回家探亲路上发生的一个故事,时间为3月20日,星期三,天气阴。请用英语以日记的形式叙述一下此故事。

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用心 8 _______________________________________________________________________ 答案:March 20, Wednesday Cloudy I joined the Army two years ago.This was the first time l went home to see my parents.I was very glad.When I walked by the side of a river, I heard someone shouting Help.Help!” I saw three children struggling in the river.I jumped into the ice water without hesitation.I tried my best to pull two of them onto the bank.but the third was washed away.So I had to swim hack to save him.In the end I pulled the last one onto the hank.They were thankful to me and called me hero.But I think I just did what I should do.专心

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第二篇:高中英语书面表达--书信作文

高中英语满分书信作文模板——投诉信1 Dear ______, ①I am ______(自我介绍).②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______(总体介绍).④In the first place, ______(抱怨的第一个方面).⑤In addition, ______(抱怨的第二个方面).⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______(感觉)to______(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______(提出建议和请求), preferably ______(进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限).⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.高中英语满分书信作文模板——建议信

Dear ______, ①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.②In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______(建议的内容).③I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Yours sincerely, 高中英语满分书信作文模板——请求信 Dear ______ , ①I am writing to formally request to ______(请求的内容).②The reason for ______is that ______(给出原因).③I ______ , so I ______(给出细节).④I would also like to request ______(提出进一步的要求).⑤I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.⑥Thank you for your attention to these requests.⑦If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at ______(电话号码).⑧I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming Dear Sir or Madam, ①I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in ______(报纸名称)of ______(广告发布时间).②Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a ______(工作名称).③In the one hand, ______(第一个原因).④On the other hand, ______(另一个原因).⑤Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful.⑥If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at ______(电话号码).⑦Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely,(求职信)

Li Ming 高中英语满分书信作文模板——邀请信 Dear ______ , ①There will be a ______(内容)at/in ______(地点)on ______(时间).②We would be honored to have you there with us.③The occasion will start at ______(具体时间).④This will be followed by a ______(进一步的安排).⑤At around ______(时间), ______(另一个安排).⑥I really hope you can make it.⑦RSVP before ______(通知你的最后期限).Yours sincerely,Li Ming 高中英语满分书信作文模板——道歉信 Dear ______, ①I am truly sorry that ______(道歉的原因).②The reason is that ______(介绍原因).③Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.④Hope you can accept my appologieze and understand my situation.Yours sincerely,Li Ming

Li Ming 高中英语满分书信作文模板——感谢信

模板一:

Dear _________(收信人)

I am writing to express my sincere thanks for __________(感谢的原因).If it had not been for your assistance in ___________(对方给你的具体帮助),I fear that I would have been _______(没有对方帮助时的后果)。

Everyone agrees that it was you who __________(具体帮助的细节)。Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely

Li Ming

模板二:

Dear ________(收信人),I am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for ________(感谢的原因).I‟d like you to know how much your __________(对方的帮助)meant to me.I not only enjoyed __________(具体细节),but also __________(具体细节)

I repeat my thanks again for your _________(感谢原因).Please give my kind regards to your _______(问候对象).Yours truly

Li Ming

模板三: Dear

______ , ①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______(感谢的原因).②If it had not been for your assistance in ______(对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been ______(没有对方帮助时的后果).③Every one agrees that it was you who ______(给出细节).④Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 高中英语满分书信作文模板——询问信 Dear ______ , ①I am ______(自我介绍).②I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding ______(要询问的内容).③First of all, what are ______(第一个问题)? ④Secondly, when will ______(第二个问题)? ⑤Thirdly, is ______(第三个问题)? ⑥I would also like to inquire ______(将最重要的问题单独成段).⑦Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects? ⑧Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 高中英语满分书信作文模板——推荐信(求职/求学)Dear ______ , ①It affords me much pleasure to recommend ______(要推荐的人)to you.② During his/her graduate years he/she was my ______.③As his/her ______ I found him/her ______(介绍与此人的关系).④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding.⑤First, he/she had been and showed great talents in ______.⑥In addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality.⑦He has developed a strong sense of ______, and working with him is always.⑧I can state that he/she has all the qualities of being ______.(介绍此人的能力)

⑨Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart.⑩Should you favor him/her with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university?I am sure that his/her future conduct/academic work will prove worthy of your confidence.I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.Yours sincerely, 高中英语满分书信作文模板——祝贺信 Dear ______ , ①I have learned with delight that you ______(祝贺事由).②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______.③You must be ______.④And I feel very happy for you.⑤ ______(所取得的成绩)is quite exciting news!⑥I know this is surely owing to ______(被祝贺人过去的努力).⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______(被祝贺人的优点).⑧Kindly let me know when you ______(咨询对方何时有空).⑨I hope ______(表达自己的愿望).⑩My best wishes for your further success.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 开头句

论述的展开提出观点:

◆No one would deny that…… 没有人会否认......◆Now it is widely believed that…… 现在人们普遍认为,......◆When it comes to……, some think…… 当涉及到......,有些人认为......◆There is a public debate today that...有今天的公开辩论......◆A is a common way of……, but is it a wise one? A是一种常见的方式......,但它是一个明智的吗?

◆Recently the problem has been brought into focus that+同位语从句…… 最近带来的问题已经成为关注的焦点+同位语从句......◆Different people hold different opinions.不同的人持有不同意见。◆Opinions are pided.意见分歧。

◆People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards …… 人已经采取/采取了不同的的态度对......◆With the rapid improvement in……/growing awareness of……,more and more……

随着迅速改善....../意识不断增强......,越来越多......(e.g.:With the rapid improvement in building industry,more and more structures are being erected to set the people„s minds at ease.)

(在建筑行业的迅速改善,越来越多的结构正在架设,设置放心人心。)

◆ Recently,sth'/the problem of……has been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern……

近日,一些事情/问题......一直颇受关注/已成为市民关注的焦点...(e。g。Recently,the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments worldwide are committed to finding useful solutions.)(最近,失业问题已带来了这种颇受关注,世界各国政府都致力于找到有用的解决方案)

◆ In the past few years,there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in……

在过去几年中,一直存在着繁荣/急剧增长/下降了...(e。g。In the past ten years,there has been a sharp decline in the number of species。)在过去十年中,一直在物种的数量急剧下降。)

◆ Nowadays,more/most important/dangerous for our society is……

如今,越来越//我们的社会最重要的危险.....(e。g。Nowadays,most dangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles。)

如今,为我们的社会最危险的倾向照顾彼此在政界的优势。)

◆Now there is a growing awareness that+同位语从句...现在有越来越清楚地认识到,+同位语从句......◆It is time we explore the truth of...这是我们探索真理的......进一步提出观点:

Li Ming

◆…of them hold the opinion that ….(不同观点)

◆…of them are in favor of the idea that…(不同观点)

◆People who are for/against the idea think …(不同观点)

◆However, each coin has two sides.(不同观点)

◆Different from those…., …people think ….(不同观点)

◆On the other hand, … people object that(有些人反对道…).(不同观点)

◆A is but one of the many effects.Another is...◆ Besides, other reasons are...提出假想例子的方式:

◆Suppose that...◆Just imagine what would be like if...◆It is reasonable to expect...◆ It is not surprising that...举普通例子:

◆For example(instance),...◆...such as A,B,C and so on(so forth)

◆We can take something for example.◆A particular example for this is...引用:

◆One of the greatest early writers said...◆Knowledge is power, such is the remark of...◆As somebody once put it, “…”

◆.......How often we hear such words like these.提出原因:

◆There are many reasons for...◆Why....? For one thing,...;for another thing,…

◆The answer to this problem involves many factors.◆Most people would agree that...◆Some people may neglect that in fact...◆Others suggest that...◆ Part of the explanation is...进行对比: ◆The advantages for A outweigh the disadvantages of...◆Although A enjoys a distinct advantage...◆Indeed , A has more advantages than B when sth is concerned.◆ A maybe..., but it has the disadvantage that...承上启下:

◆To understand the truth of..., it is also important to see...◆A study of...will make this point clear 让步:

◆Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...◆ I do not deny that A has its own merits.结尾:

◆From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...◆In summary, it is wiser of somebody to do something

◆In short...注(图表型)

◆According to the information given in the table/graph,we can find that。。

◆As can be seen from the table/graph/figure,there is an obvious and rapid increase /decrease/decline/favorable(an unfavorable)change in。。

◆ As we can see from the table/graph/form /figure above, great changes have taken place in。。over the period of time from。。(年份)to。。(年份)

◆ The table/graph shows that there is a(n)declining/increasing trend of。。from。。(年份)to。。(年份)

◆ Anyone who takes a closer look at the data in the table/graph can be surprised to find that。。

第三篇:《赤壁》精析精练

《赤壁》精析精练

【精析】

杜牧于会昌二年(842)出任黄州刺史期间,曾游览黄州赤壁矶。站在滔滔东去的大江之滨,观“赤壁”而思史,回忆三国时代在鄂州赤壁矶所发生的吴蜀联军大败曹兵,从而奠定三国鼎立局面的“赤壁之战 ”。抚今追昔,兴之所至,挥笔写下了这著名的咏史诗。一、二句写作者在江边淤沙之中,诗人以一柄残戟置于诗端,引发后两句的历史议论,具有历史的纵深感。三、四句是说周瑜的获胜是偶然的机遇所致,仅凭一时侥幸并不是安邦定国之策。假若不是东风骤起,蜀军相助,周瑜的火攻之计大显神威,那么,东吴政权就必然为曹操所灭。这两句诗颇具史论意味,见解独到。诗人对周瑜的谐谑揶揄,暗示了对曹操的肯定。“东风不与周郎便,铜雀春深锁二乔。”这两句是诗人的议论,也是一种假设,如果天不作美,没有东风相助,那么周瑜就不会战败曹操,“二乔”就会成为曹操的战利品,深锁铜雀楼,供曹操享用。换言之,就是说当时从军事实力方面看,周瑜根本就不是曹操的敌手,之所以胜了曹操,那是因为老天作美,为周瑜提供了风向之便。是对周瑜的嘲讽,也是借以抒发个人才能得不到施展的感慨。

诗人即物感兴,托物咏史,点明赤壁之战关系到国家存亡,社稷安危;同时暗指自己胸怀大志不被重用。以小见大。

诗人杜牧的思维独到,见解新颖,从某种意义上来说,不但很有历史见地的,而且表现出“任何事物的发展变化都有其偶然性因素”这一深刻的哲理,表现出诗歌的立意美。

【精练】

1、初中三年中,我们学习了许多唐诗:有的咏史,有的咏物;有的描写清新美丽的山水 田园,有的刻划奇特壮美的塞外风光。上面这首诗属于哪一类?这类诗最突出的特点是什么? 答: 咏史诗。

《赤壁》精析精练 特点是咏史抒怀或借史实抒发作者情感。

2、试说说“东风不与周郎便,铜雀春深锁二乔”的深刻含义。

答:“这两句诗表达了作者对历史兴亡的慨叹,他认为历史上英雄的成功都有某种机遇”

或“只要有机遇,相信自己总会有作为,反映出作者抑郁不平的心境”。(答怀才不遇,有志不得伸等也可。)

3.前两句诗在全诗中的作用是什么?

答:

诗的前两句借一件古物来兴起对前朝人物和事件的慨叹。

或前两句写兴感之由。

4.若将“铜雀春深锁二乔”换成“国破家亡在此朝”好不好?为什么?

答:不好。以二乔的命运形象代表东吴的命运,更能体现诗句的形象性;能以小见大,感情表达更含蓄。

5、诗歌开头为什么从一把不起眼的折戟写起?

答:借一件古物兴起对历史的慨叹,小中见大。(折戟——小;赤壁之战——大;国家的命运——大)

6、试体会“东风不与周郎便,铜雀春深锁二乔”两句议论的妙处。

诗人并未从正面去评论战胜的原因,而是提出一个与事实相反的假设,不刮东风,不用火攻,周瑜就有可能战败。对于这个结局诗人没有直说,而是以两个美女象征国家命运,别出心裁。“二乔”并非普通女子,而是东吴国家命运的象征。

7、选出对这首诗理解有误的一项。()

A 该诗开头从一件不起眼的折戟写起,很自然的引起后文对历史的咏叹。B “自将磨洗认前朝”为后两句论史咏怀作铺垫,诗人心绪无法平静。

C 诗人一反传统看法,认为若不是东风给周瑜以方便,胜者就可能是曹操,历史将重写。D 在这首咏史诗中,作者关注的重点是赤壁之战,以两位美女的命运来反映赤壁之战对东吴政治军事形势的重大影响。

《赤壁》精析精练

7、D

《赤壁》精析精练

第四篇:高中英语书面表达[精华版]

高中英语书面表达精华版

1、(1)Our English Teacher(我的英语老师)We have a good English teacher whose name is Bruce.He comes from Britain and he is about forty years old.He is a tall and thin person, wearing a pair of glasses which makes him more like a gentleman.He is strict with us.He often makes full preparations for his class and corrects our homework carefully.His teaching style is very unique, because he is used to encouraging all of us to think by ourselves and study on our own.The relationship between Bruce and us is harmonious.He is so kind and friendly that every student likes him and respects him deeply.Our teacher is so excellent that we all love him very much.(2)Our English teacher, Bruce, is from Britain.He is forty years old or so.He is a tall and thin man, wearing a pair of glasses.Bruce is very strict with us.He always makes full preparations for his classes and corrects our homework carefully.His teaching style is quite different from that of other teachers.He always encourages all of us to think by ourselves and learn on our own.Now our ability to study independently has been greatly improved.Bruce has been getting along very well with all of us.He is so kind and friendly to us that we all love him and respect him deeply.2、Getting Up Early Is a Good Habit 以“早起是好习惯”为题写一篇议论文。

1.早起与健康;

2.早起与朗读;

3.早起与一天的工作。

Getting Up Early Is a Good Habit Getting up early is a good habit.It is of great importance to us all.First it helps to keep us healthy.If we can get up early,we can breathe fresh air,and do morning exercise,which builds our bodies.Second,it helps us to memorize what we have learned in class by reading aloud in the morning.Third,it can help us to find enough time to prepare our work of the day.In one word,if we form the good habit of getting up early every day,It will do us a lot of good.3、The Most Important Thing in the World Directions:

A)Title:The Most Important Thing in the World B)提示:有人认为,世界上最重要的东西是“钱”。许多人不同意这个看法。

请就这个问题谈谈你的意见。

The Most Important Thing in the World

In my opinion,the most important thing in the world is TIME.However long one may live,his life consists of a certain number of years,and a year has only12months,a month30days and one day24hours.Once you waste one hour,you can not get it back no matter how much you would pay for it.Even though you are the richest person in the world,you can not afford to waste your time,because it means that you are wasting your life.Even though you are the most powerful person in the world,one hour has60minutes for you just as for everyone else who struggles at the bottom of the society.Some people think that the most important thing in the world is money.In their opinion,if you have enough money,you will have everything you want.I would like to ask them a simple question:Can you buy time?

The only thing with which we can win more time is efficiency.If you work with high efficiency,you can do more in a certain period of time than other people.4、Walking is good to peoples health(步行有益健康)题目要求:写一篇 100 ~ 120 字的短文。说明步行有益健康。(内容自选)

范文:

Walking is good to people's health

As everyone knows,either fast walk or slow walk does good to the muscles(肌肉)and lungs of human.So people walk to build up their body,or to lose weight.But only some of them know that taking a walk every day is also good for protecting man's heart.Heart attack has become the first disease in the world because most people suffer from it.Taking a walk can improve the blood supply to our heart.If you try to walk as often as possible,you'll have a healthier heart.5、How to Make Friends(如何交朋友)How to Make Friends Everyone needs friends.A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happiness.But how can we make friends?

First, to make friends, you must be friendly to others.Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return.You should try to make a stranger feel at home wherever he happens to be.Think more of others than of yourself and never judge a person by his appearance and clothes.Second, friends should negotiate instead of quarrel.When you don't agree someone, please discuss with him.Finally, never believe in those who leave you when you are in trouble.And never leave your friend when he is in trouble.Remember, a friend in need is a friend indeed.Friends should be faithful to each other.So long as you can put your friend's interests in front of yours, you will have a lot of good friends.(162 words)

5、It is good to keep a diary in English(谈谈写英语日记的好处)题目要求:自拟题目写一篇 100 ~ 120 字的短文,谈谈写英语日记的好处。It is good to keep a diary in English

Keeping a diary in English does a great deal of good to my English study.Keeping a diary can help you review all the English knowledge you have learned.For example,you must know the correct spelling of each word needed in the diary; you must use the phrases correctly and choose the suitable sentence patterns,meanwhile,it is also necessary to use you knowledge of grammar in a correct way.Keeping a diary can help you not only to console your knowledge of English,but to form the habit of thinking in English.Practice makes perfect.By and by,your English writing will be greatly improved.Smoking and Health 6、4 月 7 日是世界禁烟日,为配合世界禁烟日活动,请根据下列提示,用英文写一篇 120 词左右的短文,以便刊登在“ CHINA DAILY ”上。

据报道,世界上有四分之一的人吸烟,而中国 15 岁以上的人,有 33.9% 的吸烟。不仅老人、青年抽,中学生也抽。

许多酗烟者明知吸烟有害于健康,但他们一次又一次的戒烟,就是戒不掉。

科学研究表明,吸烟不仅对吸烟者有害,而且对公众健康特别是对妇女、儿童健康危害更大。烟中的毒气是多种疾病的致病原因。现在许多国家禁止在影院、医院、车站等公共场所吸烟。

Smoking and Health

Today cigarette smoking is a widespread habit all over the world.It was reported recently that smokers make up one quarter of the world population,while in China,33.9 precent above the age of 15 are smokers.It's a very serious problem because not only the old,the youth,but also middle school students and girls have been engaged in smoking.Many heavy smokers say they cannot leave off,although they know smoking is harmful to their health and they have tried again and again to stop.Scientific research shows that smoking is not only harmful to smokers themselves,but also a threat to public health,especially to women and children.The poisonous gas from smoking is one of the major causes of many kinds of diseases.Therefore,many countries have worked out laws forbidding smokers to smoke in public places such as cinemas,hospitals and stations.7、体育运动能使我们身体健康

体育运动能使我们身体健康,工作学习精力充沛。大家都喜欢运动,但许多人不知如何正确锻炼,有时甚至出错。

你很幸运,上学后得到体育老师的正确指导,运动起来相当愉快,所以身体健康。你一年中几乎天天游泳,你还喜欢其他运动,并计划在今年秋季中学运动会上参加几个项目的比赛。

请根据以上内容用英语写一篇 80~120 词的短文,不要逐字翻译。

Sports keep us fit land fresh.Everybody likes to do one kind or another.But not all people know how to do them correctly and sometimes the advice we got may be wrong.I'm lucky,for since my first day at school I have always had a good teacher of physical education.I have always been very strong.I go swimming almost every day all the year round,of course I like many other sports too.I am thinking of taking part in a few items at the school sports meeting this autumn.8、Great Changes in My Hometown(家乡的变化)Great Changes in My Hometown

I used to live in a small town with trees all around.There was no tall building and the only street was narrow.Just outside the town,there was a river.You can see different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water.People here lived a simple life.Great changes have taken place here.You can see tall buildings,big department stores and factories everywhere.Different kinds of cars and buses are running in the big streets.But with the development of the industry,we have fewer trees.Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious.We must do something to stop pollution and make our town even more beautiful

9、The Sport I like Best

请以 The Sport I like Best 为题,写一篇 120 个词左右的议论文。

提示:

1.乒乓球不仅是一种运动而且是一门艺术。

2.有人认为打乒乓球不用花力气,我却不以为然„„

3.你经常发现球快速运动,运动员的动作很美。

4.虽然我打乒乓球不是很好,但对此颇感兴感。它能使我们强身健体,学会合作。

The Sport I like Best

Of all the sports,I like table-tennis best.I think it is not only a sport but also an art,because it is a game that needs strength and skill.Some people think that playing table-tennis needs little strength,but I don't think so.In playing table-tennis,we should judge the direction of the ball,and hit it back with great strength

so that we can win the game.At the same time we need to pick up the ball which falls to the ground.So after one game you will be very tired if you have tried your best.But,as a sport,I think it is more like an art.In the game,you can often find the ball moving quickly,and each of the players' movements is very beautiful.So I like the sport very much.Though I can't play it very well,I still show great interest in it.I think playing table-tennis can build our bodies,keep us healthy and train our brains.What's more,it an help us to learn to co-operate with each other.So I like it very much.10、Why we learn English(我们为什么学习英语)Why we learn English

The English language has become an international language because it is used by people in the most countries in the world now.In the open times, if you want to do business with foreigners, you must English because most of them speak and write in English, English is one of the working languages at international meetings,Today, most of valuable books are written inEnglish, If you know mush English, you will read newspapers and magazines in English and learn a lot of knowledge about interaction better.You also can do What you should do for the world peace.English is very important to us, but many students don't know why;hey should learn it.I hope that all the students should pay more attention to English study and use it freely.(133 words)

11、On the Internet 在日常生活中,因特网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据下表所给提示为某英文报写一篇题为On the Internet的征文稿。因特网的主要用途信息 看国内外新闻、获取其他信息通讯 发e-mail、打电话学习上网上学校、阅读各种书籍、自学外语娱乐 欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩棋牌游戏生活 购物注意: 1.征文稿必须包括表内所有信息,行文连贯通顺; 2.词数100-120词; 3.标题已给出,不计入总词数。On the Internet The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.(2分)On the net, we can learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well.(4分)We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls(4分), go to net school, read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves.(4分)Besides, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess or cards.(4分)On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them.(4分)In a word, the internet has made our life more colorful.12、城市生活的利与弊

某英文报社准备刊发一篇题为Living in the city的有关城市生活的利和弊的

文章,根据下面提示,写一篇词数为100左右的短文。Advantages Disadvantages 找工作容易生活消费高 交通便利 人口多,拥挤 有公园、饭店等休闲场所 空气污染、居住环境差要求:1.覆盖以上内容,可作适当发挥。2.词数100左右。Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.It is often easier to find work.There are always many choices of public transport.Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see.You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax.However, living in a city is often very expensive.You must find a well-paid job, otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do.What's more, the city is always crowded, noisy and dirty.It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside.13、关于学生看电视问题

你校课外活动小组将举行一次英语讨论会,讨论关于学生看电视的问题。请你用英语写一发言稿,谈谈你的看法,如看电视获取信息便捷,可以了解世界、学习知识,但看多了影响视力,耽误学习等。词数:100左右 开头已给出,不计入总词数。Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? I’m going to talk something about students watching TV.As we know, TV plays an important part in our daily life.It’s quicker and more convenient to get information from TV than from newspapers.Providing us with lively and interesting moving pictures, TV enables us not only to see what is happening in the world but to learn many things, including foreign languages.So it is not reasonable to forbid students to watch TV.But watching TV too long is not good.Sitting in front of TV all day does harm to our eyes and wastes our time for study.So we should take a correct attitude to students watching TV.Thank you for your listening.14、No Breakfast No Good(不吃早餐不好)

Now a lot of students go to school in a hurry so that they have no time to have breakfast.But not having breakfast will do harm to their health and their study.Having no breakfast will throw the normal work of our digestive system into confusion.As a result, it will do harm to our health.And at our age it is high time for us to grow up.So our bodies are in great need of energy.If we don't have breakfast,there will be not enough energy to supply.This may stunt our growth.What's more, it is a long period between breakfast and lunch.Breakfast provides us with the energy needed for the class.Without breakfast we cannot get along well with our classes.So for the sake of our health and our study, we must have breakfast.15、Getting up Early ts a Good Habit

Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times.Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and got up early, we would be vigorous the whole day.In fact, spring is the best season of a year;morning is the best time of a day.In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions.Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the day.If we do some exercises or only take a short walk in the morning, we will be full of energy the whole day.Also we will have enough time to prepare our work of the day if we get up early.In short, getting up early can do us a lot of good.Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it.We will certainly benefit a lot from it.16、运动对我们的健康有益(sports exercise health)Sports help everyone to keep healthy, happy, and efficient.So I pay special attention to games, especially table-tennis.Table tennis is my favorite game.I play it almost every day.Table-tennis is an ideal game us because it brings the whole body into action.It strengthens our muscles, expands our lungs, promotes the circulation of the blood, and causes a healthy action of the skin.Besides, it is very amusing and does not cost us much money.Table-tennis is very moderate.it is not so rough as football.It is an indoor game and can be played even on rainy days.Thus, it is my favorite kind of exercise.17、Should Students Make Friends On Line? Should students make friends on line?

Some people say yes.The Internet helps make many friends.Chatting on line, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely, and even get help with their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students should not.They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study.Besides, some students, get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other, things.As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.18、如何向网友介绍自己? Dear Tony,I am Li Hua, a boy of 16 from China.I know you want to make an e-pal with a Chinese on the Internet.I want to be your friend and wish to know more about the culture of the USA.I’m a sociable and supportive person who likes talking with people and helping with their problems.I’m good at English and I think we can communicate with each other by sending e-mails or chatting on the Internet.I like table tennis, enjoy singing and I’m crazy about popular music.At the same time, I like traveling around in my spare time.I hope you can come to visit China, and I’ll show you around many places of interest.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua

第五篇:2014江苏高考——书面表达指导(精讲精析)

书面表达解题指导

题型特点

《高中英语课程标准》对书面表达所要求达成的目标有着具体的描述,即:能比较详细和生动地用英语描述情景、态度或情感;能阐述自己的观点和评述他人的观点,文体恰当,用词准确;能用英文书写摘要、报告、通知和公务信函等;能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告;能在写作中做到文字通顺、格式正确。

书面表达命题形式分类

1.提纲式

提纲作文通常会罗列出一系列要点,要求考生根据所列要点来组织语言,按照一定的逻辑顺序正确地表达信息。

技巧:考生应按照所提供的提纲思路进行构思,并在提示上标出要点。要分析各点之间的逻辑关系,确定连接词、过渡句。要注意发挥自己的想象力,采用不同的表达方式,将要点完整地表达出来。

2.图画式

这种命题方式一般提供一副或多幅图画。这些图画通常寓意深刻,或批判某种现象,或褒扬好人好事,或提倡某种活动,或阐述某个事件。图画作文首先考查的是考生的理解能力,它要求考生尽快获得图画所传递的信息,从而根据所掌握的信息进行发挥创作。

技巧:考生应注意读懂图画及写作要求,分析写作的主题,并确定好文章的体裁及段落发展方式。如果画面内容是以描述为主,则按空间方式或时间先后顺序排列。如果图画内容是以解释说明为主,则不需要考生再将图中所看到的人或事本身进行详细描写,而是直接写出图画的意义。

该类型的作文给了考生一定的想象余地和发挥空间。同时,它也暗含了条件和限制,考生所有的叙述都不得脱离图画。考生可以增加细节,但是增加的细节只是基于写作的需要,不能违背图画的本意。

3.图表作文

图表作文的命题形式一般可分为表格、曲线图、柱形图和饼形图等。图表作文的体裁多为议论文或说明文,其内容大多涉及各种情况对比。

技巧:写此类作文时,要以题目中的要求为指导,仔细解读图表,准确把握图表传递的信息,归纳要点,将其扩展成文。

读写任务解题指导

读写任务写作是具有一定开放性的写作命题,其选材内容都是考生熟悉的题材,也就是贴近考生学习和生活的话题。读写任务侧重考查考生对所读材料的归纳概括能力和运用英语进行书面表达的能力,可以说这是一种考查阅读和写作的综合能力的试题。

【写作技巧】

材料概括部分

(一)写作步骤

1.寻找关键词。文章的关键词可结合写作内容中的“就……”主题发表自己的看法的要求来确定。如,要求你“以约120词讲述一次你(或你的朋友)想家的经历”,那么所阅读的文章的主题词就应是homesick。

2.确定主题句。文章的主题句首先可通过所给阅读材料的标题来确定,阅读材料的标题即是文章的论点或主题句。没有标题的文章,我们就尤应注意第一段(总起段)和最后一段(总结段),或每一段的第一句或第二句(总起句)和最后一句(总结句)。没有主题句的需要自己根据段落大意总结。

3.重构主题句。概括的主题句要归纳总结性强,能涵盖后面所有的支撑句的内容。4.重组支撑句。支撑句的意义在逻辑上受制于主题句,可以是补充过程或者提供证据。(二)写作方法

1.使用意义相同或相近的单词、短语或句式,或使用不同的句子结构表达同一意思,如改变语态、肯定变否定等,避免照搬原文句子。

2.概括议论文时则要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点。概括对方观点首先是要转换视角,即以“第三人称”或“无人称”来概括。

3.如果所给的阅读材料是一则故事,应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么,不能拖泥带水讲细节,而且最好讲出故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理。

4.如果是说明性或描述性短文,就必须用概括性的文字说明客观事物或现象。

特别提醒:不要照搬原文中的句子,而必须用自己的话来转述。概括可采用总→分的形式,即第一句话是主题句,清楚明白地告诉读者文章的主要内容(这句话举足轻重),后面的句子对主题句进行解释和支撑,主题之外的内容要毫不吝啬地予以删除。

陈述观点部分

(一)写作步骤

1.阅读短文,找出文章的内容要点。

(1)议论文:找出论点、论据和结论。其关键是找出主题句或结论句。若文中有一分为二的观点,两种观点都要概括,不要漏掉其中一方的观点。

(2)记叙文:找出时间(when),地点(where),人物(who),做了什么事(what),结果怎么样(how)等五要素。其中,最重要的要点是某人(who)做了何事(what)。若是夹叙夹议的文章,还要加上作者的看法、观点、经验或感悟。

(3)说明文和新闻报道:通常会有中心句(多在首段),写概要时注意要找出中心句,抓住关键词。对现象分析型说明文,要找出“现象”、“造成这种现象的原因”及“解决这种现象或问题的措施或建议”。

(4)发言稿:通常会很明确地表明观点或态度,写概要时要从发言者的言语中明确作者的态度,把握作者的写作目的。或先概括每段大意,进而归纳全文主旨。

2.过渡,引出自己的观点。写了摘要和过渡的话后,再引出自己的观点(赞成或反对)或引出类似的故事。

3.例证,论证自己的观点。

(1)议论文:在提出自己的观点后,就用具体的事例来论证自己的观点。

(2)记叙文:编写与阅读文章主题相同但情节不同的故事(亲身经历或虚构)。

4.结论,注意前后呼应。

5.润色,使其锦上添花。

一查人称是否符合要求;二查语法方面的问题,包括用词、时态等细节方面的错误,确保语言规范;三查逻辑关系,看前后观点是否一致;四查是否使用一些较为高级的句型、结构和词语,如主从复合句、倒装句型、非谓语动词结构、with 短语结构、恰当的连接词、短语动词等。

(二)写作方法

1.分析写作内容所给各要点的意义,确定自己的观点。观点一定要鲜明、突出、不可模棱两可。一般情况下,所要简述的观点和感想要合乎人们的共识,尽量做到合情合理,避免偏激。

2.掌握一定的技巧和方法,如:在内容上,要包含全部的提示要求;在语言表达上,要尽量使用高级词汇、短语、固定结构等,做到选词准确、用语规范、表达丰富多彩。

3.在谋篇布局上,做到思路清晰,段落分明,层次清楚,文章首尾呼应,段落衔接连贯。篇章结构严谨,一气呵成,注意分段成文,以便层次分明。

4.巧妙过渡和结尾,以起到妙笔生花、画龙点睛的作用。

。セ练就自我。ソ

阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Big or small, rejection affects us all.Harry Potter was rejected.So was The Twilight Saga.If authors J.K.Rowling and Stephenie Meyer hadn’t kept trying with publisher after publisher, we’d all have missed out on some great adventures.Rejection doesn’t have to be about the big thing like not getting into your top college, not making the team, or not getting asked to the prom(舞会).Everyday situations can lead to the feeling of rejection, too, like if your joke doesn’t get a laugh, if no one remembers to save you a seat at the lunch table, or if the person you really like talks to everyone but you.Feeling rejected is the opposite of feeling accepted.But being rejected(and we will all be at times)doesn’t mean someone isn’t liked, valued, or important.It just means that one time, in one situation, with one person, things didn’t work out.Rejection hurts.But it’s impossible to avoid it altogether.In fact, you don’t want to— people who become too afraid of rejection might hold back from going after something they want.Sure, they avoid rejection, but they’re also 100% guaranteed to miss out on what they want but won’t try for.【写作内容】

1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2.以约120个词就“How to deal with rejection”这一话题发表你的看法,内容包括:

(1)讲述一次你被拒绝的经历;

(2)你当时的感受;

(3)你认为应该如何正确面对拒绝。

【写作要求】

作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

【评分标准】

概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。

One possible version

Everyone has experiences of being rejected.Although rejection makes us feel hurt, we can never avoid it, or we’ll certainly miss out on things we want.Three years ago, I competed with my classmates for an important role in an English show to be held in my school.I was so eager to participate in it that I practiced hard in my spare time.However, I was turned down in the last round.I felt really disappointed and deeply hurt because my friends made it but I failed.As far as I’m concerned, if we can deal with rejection well, it will have a minimal effect on us.First, we should have a positive attitude toward rejection;that is to say, we ought to acknowledge it and keep reminding ourselves that rejection is always a possibility.Second, we can tell our family or friends what happened and how we feel about it or even cry if we want to — it’s a natural way to release our emotions.Last but not least, we should consider rejection as an opportunity for self-improvement and try our best to get accepted next time.

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