第一篇：托福综合独立写作提纲
Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries.Why do some students study abroad?
1, first of all, students want to absorb advanced knowledge
1.1 America owns many famous universities all over the world, which attract most overseas students to come.1.2 students in some developing countries,such as China, Indina, decide to study abroad.For example,(In china, a research shows that more and more students decide to study abroad for further education rather than receive education in the native college)
2, what’s more, studying abroad can broaden their horizen
2.1 studying abroad provides people more chances to have access to different cultures and scenes For example, different scenes,such as()can make people more enjoyable;
different cultures can give people flesh feeling
3, In addition, students do not like the education system in native country
3.1 every country has its education syste
m, it may not be suitable to every students
3.2 some students choose to study abroad to find a more benefiting system
For example, my roomate donnot like the grade-depend system in my country…..Playing computer games is a waste of time.Children should not be allowed to play them.1,First of all, playing computer games really took up lots of times of children.1.1 with the development of technoloy, computer has become more and more popular.1.2 lots of childrens obessed in the computer games
For example, my little brother…..2, However, we should not neglect the active part of the computer games which can help children relexed.2.1 children experience heavy burden of homework
2.2 playing computer games can help them relieve the pressure from study.For instance,3, Furthermore, some computer games can help children develop their intelletual.3.1 lots of computer games can cultivate quick reaction of children
3.2 they can learn the spirit of cooperation in some computer games
One research shows that people who like playing computer games in childish do a better in their future career than people who kept away from the computer games in the childish.In general, as parents or teachers, we should not restrict children to play computer games.We can control the time children spend on the computer games to make sure the computer games will not affect their academic performance.Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals.Do you agree or disagree with this point of view.1, First of all, with the increasing of world population, human need lots of land for farmland, housing and industry.Especially in the developing countries, the pursuit of more profits lead people to exploit more and more land for human using.For example, in China, …
2, However, we should not neglect the importance of saving land for endangered animals.2.1 Lot of animal habitat were taken up by human, which caused the decrease of animal.Take the
Siberian Tiger for example….2.2 meanwhile, animals are more vunerable than human to adapt the environment.Such as water pollution…..3, Furthermore, endangered animals play an important role ecosystem, which means we should try our best to protect them.3.1 Endangered animals can increase the persity of the species.3.2 Keep the balance of ecosystem
3.3 In addition ,they could provide lots of research value for human.Medicine …..In general, we should not obtain the short term benefit in the way of sacrificing the long term benefit.So I think saving land for endangered animals is as important as human needs.
第二篇：托福TOEFL写作提纲
托福写作提纲
1.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The world is changing fast, people are less happy.AGREE a.b.The rapidly changing environment is towards a deteriorating direction and people suffer from all kinds of pollution.Coming with the convenience which was brought by the advancement of technology, people’s life are at stake considering wars are always on edge.c.People’s relationship with each other is alienated by Internet, telecommunication and other kind of virtual interaction patterns.2.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important characteristic for politician is to accept responsibility for mistake.DISAGREE a.It is very important for politician to accept responsibility for mistake considering.Because only after recognized and took the responsibility of mistakes can politician make an effort to progress.b.The most important skill the politician should possess is communication skill.For one thing, it is important for politician to a good listener to public.c.Communication skill can help politician to express themselves better, consequently, having the policy or implementation carried out well.3.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should allow children to make and learn from their own mistakes.PARTIALLY AGREE a.b.It is very helpful to cultivate a child’s sense of independence by letting him/her dealing with their own mistake.Their own experience will be more impressive to them and is a better way to educate children than solely didactic instillation.c.Nevertheless, this process should be carefully moderated by parents because children are lack the ability to draw a clear line between right and wrong.And they cannot always recognize the seriousness of their mistakes.4.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays have no influence on decisions that determine the future of the society as a whole.DISAGREE a.b.Politically, youth play an increasingly crucial role in decision-making.Scientifically, youth’s interest of study will determine where humankind will head to in the future.Disease combat, climate change, outer space exploration.c.Culturally, what young people tend to believe and how young people decide to behave may become part of the trait of the nation.5.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important problem that affects the society today will be solved during my life time?(61)
DISAGREE a.It is true that some scientific problem will be taken under control.Flu=smallpox, HIV/AIDS, diabetes, energy efficiency.b.Many other scientific issues will not bear fruit if without hundreds of year’s efforts.Climate change, sending human to outer space.c.More issues are far from solely scientific.Cases like religious conflict, regional war, overpopulation and climate change cannot be solved in decades.6.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Although new technology and science will continue to advance and improve people’s life, the most significant improvement has been made.(33)DISAGREE a.Admittedly that many inventions and researches have benefit all human races and even change the way we live.Combustion engine, penicillin, rocket, Internet, electronic devices.b.There are advances in technology that will make a great difference within immediate future.Cure for diabetes, AIDS, and cancer.c.People will never know what is going to happen unless we have experienced it.Immigrate to the Mars maybe possible in the next millennium.7.Which is more important: having more facilities or hiring more teachers? TEACHERS ARE MORE IMPORTANT a.More teachers means each student will have more time discussing academic issues with teacher, and they will have appropriate teaching methods placed on them according teacher’s observation on student’s strength.b.More teacher employment ensures each teacher to have more time can free them from burdensome education duties.Hence they will have more time to devote into scientific research which will benefit more people than an elite few.c.However, facility is also important.Teacher also needs favorable facility to enhance their teaching and research.8.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about what is happening around the world, even if it does not affect your personal lives.AGREE a.Learning what is going on around the world help people keep pace of time.By doing this horizon will be broaden as a result.b.Different issues, even those seem to have completely no connection, may have possible implications with each other.By learning what is happening around the world will sometimes help people with their own career.c.It is also a recreational process to learn different thing going on around the globe.And knowledge or information acquired can be put into conversation to make communication not so tedious.9.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the ways that parents can help children be ready for adult life is to ask them to do a part-time job.PARTIALLY AGREE a.Doing a part-time job can help cultivate many favorable characteristics that are crucial for adult life.Independence, financial responsibility, time arrangement.b.Doing a part-time job can help children or teenagers form a new circle of friends and foster a sense of remaining friendship with different kind of people.c.However, negative impact cannot be neglected.Doing part-time job can make up too much time and prevent children to achieve a satisfactory academic performance.10.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One can learn a lot about the person from the type of friends the person has.AGREE a.Someone is the average of his/her friends combined.They share similar interest, having alike values, pursue in the same direction.b.c.Friends always share same financial ability and live on the similar living standard.Friends affect each other to a great extend.Peer pressure, behavior, trend.11.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It’s more important for the government to build new housing than preserve old and historical building.DISAGREE a.Building new house and demolishing the old ones will result in massive construction waste, which is detrimental to environment.b.Building new housing will cost a lot of money which could have been used on improving sanitary condition, providing food and clean water.Those issues are more urgent than improving housing condition.c.Some historical buildings have special meanings, they could have culture meaning and can stimulate tourist industry.12.When a new technological device become available.Some people buy it right away, while others will wait until many have acquired it.Which view do you agree with and explain why.BUY IT LATER a.b.c.New products may not be in perfect functional condition and have potential drawbacks not yet revealed.New products can be expensive, but later, price will goes down.Buy new products right away may lead to purchasing products sole out of impulse.Money can be wasted on unnecessary stuffs.13.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The friends that you can have fun with are more important than the friends that you can get help from.(34)
DISAGREE a.Friends share interest, so they will feel relieved and comfortable around each other.Accordingly, they are likely to have fun, and in favor of this recreational function.b.Fun can never be the core essence of friendship.Friends are made to support and help each other.They help each other to solve tough problems.c.Friendship is an avenue to broaden social network, introducing novel things into someone’s life and sharing pleasure and sorrow.14.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, students will learn much more effectively than ask them to do alone.AGREE a.Working together will help improve work efficiency and have a clearer and deeper understanding of a certain subject.Because everyone’s task is much focused.b.c.Working together can help students to learn from each other’s idea which lead them to be more all-rounded.Working together can bring new thoughts to a particular subject during brainstorm or other kind of communication.15.If one of your friends needs assistance in one of the courses you are good at, is it better for him to turn to you for help or ask a tutor? TURN TO ME a.b.I am more familiar to my friend than is the teacher or tutor, so I know how to talk or teach effectively.Schedule would be more flexible for me to help him, because many more students also need a tutor.So the tutor may not have enough time and effort to cover so many students.c.Friends will be mutually honest with each other.That is, I will point out the problem immediately while he will tell me what he does not understand without hesitation.Case would be much different considering the generation gap between student and tutor or teacher.16.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important investment for a company is to spend money to improve the work skills of its employees.(56)
DISAGREE a.Admittedly, it is very important to improve work skill of employees in order to guarantee a satisfactory quality of the products.b.c.Marketing is more important than improving work skills.Help promote products.Establishing an efficient and smooth manage and supply system is more prominent in increasing profit while cutting the costs.17.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to wait in patience than take action.(66)NEUTRAL a.They both have their merits.Patience can prevent people from impulsive action, which always lead to regrettable result.b.Patience can leave people enough time to get a clear view of the situation and prepare better for the coming assignment.c.Taking action in short time help people grasp once-or-never chances.Immediate reaction is in some cases necessary such as first aid and playing sports.18.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should do jobs that are similar to those of their parents.(71)PARTIALLY AGREE a.It is a beneficial choice to follow parent’s career.Children can get experience and advice from their parents.Thus, it will take less time for them to get familiar with their career.Also, they will make fewer mistakes considering the constructive suggestion made by their parents.b.c.Children can inherit their parents’ social relationship which is important in achieving successful career.However, children should have their own right to choose what to pursue as a career.Only in this way can they grow naturally and positively.19.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Automobile has dad greater effects on society than airplanes.DISAGREE a.b.c.Airplanes travel greater distance with an amazing speed compared to automobile.Airplanes can be used as weapon which dramatically changed the world.During WW2.Airplanes stimulate economy to a greater extent than automobile.Global business, oil consumption, airline company.20.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now.AGREE a.b.Privacy is basic human rights and all should be equally treated involving privacy issue.Celebrities are suffering from intrusion of privacy to a ridiculous extent.They should be protected by law and government.c.However, celebrities should burden more responsibilities than ordinary people.Because they have a big influence on society, so their privacy will never be as equal as the ordinary.21.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is much easier to achieve success with help from one’s family nowadays than before.AGREE a.b.More chances are available nowadays than before.Thus, help from family may be more effective than before.Families have accumulated more fortune than they did decades ago.Accordingly, family can provide better material support to its member.c.Communication technology narrowed the distance between people.Consequently, people will enjoy a broader range of social network, which will be of great significance in career.22.Some jobs can pay high salaries but require employees to leave their family and friends.Some jobs pay few salaries but allow employees staying with family and friend.Which job do you prefer? Why? PREFER HIGH SALARIES a.b.c.Technologies have made distance less a problem.Internet, airplane, high-speed rail.Higher salaries will guarantee the families a better living condition.A higher salary often suggests brighter working future.Thus, the career will be promising.23.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who cannot accept the criticism from others will not be successful at working in a group.AGREE a.Having an opening attitude towards criticism will smooth the team and avoid conflicts.This make the team focuses much on establishing a harmonious environment rather than the work itself.b.People rejecting criticism are confident, most of the case, even conceit.This will make them never a good listener or speaker.Thus, won help each other.c.They themselves will never improve through teamwork, and they are constrained in their own circle.Hard for them to think out of the box.24.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.DISAGREE-THEY ARE EQUALLY IMPORTANT AND MUTAULLY CONNECTED a.b.Job will provide sense of achievement, social status recognition and material satisfactory.Social life, in most cases, gives us recreation, share of interest and family.Interest club, hang out with friends, staying together with families.c.There is no clear line between job and social life.Co-workers can be good friends too.Families can start a business together, which attaches a working relationship over their kinship.25.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is impossible to be completely honest with your friend.AGREE a.Honesty is a universally valued characteristic.Removing people’s guard when converse.Making the world a better place to live.b.Though honest is a favorable virtue in most of the cases, it can to hurtful sometime.They have a bad voice when singing.c.Though morally required to help others, people are inclined to protect themselves from danger or trouble, and then considering other’s need and difficulty.It is not about education or society norms.People have this spontaneously.26.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are now easier to become educated than in the past.AGREE a.b.Most of the world is free from the gripping of war.And this enable them more time and chance to receive education.People’s awareness of the importance of technologies has significantly promoted education.Receiving education seems to be a promising way to guarantee a bright future.c.The advent of information age especially promoted by the pervasive usage of computer and internet made it possible for children even in a remote area have equal access to knowledge.27.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The advice from our grandparents has no use for their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 50 years.PARTIALLY AGREE a.b.It is true that some advice that are of no use because time has changed.Computer, new media.There are also some advice will give some useful information.How to make friends;deal with colleagues, academic experience.c.Some advice will always remain true regardless how time has changed.Stay honest, be diligent.28.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? College or university should offer more courses to prepare students for the future before they start working.AGREE a.Wide range knowledge will help students to be better-rounded.Broadening their horizons.Transferrable knowledge and skill.b.c.Help students find out what they really like to do and have a clearer career plan.Provided many courses available, students will gradually foster the ability to make reasonable arrangement and make the most of limited time, which are both crucial in career.29.Some people think university professor should spend more time doing research while others think they should spend more time educating students.What is your view? THEY ARE EQUALLY IMPORTANT FOR UNIVERSITY PROFESSORS a.Research can make real breakthrough in scientific realm.Cure for cancer, remarkable improvement in energy efficiency.b.c.Research will benefit the greatest number of people.Invention of penicillin, telephone.Professor should also propel the research into the next generation and motivate the young to pursue academic achievements.Thus, educating students are of equal importance.30.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience is usually not a good strategy.We should take action now rather than later.NEUTRAL d.They both have their merits.Patience can prevent people from impulsive action, which always lead to regrettable result.e.Patience can leave people enough time to get a clear view of the situation and prepare better for the coming assignment.f.Taking action in short time help people grasp once-or-never chances.Immediate reaction is in some cases necessary such as first aid and playing sports.31.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It’s more important for government to spend money to build art museums and music performance center than to building recreational facilities(such as swimming pool, playground).THEY ARE EQUALLY IMPORTANT a.Art museum and music center can help enhance public’s spiritual richness.Make public feel relaxed, promoted, and edified.b.Spiritual fulfillment and the rise in public aesthetic awareness will make a country or nation motivated to be innovative and diligent.c.Basic recreational facilities are of the same importance.They will ensure a healthy body and positive living attitude.32.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who go out from their village will be more successful and happier than people who stay in their village.DISAGREE a.Though geographic location is an important factor, its impact on success is underlined with the advent of information age.Internet, computer.b.c.Village also provides a lot of chance to make a big achievement.Tourist industry, local economic boom.Inpidual‘s happiness and success has little to do with where they are, but relevant to what they do, how they work, and who they are with.33.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? An efficient leader will always try to make everyone feel that he’s in part of decision making.DISAGREE a.It is every inpidual’s right to be informed about every decision the group or community are making.Because the decision should benefit the largest number of people in that community.b.Practice is not the same, making every inpidual part of decision-making, in some cases, will take forever to reach the final solution.c.Leader will consider in a long-term while most people prefer pursuing instant benefit and put longer interest at stake.34.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to relax by a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise.DISAGREE a.Reading book or watching movie can help those who are physically fatigued to relax.But it will involve intensive brain exercise.b.c.Reading book sometime consume no less energy than moderate physical exercise including jogging or walking.Physical exercise can lends mental relieve and be a great distraction if someone is under great working or studying pressure.Also, it can improve health which in turn guarantees a better physical condition to deal with more problems.Playing basketball, running, swimming.35.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.BEING A SOCIAL AND UNIQUE PERSON a.Being totally ordinary will prevent a person from standing out in a group of people.Thus, he/she will not have a good chance to be successful.b.Being dramatically eccentric will make someone isolated, and no one will make friends with him/her.Consequently, they are impossible to succeed because they lack other’s support.c.Man should be social, having a good social network.At the mean time, they need to have unique technique or skill that most people do not in order to be successful.
第三篇：2013托福独立作文题库
2013托福独立作文题库
2013.01.12
An effective leader tries to make others feel that they have been part of making a decision.2013.01.13
Do you think your should make sure others(your leader or colleagues)know your strength and accomplishment, because it is the only way to be successful?
2013.01.26
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people today are more likely to help others than young people were in the past.2013.01.27
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Your job has more effect on your happiness than your living environment does.2013.03.02
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In such a busy or crowded world, people shouldn't expect others to be polite to us.Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.2013.03.03
Do you agree or disagree：young people today are more likely to give time and effort to improving the world than young people were in the past.2013.03.16
Do you agree or disagree：Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries.2013.03.17
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best leaders are those who are willing to admit when they made bad decisions.2013.03.30
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Even though many people from different countries care about environment problems(pollution and global warming), the environmental situation can not be improved in the future.2013.04.14
Which of the following do you think contributes the most to an enjoyable vacation? Good Food，Good Location，Good Friends to travel with
2013.04.20
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Government should build more art museum or music performance than recreational facilities？
2013.05.11
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People often buy products not because they really need them but because other people have them.2013.05.18
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Government should support scientific research even though the research has no practical use.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.2013.05.26
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The personal and work-related challenges that young people face today are not very different from challenges that their parents and grandparents faced when they were young.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.2013.06.08
Do you agree or disagree with the statement? It is more fun to see a movie in a cinema(theater)with other people than see a movie at home.2013.06.15
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The way a person dresses is a good indication of his or her personality or character.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.2013.06.30(重复09.12.19NA）
Do you agree that people will feel happier if they have fewer possessions
2013.07.13
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Nowadays, neighbors depend on each other less than the people in the past
2013.07.14
Do you agree or disagree that in the past people were more friendly than they are today?
2013.07.20(重复09.08.07 NA)
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Parents spend too much time to help their children to determine their future;children should be allowed to make choices on their own.2013.07.21
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is impossible to always be honest to your friends.2013.08.17
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: University should spend more money supporting social activities rather than improving the food students eat.2013.08.24
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to have rules about the types of clothing that people are allowed to wear at work and at school.2013.08.25
1Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is less important to eat with families regularly nowadays.2Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Some scientists are responsible for the negative impacts that are made by their discoveries.2013.09.01
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only movies that can teach us something about real life is worth watching.2013.09.08
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To increase economic growth, the government should ignore environmental concerns.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.2013.09.14
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who keep their room neat and organized are more likely to be successful in the future.2013.09.28
When you are assigned an important presentation for work or school,you prefer to work on it right away so that you can work on it a little bit every day,or wait until you have a good idea about the presentation.2013.09.29
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
University students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study.2013.10.12Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to succeed, we should be more like others than be different from others.2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People who move out of native village or town are more successful and happier than people who stay in their native village or town.2013.10.20Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students can use their mobile phones to surf on the internet or listen to the music while doing their homework.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is always better to purchase in large stores than in several small shops that specialize in different items.2013.10.27
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?: Student activities do as much benefit as academic study.2013.11.02
Do you agree or disagree: it is better for people to have friends who are intelligent than to have friends who have a good sense of humor.2013.11.09
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Should parents spend more times playing games or doing sports with their children or should they spend more
time helping their children with their schoolwork?
2013.11.17
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People learn about one person from books and movies that person like
2013.11.23
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers’ performance should be evaluated by students rather than by other teachers.2013.11.24
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People live in the countryside are happier than those live in the city.2013.12.01
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: All school teachers should take courses every five years to update their knowledge.2013.12.07
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playground.2013.12.15
1Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People now show less respect to teachers than in the past.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is easier to maintain good health than in the past?
第四篇：托福 TPO31独立写作
托福 TPO31独立写作题目
Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.托福 TPO31 独立写作范文 ：
In modern society, there is no denying that our paces speed up.A small proportion of people who cannot keep up with this trend or resist the world for the fittest, may hold a viewpoint that a mutable society leads people to less satisfaction and mitigation of sense of happiness since such a world might cause the alienation between good fellows and contamination of our environment;however, in my view, it is not the case.As a matter of fact, in a world changing more rapidly, people tend to become satisfied much more easily.First illustration which can demonstrate my opinion can be the trail of technological development.In the past five decades, millions of new inventions had appeared, entering our daily life, making it much more convenient.To name a good example, in 1896,Benz assembled the first three-wheel car in the world.Though it brought accidents and mortality to the world, we cannot deny the enjoyment of ferocious speed brought by cars, which made our jaunt convenient.We can simply drop by a old friend 100 miles, a distance taking at least half day before, away in one hour.Another good instance is the invention of smart phone.in 1972, Martin, the chief engineer in Moto devised the first portable telephone.Then, this innovation revolutionized out life.Just simply imagine what our life looked like without cell phones: people could not keep contact with their friends and exigent messages might be blocked.Then in 2007, Steve Jobs brought iPhone with Facetime to the world.The most significant aspect of Facetime is that this app allows us to communicate with actual image, not just voices.Then, how can we state that modern society steals the sense of fraternity among people? Second demonstration which can help me develop my view that a rapidly changing society makes people more satisfied is the use of new energy resources.We may still remember the Great Smog, one of the gravest air pollution accidents in our history due to the heavily gathered inversion layer of sulfur dioxide originated with burning of coal in 1950s, London.People died of respiratory diseases after inhalation of poisonous air.How can they live happily in a world brimmed with pollutions? But nowadays, we have developed new energy resources to tackle this problem such as hydropower and wind power.To name an example, in 2007, nuclear power plants generate 14% of the total electricity of the US, thus saving tons of coals and reducing the level of inhalable particles.Recently, governments and organizations have taken measures to support researches of renewable resources and to find substitutes for fossil fuels.Natural reserves and sanctuaries are established, places of interest and spots are refurbished, and factories and manufacturers with pestilent exhaust are shut down.People therefore are provided with much more opportunities to relax by enjoying the beauty of nature.To draw a conclusion, in a world that is rapidly changing, we are offered a variety of brand-new experiences and highly evolved products, which make life much easier than before.We are in a world filled with convenience brought by high technologies that develop so fast.Then, how can we blame on the changing world while enjoying happiness and satisfactions originated from them?
第五篇：如何做托福综合写作中的独立写作
托福综合写作中的独立写作技巧
经常有学生抱怨独立写作很少能找到比较好的范文，去看美国本土的杂志又觉得文体和词句相对托福来说太难了，也不知道美国本土学生遇到托福这样的作文会如何写。其实聪明的学生往往会发现，真正美国人要求的300字以上的独立写作文章往往可以参考综合写作的阅读和听力文章的结构及论证方法，而不用舍近求远。
首先从文章结构上看
阅读文章一共4段，第1段是总的观点，2, 3, 4段都是分论点来论证总观点，ETS一直强调：”structure is fairly important, it’s like you see someone in distance what you see is a shape first”, 四段式或五段式（加一个结尾段）是理想的文章结构。对于到底几个分论点，ETS说”one is not enough, two is coincidental and three is convincing, four is fine”, 因此对分论点的要求是两个以上为佳。我们不难发现综合作文几乎都是3个分论点。
其次从段落细节上看
第1段是作者事先进行的对文章背景的介绍“教育家们已经意识到高中对于许多同学来说是一个很困难的经历。伴随着学术挑战带来的压力，高中同时也是一个产生社交，情感，甚至是财政压力的地方。”紧接着，作者便很顺当的表明了自己的观点“而减少这些非学术压力的有效方法之一就是通过要求学生穿校服使得学生们都穿相同的衣服。”从首段看出我们想要写好开头段的方法之一便是一定要让读者觉得我们观点的提出不是那么突兀的，而要用一个背景介绍来做很好的引入，背景是这个话题所产生的时间，地点或环境，对于“校服和非学术压力”而言背景的地点应该是在学校，作者定位在了高中，时间是目前很普遍，因此作者用了完成时，而环境则是目前学生的非学术压力有哪些：社交，情感，甚至是财政，这样背景就轻而易举地写好了，独立作文中好的背景介绍是吸引读者眼球，顺水推舟的提出观点的至关重要的一步。紧接着就是表明观点，作者往往会在引入完背景和话题后表明自己的态度，表明观点会有一些提醒读者“我要表达观点了”的信号词，如：the best way to,however/while/but, would benefit/harm;be beneficial/harmful to, be convincing, claim, far more(efficient/trustworthy), more likely等等，此文章中就用了“one of the effective way of decreasing this kind of non-academic stress is to require students to wear school uniforms”让读者很快捕捉到了作者的观点。在独立作文中清晰的表明观点是非常重要的。
第2, 3, 4段分别是3个分论点，首先分论点句的写法也是有讲究的，综合作文的分论点句往往在每段的开头就写出来了，让读者一目了然这段要写什么，如这篇文章的3个分论点句分别是每段的开头：“穿校服可以使高中花费减少”，“穿校服可以减少青少年的自卑感”，“穿校服会减少学生的欺凌行为”。
写分论点句的5个原则在于：1.分论点句要有关键词，对于此文章来说关键词是“穿校服”、“减少”，因此分论点句中会重复出现这几个词，但是又不能每句话都用“wearing the same school uniform”和“reduce”, 这时候就要求学生有同义词替换能力，作者用的其他几个同意替换词分别为“such a policy”, “a mandatory school-uniform policy”, “eliminate”, “decrease”, 很好地避开了词汇重复。2.分论点句要能论证总论点，也就是说分论点一定是能减少非学术压力的，那么“花费”、“自卑”、“欺凌”都是非学术压力，减少了这些，自然就证明了减少非学术压力了，因此很好的证明了总论点。3.分论点句不能太细节，不可太长，要有可拓展性。比如说“减少花费”完全可以问个为什么，如果论点句写“减少花费是由于可以通过穿校服来减少穿贵的流行的衣服来减少花费”这就太细节了，会使得在拓展的时候不知道要写什么了，也就是说你可以接下来用解释法，举例法等来细节展开这个笼统的句子，而不是说完一句分论点句，下面都没有可说的了。4.分论点句中不能包含2个论点，如把“减少花费和减少自卑感”放在一个论点句里来写就不合适，因为下面的论证就不知道是论证穿校服减少花费还是减少自卑感了，会显得混乱。5.段与段分论点与分论点之间也要有衔接词，对于这篇关于校服的综合作文，作者在写三个分论点时衔接的非常恰当，用了“one of the most obvious benefits......”, “furthermore.....also”, “finally....”, 使得读者觉得很有层次感。
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