第一篇:留学文书指导推荐信
Dear admissions committees professor,I amGrade 2008 counselor of electronic engineering college of Electronic Science and Technology University.Here I am honored to recommend XXX whom I am very proud of to your school to study.As the Grade 2008 counselor of electronic engineering college managing 1048 students,I am mainly responsible for the idealogical and political education and daily behavior management of the students for the whole four-year university life,and guide the students to take part in the postgraduate entrance exams and take up an occupation.For the four years,I have witnessed her growth from a green girl into a bold,strong,outstanding,innovational practitioner.On the job interview of the counsellorassistant in October 2008,XXX who first entered college performed high passion to the student work and made a deep impression on me.So,I immediately decided to hire her.And in the later contact, her hardwork and persistence are beyond my expectation.At the first, she is not a talent-excellent student.And at that time,she did not master the use of Office Excel, and the speed of the words input also was only 30 words per minute,so that the other counselors questioned her ability.She still teether insisted and said: “Give me some time, I will let you see my progress.” God helps those who help themselves.After a-week self-study and practice,her input speed increased to 120 words per minute, and she could quickly make perfect student data storage form.So,she wined affirmation and praise of the whole counselors' in the office.In the next work of the assistant,she learned in face of the difficulty to find the problem quickly and orderly,and put forward the ideas of the solution to the problem and organize everyone to do their own work in together.In 2010,after my commending,she became the assistant of the practic branch of teaching affairs department.However,she is not only outstanding in the office,but also in the competition field of literary sports.As the leading singer of the chorus in the school chorus competition,she got the first prize scholarship and defeated the 17 colleges.she is the champion of the three women basketball game of Electronic Science and Technology University and the third place in the women volleyball match.And she was successful to be the site commentator for Fifth National University Western Division of Freescale Smart Car Competition,and wined a round of applause for her humor explanation and rich experience.The most surprised me is her humanities concern to the society.She grew up in Shanxi province where is the coal mines province of China,and witnessed the frequent explosion accident of the mine.Growing in the strong culture of Yellow River,she profoundly understands how valuable of every fresh life.In the summer of 2009,she took part in the consolatory practice for the post-disaster reconstruction to help the victims to establish the confidence to live,and then she got the prize of the outstanding inpidual in the university summer practice.She also established a good interpersonal relationship network for her optimistic,humourous,honest personality.In addition,XXX also has made brilliant achievements in thory course,and in science and technology innovation.It is her struggling dearm of many years to enter the MIT for further study.She is also the one who has the comprehensive quality of thinking and operating which your school needs.So,I solemnly commend this student to your school.If you need more information about this student,please call me.Yours sincerely,YYY
第二篇:本科留学文书写作指导
本科留学文书写作指导
(一):CommonApp中的Essay
What---什么是Essays?
本科申请需要提交的全套申请材料里,Essays是个关键点,直接决定申请结果,同时也是学生最难把控的难点。不同高校要求的Essays各不相同。所以,在预备申请材料之前,就应该事先做好选校工作,确定目标学校,然后熟悉目标学校的全套申请表格和具体申请要求。为方便起见,美国越来越多的高校现在采用the Common Application(通用申请表,见附件1),同时各个学校会要求再提交一份Common Application Supplement(补充申请表,例如:附件2中的Yale Common Application Supplement);对于国际生,还要填写一份IS,即International Supplement(国际生补充申请表,见附件3)。IS也属于the Common Application的一部分。
The Common Application(通用申请表)里,有两个写作项:Short Answer(一篇不超过150词的短文)
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below or on an attached sheet(150 words or fewer).(简述一项课外活动或工作经历)Personal Essay(一篇不少于250词的作文)
Please write an essay(250 words minimum)on a topic of your choice or on one of the options listed below.Please indicate your topic by
checking the appropriate box.This personal essay helps us become
acquainted with you as a person and student, apart from courses, grades,test scores, and other objective data.It will also demonstrate your ability to organize your thoughts and express yourself.(除了课程、分数等客观数据以外,作文可以帮助我们更好地了解你作为一个学生和一个人的各个方面。它也能展示你组织思想和表达自己的能力。从以下题目中任选一题。)
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① Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.(评述一次重要的经历、成就、冒险或面临的道德困境,及其对你的影响。)
② Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.(讨论一个你个人、地区、国家或国际事件及其对你的重要性。)
③ Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.(说明一个曾经对你有重要影响的人,并描述他/她对你产生了怎样的影响。)④ Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work(as in art, music, science, etc.)that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.(描述一个曾经对你产生过重要影响的小说人物、历史人物、或者艺术、音乐、科学等创作性作品。同时描述他/她对你产生了怎样的影响。)
⑤ A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and life
experiences adds much to the educational mix.Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the persity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of persity to you.(学术爱好、个人观点、生活经验都能有效增加教育群体多样性。说明你的个人背景,描述一个个人经验,由此说明你能增添大学的多样性,或者说明一个文化多样性的校园对你的重要性。)
⑥ Topic of your choice.(自选话题)
第三篇:留学文书汇总
益博国际
邀请信
范例1.XXX
Invites
XXX
To an/a
XXX
At 时间
Telephone:
Fax:
Email:
范例2
Date
Dear XXX,It’s my pleasure to accept your kind invitation to participate in ……./Please accept my sincere thanks for your kind invitation.Unfortunately my schedule will not allow me to ….Thank you very much for your invitation.I am looking forward to meeting you./Thank you again for your invitation.Yours sincerely,XXX
推荐信
Date
Dear XXX,I take pleasure in recommending XXX to you.I highly recommend that XXX be given the opportunity to study at your university.Yours sincerely,XXX
介绍信
This is to introduce XXX
We should be highly appreciative if you could introduce him to reliable manufacturers and give XXX your help and advice.求职信
地址
时间
地址
收信人
Dear XXX,I’m writing to you about the vacant position in your company as XXX.…..The details of my education are given in the enclosed resume.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,XXX
祝贺信&感谢信:
1.Allow me to convey my sincere congratulations on your XXX
2.Thank you for your XXX
电子邮件
From:
To:
Cc:
Subject:
Attachments:
Date:
通知
Notice
海报
Poster
Film/…
Name:
Time:
Place:
Fare
其它事项
寻物启事
Lost and Found
便条
时间
Dear XXX,……
Yours sincerely,XXX
备忘录
Memo
From:
To:
Subject:
Date:
正文
演讲词
称呼
内容
表示感谢
名片
公司名称
姓名
职称/头衔
Address:
Tel:
E-mail:
Website:
产品说明/厂家介绍书
About XXX
介绍。。
使用说明:Directions for …
Features:
Directions:
Cautions:
文化广告(以傲慢与偏见为例)
Pride & Prejudice
Director:
Writer:
Release date:
Genre: Romance
介绍
招聘广告
招聘职位
Responsibility
Requirements:
Address:
Fax:
E-mail:
产品广告
根据内容逐步介绍,一般需给出有关网站,产品宣传语言等。
简历
Resume
Name:
Address:
Sex: Male/Female
Date of birth:
Place of birth:
Marital Status: Married/Single/Divorced
Job Objective:
Health:
Language proficiency
Educational Record:
Employment History:
表格类短语
Surname/姓
Given Name/名
Nationality(Region)Macao/澳门
Purpose of the Trip/旅游目的: office/官方Business/商务Leisure/休闲
Immigration/移民Visiting friends or relatives/探亲访友 Return residents/回国居 民
Flight No./Vehicle No./Vessel Name: 航班号/车号/轮船名
Number of Persons under the age of 16 traveling with you /同行16周岁以下的人数 I am taking out of China’s Customs territory/我从中国领土带出了…
Passengers who are taking any articles included in items 9-14 shall fill out this form in detail./ 携带9-14条中规定物品的乘客,请填写以下表格。
Description: 描述
Quantity: 数量
Value: 价值
Type/model: 型号
Customs remarks: 海关评价
Passenger’s signature: 乘客签字
Occupation: 职业
Spouse’s name: 配偶姓名
Contact person: 联系人
调查表
Reference check for instructional staff
Instructions to interviewer:
Check-out date:/入住时间
Check out date:/离店时间
合同/contract
借据/I.O.U
时间
…borrowed from….东西 and will return 时间
借方签名
收据/receipt
时间
Received from ….东西
收方签名
请假条
时间
I’d like to ask for a sick leave of 几天.I hope you could grant the leave.I will make it up/resume my work when I come back.请假人
第四篇:出国留学长篇文书中英文指导
出国留学长篇文书中英文指导
Common 长篇
1.Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.描述你的一次有意义的经历、成就、完成的任务或者面对的一次道德困境。
2.Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.选择一个关于个人的、本土的、国家的或者国际的议题讨论,并说明这个问题对你的重要性。
3.Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.描述一个对你产生重要影响的人。
4.Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work(as in art, music, science, etc.)that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.选择一个小说人物、历史人物或者一件作品(艺术、音乐、科学等作品),对它进行描述并且 说明它对你的重要影响以及原因。
5.Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the persity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of persity to you.说明你的个人背景、经历对大学可能带来的影响,或者阐述这种多样性对你的重要性。写作难点:如何选题。
2、4题是议论文;2题容易偏题;
1、5题相对易写,但也要做到出彩、不落俗套。
写作要领: 反映一个中学生从不成熟到逐渐成熟的成长心路。
【精彩例文】
Becoming a Real Man
My mother said she never thought about me as an athlete.I did not, either.When I was little, I often got sick and would stay inside the house instead of playing wildly with other boys.I,the “science guy,” spent much time watching science programs and enjoyed being set as a good example in my neighborhood.Then, my parents brought me to Macau when I was fourteen.We walked on the streets of Macau and happened to see a Manchester United Football Club store.About twenty Manchester fans were wearing the red team shirt and were watching a game on TV cheering for their team.I stopped and stared at those red spots that were jumping, yelling and smiling at one another, and I could feel the passionate flame hidden in my body was kindled;I belonged there.Turning to my mother, I asked for a red Manchester United shirt with my name on it.She was stunned by my request and warned me that I couldn' t have anything else if she bought me this one.Without any hesitation, I agreed, and this red shirt was the only thing I brought from Macau.Back at school, I immediately joined the football club.Everyday I spent there made me feel lucky that I had the chance to get to know this wonderful sport.Pass, shoot, and gain a point;it was great to freely run across the sports field and I felt like a hero.Unbelievably, half a year later, the “science guy” became the assistant-coach of our school women ’ s football team.Proving my talents in athletics, I was selected to take part in the sports meets in my last year in the junior high school.Enrolled in two games, I aspired to win two gold medals for my class.I did win the long jump, but I sprained my ankle in my last jump.My head-teacher asked me to give up the 4* 100m relay race the next day;however, seeing there was no replacement for me, I decided to take part in the competition anyway.I was the last runner of my team, and by the time I got the stick from the third runner, our team was almost 300m behind.The idea of “game over” flashed in my head but then smashed by me.My classmates watching the game beside the track used all their strength to shout, “Run,YZ!Get past them!You can do this!Come on!”
“Yes, I can do this.I won’ t let you down,” I said to myself.Bearing the pain from my ankle, I tried my best to pass the students ahead of me one by one.Six, five, four, three, two, one left, the whole class ran to me and held me up!The silver medal that hung from my neck shined even over the golden one.The green and red sports field left me with great pleasure.The days I spent with it were rewarded with strength, determination and responsibility, which helped me grow up into a real man.【成为一个真正的男人】
妈妈说她从没想到我会成为一个运动员。我也没想到。当我很小的时候,我经常生病,因此我只能待在屋子里,不能和其他男孩子一块疯玩。我成了一个“科学男孩”,花很长时间去看科学节目,乐于被街坊四邻当作好孩子的典型。
在我14岁的时候,爸爸妈妈带我去澳门玩。我们走在澳门的街道上,碰巧看到了一家英国曼联足球俱乐部的商店。大概20个曼联球迷穿着红色的队服,一边观看球赛,一边为他们的球队加油。我停下脚步。那些跳着、叫着、大叫着的红点在我面前晃动,让我感受到自己体内一直被压抑的热情被点燃了。我属于他们。我向妈妈央求要买一件印有我名字的曼联队服。妈妈对我说如果我买了这件队服就不能再买其他东西了。我毫不犹豫地答应了,这件红色的队服就是我从澳门买回的唯一东西。
回到学校,我马上加入了足球俱乐部。在那里度过的每一天都让我感到自己很幸运能够有机会了解这项精彩的运动。传球,射门,得分,自由地跑遍全场的感觉太棒了,让我感觉自己像是个英雄。半年 之后,那个曾经的“科学男孩”竟然变成了学校女子足球队的助理教练。
我的表现证明了我的运动天分,在初中的最后一年,我被选中参加运动会。我报了两个项目,信心十足地要为我的班级赢得两枚金牌。我赢得了跳远比赛的第一名,我却在最后一跳的时候扭到了脚踝。班主任让我放弃第二天的4*100米接力比赛,然而在得知没有人可以替代我参赛的消息时,我决定依 然参加比赛。我是全队的最后一棒,当我从第三棒手中接过接力棒的时候,我们队落后其他队伍300米远。“追不上了”这几个字在我脑中一闪而过,但立刻被我击碎了。观看比赛的同学们用尽全身力气为我加油,“加油啊,YZ!超过他们!你能超过他们!加油!”
“对,我能超过他们。我不会让你们失望的。”我对自己说。尽管脚踝疼痛难忍,我依然用尽全力 超越我前面的每个对手。六个,五个,四个,三个,两个,还剩一个,全班同学跑向我把我举了起来!我胸前的银牌比那枚金牌更加璀璨。
红绿色交织的运动场给我带来了无比的欢乐。在这里度过的日子让我收获了力量,坚定的信念和责任感,它帮助我成长成一个真正的男人。
【佳文精评】
这是一篇读来感觉很“man”的文章。文章开始叙述了作者从一个“科学男孩”向一个运动男孩转变的机缘巧合。通过对热情的曼联球迷的细致描写,读者仿佛也感受到了体内潜藏的激情被点 燃。然而难能可贵的是,作者与运动的结缘并没有停留在激情层面。通过第二个参加运动会的实例,作者进一步告诉读者运动不仅让作者找到了人生的乐趣,也获得了
难得的成长。文章末段作者用三个词概括了这种成长--strength(力量),determination(坚定的信念),responsibility(责任感),这也正是一个男孩成长为一个男人所应该具备的品格。苹果公司创始人史蒂夫•乔布斯曾经说过“当你向前看,你无法预见所有的点能否连成线;而当你向后看,你会发现也许所有的点已经 连成了线。”写文章实际上就是一个向后看的过程,将所有的点连成一条主线就会是一篇精彩的文章,一个精彩的成长故事。
第五篇:出国留学长篇文书翻译指导篇
出国留学长篇文书翻译指导篇:羽毛球
Common 长篇
1.Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.描述你的一次有意义的经历、成就、完成的任务或者面对的一次道德困境。
2.Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.选择一个关于个人的、本土的、国家的或者国际的议题讨论,并说明这个问题对你的重要性。
3.Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.描述一个对你产生重要影响的人。
4.Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work(as in art, music, science, etc.)that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.选择一个小说人物、历史人物或者一件作品(艺术、音乐、科学等作品),对它进行描述并且 说明它对你的重要影响以及原因。
5.Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the persity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of persity to you.说明你的个人背景、经历对大学可能带来的影响,或者阐述这种多样性对你的重要性。写作难点:如何选题。
2、4题是议论文;2题容易偏题;
1、5题相对易写,但也要做到出彩、不落俗套。
写作要领: 反映一个中学生从不成熟到逐渐成熟的成长心路。
【精彩例文】
Ideas are extremely important, especially those that are creative, original and bold.After my experience in organizing a badminton tournament at school, however, I realized that turning an idea into reality is challenging but even more meaningful than the idea itself.An idea is not the end of a story;it should also include a lot of hard work to put the idea into practice.Badminton is one of my favorite sports that I,ve been playing since 8-years-old.However, after entering high school, I could hardly find time to play badminton due to the heavy academic load, not to mention the lack of a game court.Then in the second semester of the tenth grade, a new stadium was constructed at our school which got me excited with the idea of a badminton match on campus.I told people about my idea and we all dreamed about it.But six months passed and nothing happened.Finally, I couldn’ t wait anymore;my friends and I will make a badminton tournament ourselves.With the support of many students, I went to ask for permission from our principal.Rather than objecting to my ideas, he came up with a series of questions about financial support, qualified referees, and safety issues.These were really beyond my expectations that I had not planned for.Motivated by the desire for the games, I faced the challenge.With the guidance of my father, I came to understand that enthusiasm alone could not convince the principal to allow the games;I needed to come up with a plan.So, I searched the Internet and consulted teachers, and finally worked out a plan that I presented to the principal.This time I was fully prepared to answer any questions the principal shot at me.After a few rounds, I got my answer: YES.With the permission, my friends and I began to prepare the badminton games with every single detail: registering players, preparing the court, making the rules, training referees and so forth.Unfortunately, winning the principle ’ s favor was not the only obstacle.Since it was a school wide tournament, it was very time consuming.A few months before the games, some of my teammates dropped out because they could not balance their academic studies.So at the most crucial moment, I called together my fellow teammates and told them frankly that I could not follow through with the tournament without their support.I proposed that we should setup a study partnership to find time to study together as well as continue to prepare for the game to free our parents from their concerns.My teammates agreed, and we encouraged one another that we could do it.Finally, after so many obstacles, the tournament finally took place and over one hundred students from all four grades participated.This event taught me the skills needed to organize a large event in which every little step and detail counted.Having an imaginative idea is a valuable characteristic, but critical thinking and practical skills are also indispensable to success.Without the collective effort of my great team, however, my idea of the badminton tournament never would have come alive.Now, a badminton club is set up and is in preparation for next year’ s tournament.Perhaps I should pass on some tips to the new leader of the club.【羽毛球】
想法是非常重要的,特别是那些有创意的、全新的、大胆的想法。然而,当我在学校组织了一次羽毛球联赛之后,我意识到将想法变为现实的过程可能会遇到很多困难,而这也比想法本身更有意义。想法不是故事的结局,故事的结局应该是通过艰苦的努力将想法实现。羽毛球是我最喜欢的运动之一。从八岁开始,我就练习打羽毛球。然而,上了高中之后,我发现繁重的课业负担让我很难找到时间打羽毛球,而且学校里也缺少打羽毛球的场地。于是在10年级的第二学期,当我看到学校建成了一座新体育馆,我的脑海中涌现出了在学校举办一场羽毛球比赛的想法。我把 这个想法告诉了很多同学,我们都很期待。然而6个月过去了,什么进展也没有。
终于,我坐不住了。我和朋友们决定自己动手筹办一次羽毛球比赛。在很多同学的支持下,我向校长 提出了举办羽毛球比赛的想法,请求他的允许。他没有拒绝我,但是却提出了一连串的问题:经济支持,从哪里找到合格的裁判员以及安全问题等等。我从没想到校长会问我这些问题,我一点准备也没有。
想要举办羽毛球比赛的愿望让我决定接受挑战。在爸爸的指导下,我开始明白单凭热情是不能说服校长允许举行这次比赛的。我需要拿出一个方案来。所以,我在网上进行搜索,并且咨询了老师,终于 提出了一个方案。我把方案拿给校长看,这次我有了充分的准备迎接校长的每个问题。
经过了几个回合,我得到了校长的答案:同意!
得到了校长的允许,我和朋友开始着手准备每个细节:登记运动员,准备场地,制定规则,培训裁判员等等。不幸的是,获得校长的首肯并不是我们遇到的唯一问题。
因为这是一次全校性的比赛,准备起来非常耗费时间。比赛前的几个月,我的几个团队成员相继退出,因为他们没办法平衡繁重的学习负担和工作压力。在这个关键的时刻,我把所有的团队成员召集起 来,诚恳地告诉他们如果没有他们的帮助,我无法一个人举办这次
比赛。我提议我们建立一个固定的合作制度,一起学习,一起筹备比赛,这样让我的父母不再担心。我的队友们同意了,我们相互鼓励,坚信我们一定可以做到。
终于,克服那么多的困难后,联赛终于开始了,四个年级总共超过100名学生参加了这次比赛。这 次经历教会了我举办一场大型活动所需的技能,让我懂得每一步、每一个细节都需要被仔细考虑。有一个充满想象力的想法是很可贵的,但是批判性思维和实践能力也是成功必不可少的因素。如果没有团队合作,我举办羽毛球比赛的想法可能永远不会成为现实。现在,我们建立了一个羽毛球俱乐部,并且正 在筹备明年的比赛。或许我可以给俱乐部的下一任主席留下一些建议。
【佳文精评】
不以情动人而以理服人,读完这篇文章大概会有这样的感觉。想法和实践孰轻孰重一直是人们在探讨的问题,作者则结合自己的亲身经历给出他的答案——有想法固然可贵,但实践能力却是获得成功所不必不可少的。文章第一句话就点明了这一点,随后通过详述自己举办羽毛球比赛的细节 来证明这个观点。从只有一个模糊的概念而回答不上校长的任何一个问题到拿出细致的方案并且克服所有的困难,作者娓娓道来,将这个大家原本就很熟悉的道理讲得生动翔实,令人信服。无论是以情动人,还是以理服人,都能够成就一篇佳作。