第一篇：大学英语作文修改
I stand on the corridor of Classroom building when I finish my class.In my left, I can see many classrooms revolve around a flower-bed.Green plants are clustered together.In my right, I can see the house locate in the trees in the end of clearing.I can touch black baluste, tough wall and heavy bag of mine.I can hear the sound produce by busily footsteps and pleasant whispe.A gust of spiriting wind rush at my face.A tempting frangrance of food follow this wind came to my nose.I satisfy that like to have a big meal in my mouth.I stand on the corridor of Classroom building when I finish my class.In(on)my left, I can see many classrooms revolve around a flower-bed.Green plants are clustered together.In(on)my right, I can see the house located in the trees in the end of clearing.I can touch black baluster(?), tough wall and(a)heavy bag of mine.I can hear the sound produce by busily(busy)footsteps and
pleasant whisper(s).A gust of spiriting(spirited?)wind rush(s)at my face.A tempting frangrance of food follow(ing)this wind came(comes)to my
nose.(To satisfy my hunger I would like to have…)I satisfy that like to have a big meal in my mouth.Xiao Chen, good work :)!Nice adjectives.Baluster?Check another dictionary for that…
Next week, a little longer please.Around 200 works is good.
第二篇：英语作文修改
A Trip to the Zoo孩子的原稿：
Yesterday way Sunday and it was a fine day.So I take a trip to the zoo.I went there by bus, I get there at 8:00 am.There are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, Others watched the bids,I saw many animals and I tool many phtos.That’s a interesting trip.I’ll never forget it.That’smy trip.修改后：
It was a sunny SundayAfter a quick breakfast , I couldn’t wait to get on the bus.This is my first time to enjoy a trip alone.Varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo!
As soon as I got there,I was attracted at once.Monkeys were climbing in the tree happily.Sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands.How naughty they were!What’s more, I was also intersted in the tigers.They are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy.Animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world.we are family.I t came to my mind immiediatly.Anyway, I had an interesting trip today.It gave me a deep impression, I’ll never forget it.My favourite season
孩子的原稿：
There are four seasons in a year.And my favourite season is summer.Although it’s very hot.I still love it.Because I can swim in the sea.And lie in sun.That’s very comfortable.And I also can eat some Icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer.That’svery intersting.So I love summer.That’s my favourite season.修改后
My favourite season
As is all know , there are four seasons.Speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot.Many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, Lying on the beach… How comfortable!More importantlyI can eat delicious Icecream.Of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside.And I’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father.In a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness.
第三篇：大学英语演讲比赛活动策划书(修改
2012年湖南科技大学大学英语演讲比赛策划书(修改)
演讲主题： Change and Challenge
目的：为激发学生学习英语的积极性，培养学生的竞争意识和创新精神，提高学生的英语口语水平及演讲水平，迎接湖南省普通高等学校第十八届大学生英语演讲比赛，学校决定举办此次比赛。
比赛内容与形式：
1、命题演讲：选手按照规定的题目进行3分钟（正负15秒）命题演讲。
2、即兴演讲：选手按照比赛当场抽取的题目进行2分钟（正负15秒）即兴演讲。即兴演讲的题目在第一位选手登台比赛前抽取。
主办单位：湖南科技大学
承办单位：湖南科技大学外国语学院
● 赛前准备工作：
一、比赛流程制定以及通知
1、确定比赛时间：
5月12日13:00—18:30（具体时间安排附后）
地点：南校区俱乐部
2、参赛人数要求以及时间限制：每个学院选派3名选手参赛；每位选手比赛时间限定在6分钟内。
3、制定评分细则；印刷评分表（10份，由英语俱乐部负责）。
4、奖项设置：
比赛结果：按竞赛组设立团体奖与个人奖两个类别，每个类别再分设一等、二等、三等、优胜四个等级。（团体比赛与个人比赛一并进行，参赛选手的得分既计入团体总分，又作为个人参赛得分）。
团体奖：一等奖 1个；二等奖 2个；三等奖 3个；（颁发锦旗）
个人奖：一等奖3名；二等奖5名；三等奖8名；（颁发证书）
（暂定）
奖励形式：团体奖颁发锦旗或获奖证书；个人奖分别颁发获奖证书。
（锦旗和证书购买由英语俱乐部负责，由外国语学院支付费用）
二：宣传及准备工作
由英语俱乐部负责制作并张贴海报，及评委（及嘉宾）牌的制作。
确定评委：曾艳钰、张瑞鸿、徐李洁、刘金明、周启强、周文革、CAROLINE
报名工作：各参赛者需在5月4日前报名，由办公室（陶海霞）负责统计收集稿件（命题演讲稿每人交打印件12份（稿件上不得有任何特殊标记）及选手资料。
主持人：
主持人发言稿审查，并串词，由胡金梅、陈颖 负责。
选手集合并走台，由英语俱乐部负责
活动当天人员安排（演讲比赛决赛）
1、设分数统计员4名（由英语俱乐部负责）：统计所有评委分数；负责收、送评委打分等。
2、场地布置：由英语俱乐部负责。（制作2条横幅，到团委借投影仪，摆放评委、嘉宾牌等工作）
3、音响：检查电脑设备、准备麦克风及颁奖音乐。（需5支，主持人4支，演讲台上固定1支，），由英语俱乐部负责外租。
4、组织观众：每学院须派50人到场，由英语俱乐部负责通知并安排到场人员座位。
5、计时：由周利华、易爱平负责。
6、确定侯赛和备赛地点，组织选手侯赛，由左迎春和2位英语俱乐部成员负责，带选手进备赛室，由林小平负责，引导选手上台比赛，由礼仪小姐负责。
7、即兴演讲题目抽签，由 申莉 负责。请准备2个题目，由曾院长现场抽取
8、照相摄影：由外国语学院负责费用开支（请提前跟影神预约，只部分录象，不全程录）。
9、邀请并接待来宾：曹晨忠校长，黄玲娟处长；评委
10、到场人员签到：由英语俱乐部负责。
11、撰写通讯及总结：由英语俱乐部负责。
比赛过程
一、宣布会场纪律
二、主持人宣布演讲比赛正式开始。
三、介绍来宾,评委。
四、领导讲话
五、教务处领导介绍比赛背景，开展此次活动的目的。
六、演讲比赛开始。
七、公布上一选手分数，介绍下一位选手。
八、全部选手比赛完毕,主持人小结。
九、评委代表（CAROLINE）点评。
十、宣布名次。
十一、为获奖选手颁奖。
十二、宣布比赛结束。
注意事项：
1、做好比赛现场的秩序维持和定点工作；
2、工作人员之间积极主动加强沟通合作，随时做好应变突发情况的工作准备；
3、通知参赛选手应提前十五分钟到达现场，在比赛过程中注意把握好时间；
4、限时环节以秒表计算严格执行，主持人介绍嘉宾以及各环节衔接时尽量节省时间。
赛后事宜：清理场地，由英语俱乐部负责。
比赛时间安排：
1、主持人致开场白及介绍出席本次比赛的评委、嘉宾和各项比赛的评分标准（3分钟）
2、主持人介绍各个环节的比赛规则（2分钟)
3、命题演讲，选手正式比赛（3分钟/人）（合计 18*3*3=1624、即兴演讲（2分钟演讲/人）（合计108分钟）
5、评委老师商定评分范围（5分钟）
6、评委老师中场休息（10分钟）
7、评委老师点评（10分钟）
8、主持人公布最终比赛结果和各项奖项（2分钟）
9、本次比赛的颁奖仪式及合照留念（5分钟）
10、更换比赛选手（合计30分钟）
初步预计本次比赛总时间为：337分钟
请作详细的开支预算。）分钟）
第四篇：大学英语作文
My view on...Nowadays，there is a widespread concern over 主词(the increasing number of private cars).However, when it comes to this hot topic, people’s views vary from person to person.Some people hold that 观点1（private cars should be greatly encouraged）.However, others list the opposite idea with regard to it.They argue that 观点2（the increasing trend of private cars should be limited because private cars have lead to some problems such as pollution and cost, etc.）
As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the former /latter idea.I make out my case as follows: In the first place, while it is true that观点1（private cars do give rise to some problems such as pollution, traffic jams and even traffic accident）,it does not mean that观点1.1(the problems cannot be solved if some effective measures are to be taken).Admittedly,观点2（private cars are cost the owners more）,but this is not to say that观点2.2.（without the cars the owners’ life would be much better）
Based on the discussion above, the conclusion can be drawn is obvious: the development and the purchase of cars should be encouraged rather than banned because private cars bring convenience as well as comfort to their users.(234)
第五篇：英语作文-修改
The Changes In My Life
Since I entered junior middle school, I became hastier, because I am afraid to be surpassed by others.I am under stress every day.I did not only feel very tired,but also did not achieve what I have ever expected.I felt very confused and thought nobody could help me.Until one day, my head teacher asked me “What do you see out of the window?”.“Many students,” I answered with a little curiocity.“Yes, you are right.But do not you see flowers?”she asked with a smile.“You should slow your pace and enjoy every moment”, she turned away after saying these words, just giving me an expressive smile.I stood there seeming to understand something.Yeah, she is right.I often crossed the school in a hurry and hardly ever noticed the flowers which was blooming in the corner.Maybe I really need to slow my pace, and slow my heart.Now, I am in Grade Nine, the most important year during my junior middle school, but I do not feel very nevious and anxious.This is just because I can enjoy my life, enjoy every step I have taken.This is the biggest change in my life!
Na.2013.10.02
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