精彩作文

第一篇：精彩作文

“精彩作文”主题研讨活动

良教乡中心学校小学语文教研组

2013-10-16

“精彩作文”主题研讨活动总结

作文教学一直是语文教学的难点，是让语文教师倍感头疼的一件事情。为提高作文教学水平，探索作文教学新路，我教研组于2013年10月16日举办了“精彩作文”主题研讨活动。此次教研活动在校领导的正确指导下，在参加活动的全体教师的共同努力下，取得了圆满成功。为查找不足，积累经验，现将本次活动过程总结如下：

一、迎难而上，确定主题。

九月初教研组进行了认真研讨，成立活动领导机构，确定研讨主题及活动方案。

二、相互沟通，共同提高

本次作文主题教研活动，充分体现了相互沟通、资源共享、取长补短、共同提高的精神理念，促进了各年级段作文教学之间的紧密联系，实现了优势互补，达到了共同发展、共同提高的预期目的。充分发挥教研的平台和纽带作用，互相学习，互相交流，敢于暴露缺点，敢于迎难而上，充分体现了积极探索，求真务实的工作作风。

四、活动反思

当前，我校作文教学的主要问题是：从学生角度讲，学生面对作文题目无话可说，作文中假话、大话、空话、套话连篇，抄袭范文现象普遍存在。从教师角度讲，一是我们的教师对作文教学没有给予充

分重视，提到作文教学仅限于每学期的八次习作，学生习作量小，质量低。二是对学生习作指导不得法。忽视学生对生活的观察、感悟和积累，忽视学生对表达方法的领悟、学习和运用。三是我们的老师不善于写下水文，不善于用下水文。可以想象教师不敢写，写不好作文，那么我们的学生不敢写，写不好作文就不足为奇了。

因此，我们应着手解决以下几个问题。

对作文教学而言：

1、解决学生敢不敢写作文的问题。

要努力调动学生的习作兴趣，降低对学生习作的要求，创设宽松的习作氛围，解放学生的口敢于说，解放学生的笔乐于写，鼓励学生表达真情实感。

2、解决学生会不会写作文的问题。

要培养学生留心观察、感受生活、体验情感的习惯，指导学生从生活中发掘写作素材，表达真情实感。要注重语言积累，加强读写结合，指导学生把阅读中领悟的表达方法运用到习作中去。

3、解决学生能不能写好作文的问题。

好文章是改出来的，要重视学生对作文的修改和评价。让学生养成主动修改作文的习惯，培养学生作文鉴赏的能力。

对于教师而言：

1、要求教师重视作文教学。

作文应该受到重视自然不用说，要重视作文教学，就不能仅仅局限于每学期的八次习作，要以这几次习作为本，首先上好习作课，在次基础上要将拓展习作练习，给学生创造练笔的机会，让学生在大量的习作实践中学会习作。比如开展作文循序训练。

2、要求教师研究作文教学。

要研究作文教学的规律，比如各年段作文教学各侧重训练什么？怎样落实？再如习作课堂教学怎么安排结构？有没有适合自己的基本模式？这些问题研究好了，作文教学才会有实效。

3、要求教师发展作文教学。

要紧跟新课程改革的要求，把握新课程对作文教学的要求，不断改革作文教学，不断提高教学效果。

教学研究的路是永无止境的，我们相信，如果我们能将这样的追求坚持下去，教师与学生将共同搭建灵动而开放的课堂，在语文教学的天地收获硕果！

良教乡中心学校小学语文教研组

2013-10-16

第二篇：精彩作文

我这个人

我叫王明，今年10岁，在育才小学上四年级。

我呀，弯弯的眉毛，特浓；虽然我的眼睛很小，但炯炯有神；不大不小的嘴巴，却伶牙俐齿。要是有人问我：“五官里面你最不喜欢什么？”我准会回答“鼻子。”因为我的鼻子好扁！

我在学校可厉害啦！几个调皮大王看见我，就像老鼠看见猫似的，不敢做坏事。小刚就是我们班有名的调皮大王。他平时最爱惹女同学生气了，有些女同学还常常被他打哭呢。一次学校开庆祝会，坐在我身边的小刚又在惹小红。我一把抓住他，对他说：“你不要惹女同学生气，要不然我就不客气了！”我一边说，一边故意伸手向他示威。他为了留住面子，再三向我求饶，我才放了他。

我虽然很凶，但也爱哭。看卖火柴的小女孩就难受得不行了。看悲伤的电视剧也是如此。

哈哈，瞧，这就是我。

点评：用词生动活泼，通过一件小事的描述，刻画出自己鲜明的个性，友爱、正直、善良！

这就是我镜子里有个男孩子，他长着高高的个子，圆圆的脸蛋，大大的耳朵，白白的皮肤，噢！还有一双黑溜溜会说话的眼睛，可爱极了！他有许许多多的爱好，像跳舞、唱歌、踢足球，他样样都是高手！但他喜欢干的是写粉笔字和画画儿，尤其是他办的黑板报既有趣又漂亮，可受同学们欢迎了！

可是，他的学习成绩在班上不是最好的。因为他有个坏毛病—粗心大意，每次考试好多题本来会做的，可就是因为马虎总得不到满分。不过，现在他已经痛下决心要改掉这个坏毛病了！

同学们，你们知道这个男孩子是谁吗？告诉你们吧，他就是我！点评：采用第三人称写法很新颖，用俏皮的语言，如画一般，将一个有血有肉的“我”跃然纸上。

小表弟

我的小表弟今年四岁了。他那胖乎乎的脸上有一双炯炯有神的大眼睛，他说起话来又脆又响，特别逗人喜欢。、一个星期天的晚上，我缠着妈妈到姥姥家去玩，妈妈终于同意了。妈妈骑着自行车带着我，一会儿就来到姥姥家。推开院门，就听见：“春风呀，春风呀把我吹绿„„”的歌声。

我急忙跑进里屋，之间亮亮拿着手电筒当“话筒”，红着脸大声而正经地向观众敬礼。我们都笑得前仰后合，舅妈都笑出了眼泪。接着，他又把鸡毛掸子斜挂在脖子上，弹起“吉他”来。嘴里还不住的哼着，摇摇晃晃，一不小心“扑通”一声掉到床

下。舅妈连忙跑过去扶他。只见他哭丧着脸，“哎哟，哎哟„„”地叫着，舅妈关心地问：“摔着没有？”他爬起来，摸摸头，揉揉屁股，吐了一下舌头做了个鬼脸。我们又是一阵大笑。

点评：文章虽短，却将小表弟那可爱、天真的样子描绘得活灵活现。作者通过细致的观察的细腻的刻画将活泼、逗乐的小表弟展现在读者面前。

母亲

“世上只有妈妈好„„”这首歌大家都听过，也一定会唱吧！唱这首歌时，你是否会想到妈妈对你的爱呢？母爱，是世界上最伟大的爱。

我真正体会到这一点是在上小学三年级时的一天。放学了，我刚想回家，可是六月的天气好像孩子的脸一样说变就变，刚才还是晴空万里，此时却蒙上一层阴影。忽然，一道闪电划破天空，雷声霹雳，一个有一个地响了起来。接着，大雨瓢泼似的倾泻而下。我发愁了！心想，爸爸上班去了，奶奶家又远，妈妈又卧病在床，谁能给我送伞呢？只见同学们都被接走了，我的心犹如火上浇油，更加焦急不安。这时，雨帘中出现了一个熟悉的身影，正蹒跚着向学校走来。“是妈妈！”我冲出教室，跑出校门，一头扑到妈妈怀里。妈妈用凉冰冰的手抚摸着我的脸，我却感到全身暖烘烘的。我上下打量妈妈，只见妈妈全身湿透了。微笑的脸庞上没有一点血色。一股泪水流进我的嘴里，啊！我哭了，满脸不只是泪水还是雨水。回家路上，妈妈一个劲儿地把伞往我这边移，可他自己却有打扮身子露在外面。

我把伞推了过去，说：“妈妈，还是您遮吧！”妈妈笑着说：“没关系，妈妈不要紧，只要你不淋着就行了！”听了这句话，我有放声哭了„„

这是多么伟大，多么深沉的母爱啊！

点评：以歌词开头新颖吸引人，通过平常的一件小事，体现母爱的伟大。全文结构严谨，层次分明，深情动人。

捡破烂的老奶奶

周末在家，我总能看到外面有一位捡破烂的老奶奶，也总能听见他那沙哑的叫卖声。

有一天，我走近一看，在我面前的她是那么苍老：70来岁，头发乱蓬蓬的似鸡窝，满脸的沟壑纵横交错，似乎早已没有肉了，只剩下没有血色的皮，紧贴在颧骨上。这是我看见她左手拎着一个大袋子，右手拿着一个钩子。她吃力地猫着腰，握着钩子在垃圾桶里钩来钩去，不一会儿，只听见“当”的一声，一只易拉罐壳就被她钩出来了。可能是她年纪大的缘故吧，她身子一晃，腿脚有些站不稳。我急忙去扶她，轻声地问：“老奶奶，你要不要紧？”她用看外国人一样的眼神看着我，说了一句听不懂的话，虽然我没能听明白她的话，可是从她那慈祥的眼神里，我看到了她对生活的热爱！点评：通过外貌和动作描写，刻画了以为捡破烂的老奶奶，小作者观察细致，描写细腻、准确，语言生动。

第三篇：【推荐】精彩运动会作文

【推荐】精彩运动会作文3篇

在日常生活或是工作学习中，大家都经常看到作文的身影吧，作文是人们把记忆中所存储的有关知识、经验和思想用书面形式表达出来的记叙方式。你知道作文怎样写才规范吗？下面是小编整理的精彩运动会作文3篇，供大家参考借鉴，希望可以帮助到有需要的朋友。

精彩运动会作文 篇1

我们盼星星盼月亮，终于盼来了一年一度的春季运动会。

动员进行曲响起，运动员们个个摩拳擦掌，连我这个拉拉队员都已心潮澎湃。

运动在一项项进行。广播中时不时传来：“请五年级400米男子组到检录处报到”，“请三年级垒球女子组到检录处报到。”……操场上也时不时地响起“各就各位——预备——砰”，接着就看见运动员们像箭一样射出了起跑线，向前冲去。

终于，轮到五年级800米男子一组比赛了，我和几个同学一起，给我们班的运动员姚鸿邑加油，随着裁判员一“枪”令下，运动员们个个尽了自己最大的努力往前冲去，我们大喊着：“加油！加油！”到了第二圈，不知是不是因为体力消耗太大，比起第一圈，运动员们速度慢多了，但运动员们都紧咬着牙继续努力；到了第三圈，运动员们更慢了，呼吸更急促了，拉拉队的加油声也更响了；到了第四圈，体力不支的运动员已经开始走路了……成绩出来了，虽然我们班的运动员没上名次，但他的确已经尽力了。

接着，我又看了一场扔垒球比赛，我们班的李慧娟前两次扔得不好，最后一次了，她静下心来尽力一扔，垒球在空中划出了一道优美的弧线，但戏剧性的一幕发生了——球在还没落地前，却被一阵狂风吹回来一截，而垒球是以落地的那一点为准的，于是她就没上名次。她后来笑着说：“看来老天爷不帮我忙啊。”那种淡定令我佩服。

运动会仍在继续，又有新的比赛开始了，我连忙又跑过去为同学加油助威了……

精彩运动会作文 篇2

今日我非常高兴，因为今日要开“三跳运动会”。我一走进学校的操场，就能看见主席台上贴着红色的条幅，上面写着“第十九届三跳运动会”。

到了班里就接到了黄彦兮的报告，就是周老师让班里面的同学摆椅子，我连忙去帮周老师摆椅子，摆完椅子以后我又上楼在楼道里练了一会儿小绳就回教室了。

比赛开始了，我们年级上午参加的项目有：前挽花、计数跳，下午是：后挽花、计数跳和一带一。我参加的是前挽花和计数跳，跳计数跳的时候我非常紧张，周老师让我别坏，我努力跳完以后听周老师说我跳了198个，没有坏一次，最后得了一个第二名。还有我的前挽花跳了85个，中间坏了一次，也得了一个第二名。

这次是我的超水平发挥，因为我原来就跳不了这么多，“三跳运动会”我太喜欢了。我多么盼望下次运动会早点到来。

精彩运动会作文 篇3

在这秋高气爽的十月，我们迎着秋日的阳光，伴随着收获的季节，我们迎来了初中生涯的第一次运动会。

吃过午饭，全校师生来到了大操场。它们有的安排场地，有的整理服装，有的安放器材，忙得不亦乐乎。

随着运动会的正式开始，各班依次入场进行开幕式的表演活动。进行曲骤然响起，一个又一个的班级排着整齐的队伍，大踏步向主席台走来。他们个个衣着统一，面带笑容，昂首阔步，展示出能仁学子特有的`青春与活力。

这些班级的表演各有千秋。

有的队形多样，有的衣着亮丽，有的动作整齐，有的口号响亮，有的编排新颖……

这些学生手中的道具真是花样繁多，五花八门。

有些随着动感的音乐，手持装有大米的易拉罐，敲打出清脆响亮的节奏；有的拍动着皮球，犹如活泼可爱的森林精灵；有的衣裙翩翩，手握舞扇，划出一道道优美的弧线；还有的气宇轩昂，手持礼炮，向天空放射出缤纷的礼花。

而最特别的还数初一(7)班的舞龙表演。

伴随着《龙的传人》，他们开始了表演。女生投入地舞蹈，每一寸力气都到了指尖，每一份专注都到了心房。那整齐划一的动作，那聚精会神的神情，坚定而又自信，迸发出激情与朝气。仿佛他们的头脑里只有一个念头：把每一个动作做到位，努力认真，团结一心，成功的彼岸就在眼前。男生舞着长龙，蓝与红所形成的鲜明对比让场面壮观不少。男生们卖力地挥舞，快速地奔跑，敏捷地穿梭，每一个动作都是那样的细致入微，完美无瑕，淋漓尽致。他们的手臂急促的挥舞着，有力的挥舞着，大起大落的挥舞着。整齐一致的步伐踏出了他们优秀的一面。全班同学都投入其中，音乐，动作，神情，交织着，旋转着，舞动着……那两条长龙在阳光的洗礼下熠熠生辉，气势不凡，仿佛就要迫不及待地腾飞！

精彩运动会的开幕式给我留下了深刻的印象！

第四篇：作文精彩句型

作文精彩句型

１．议论论文：

A.Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages． B.Compared to/ In comparison with letters, e-mails are more convenient.C.When it comes to computers, some people think they have brought us a lot of convenience.However,...D.Opinions are pided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside.E.As is known to all/ As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life.F.Why do you go to university? Different people have different points of view.2.书信：

A.I am writing to you to apply for admission to your university as a visiting scholar.B.I read an advertisement in today’s China Daily and I apply for the job...C.Thank you for your letter of May 5.D.How happy I am to receive your letter of January 9.E.How nice to hear from you again.3.口头通知或介绍情况：

A.Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please.I have an announcement to make.B.Attention, please.I have something important to tell you.C.Mr.Green, Welcome to our school.To begin with, let me introduce Mr.Wang to you.4.演讲稿：

A.Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very much honored to have a chance here to make a speech on the subject--A Balance Diet and Health.B.Good morning everyone!Allow me, first of all, on behalf of all present here, to extend our warm welcome and cordial greeting to our distinguished guest.二．并列用语：

as well as, not only…but(also), including，A.Not only do computers play an important part in science and technology, but also play an informative role in our daily life.B.All of us, including the teachers / the teachers included, will attend the lecture.C.He speaks French as well as English.=He speaks English, and French as well.=He speaks not only English but also French.D.E-mail, as well as telephones, is playing an important part in daily communication.三．对比用语：

on one hand ,on the other hand, on the contrary/contrary to..., though, for one thing;for another, nevertheless A.I know the Internet can only be used at home or in the office, but on the other hand, it is becoming more and more popular for much information as well as clear and vivid pictures.B.It is hard work;I enjoy it though.C.Contrary to what I had originally thought, the trip turned out to be fun.四.递进用语：

even, besides, what’s more, as for, so…that…, worse still, moreover, furthermore;but for, in addition, to make matters worse

A.The house is too small for a family of four, and furthermore/besides/what’s more/moreover /in addition/worse still , it is in a bad location.五.例证用语：

in one’s opinion, that is to say, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in fact, namely

A.As a matter of fact, advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life．

B.There is one more topic to discuss, namely/that is(to say), the question of education.六.时序用语：

first/firstly, meanwhile, before long, ever since, while, at the same time in the meantime, shortly after, nowadays, A.They will be here soon.Meanwhile, let’s have coffee.B.Firstly, let me deal with the most important difficulty.七.强调用语：

especially, indeed, at least, at the most, What in the world/on earth.., not at all , A.Noise is unpleasant, especially when you are trying to sleep.B What in the world/on earth are you doing? 八.因果用语：

thanks to, because, as a result, because of/as a result of , without, with the help of..., owe...to...A.The company has a successful year, thanks mainly to the improvement in export sales.B.As a result, many of us succeeded in passing the College Entrance Examinations.九.总结用语：

in short;briefly/ in brief;generally speaking, in a word, as you know, as is known to all

A.Generally speaking, sending an e-mail is more convenient than sending letters.B.In short, measures must be taken to prevent the environment being polluted.常用句型

（一）段首句

1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to……Some people suggest that …… 2.俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying……It's the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.3.现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, …… which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ……Second,……What makes things worse is that…….4.现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。Nowadays，it is common to …….Many people like …… because …… Besides，…… 5.任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and …… is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.6.关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，…… People’s opinions about …… vary from person to person.Some people say that ……To them,…… 7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem …… which is becoming more and more serious.8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。……has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

……has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that……while.Obviously，……but why?（二）中间段落句

1.相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。

On the contrary，there are some people in favor of……t the same time，they say…… 2.但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。

But I don't think it is a very good way to solve …….For example，……Worst of all，…….3.……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……

……is necessary and important to our country's development and construction.First，……What's more, ……Most important of all,…… 4.有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。There are several measures for us to adopt.First, we can……

5.面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，Confronted with……we should take a series of effective measures to…….For one thing，For another，6.早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。

It is high time that something was done about it.For example.……In addition.……All these measures will certainly…….7.为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……

Why…… The first reason is that ……The second reason is ……The third is…….For all this, the main cause of ……use to …….8.然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ……also has its own disadvantages, such as ……

9.尽管如此，我相信……更有利。

Nonetheless, I believe that ……is more advantageous.10.完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下： I fully agree with the statement that ……because…….（三）结尾句

1.至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为…… As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think that ……

2.总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ……Only in this way can ……in the future.3.但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）……

But ……and……have heir own advantages.For example, …… while…… Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to……

4.就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为…… Personally, I believe that…… Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because……

5.随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With the development of society, ……So it's urgent and necessary to ……If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.6.至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能…… For my part, I think it reasonable to…… Only in this way can you…… 7.对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……； 第二，……；最后……但同样重要的是……

In my opinion, I think it necessary to……The reasons are as follows.First ……second …… Last but not least,……

8.在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。

It is difficult to say whether ……is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of…….however, from a personal point of view find…… 9.综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……

From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that……

10.如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……

If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is

常用句型：

开头：

When it comes to..., some think...There is a public debate today that...A is a commen way of..., but is it a wise one?

Recentaly the problem has been brought into focus.提出观点：

Now there is a growing awareness that...It is time we explore the truth of...Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.进一步提出观点：

...but that is only part of the history.Another equally important aspect is...A is but one of the many effects.Another is...Besides, other reasons are...提出假想例子的方式：

Suppose that...Just imagine what would be like if...It is reasonable to expect...It is not surprising that...举普通例子：

For example(instance),......such as A,B,C and so on(so forth)A good case in point is...A particular example for this is...引用：

One of the greatest early writers said...“Knowledge is power”, such is the remard of...“......”.That is how sb comment(criticize/ praise...).“......”.How often we hear such words like there.讲故事

（先说故事主体），this story is not rare...., such delimma we often meet in daily life...., the story still has a realistic significance.提出原因：

There are many reasons for...Why...., for one thing,...The answer to this problem involves many factors.Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves...The first reason can be obiviously seen.Most people would agree that...Some people may neglect that in fact...Others suggest that...Part of the explanation is...进行对比：

The advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of...Although A enjoys a distinct advantage...Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.A maybe..., but it suffers from the disadvantage that...承上启下：

To understand the truth of..., it is also important to see...A study of...will make this point clear 让步：

Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...I do not deny that A has its own merits.结尾：

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...In summary, it is wiser...In short...对立观点型论说文

一).点明文章主题的常用句式

1.… has become a hot topic among people recently.Opinions vary from person to person.2.There is(an argument/much disagreement)among people(concerning/over/as to/on)…

3.Nowadays, people are pided on the question as to whether … 4.Different people have different vies/perspectives on …

5.The issue of whether or not … has been widely(argued/debated)currently.二)具体介绍两种对立观点的常用句式

1.Some people(suggest/maintain/hold the opinion)that ….(But/However/While/Nevertheless)other people hold a different point of view … 2.Those who(criticize/oppose to/object to)… argue that … But people who(advocate/favor)…, on the other hand, maintain/assert that …

3.Nowadays, an overwhelming majority of people think that … Nevertheless, there are still some people of the opinion that …

4.Now it is(commonly/generally/widely/universally)(thought/accepted/believed/held)that …But I wonder/doubt whether 三)陈述自己的观点

1.(For my part/ As to me/ As far as I am concerned),(I’d like to agree to the former)/(my favor goes to the first view.)2.I’m in favor of ….I’m on the side of …

3.In my opinion, both sides are partly right.When we …we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems and then make the right decision.4.There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements, but … 问题解决型论说文常用句式

引出话题

1.Nowadays, … has become a problem we have to face.2.Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about the problem …

3.Although … has brought convenience to us, many people have begun to realize that it is the source of trouble as well.4.Recently,(the issue/problem/question)of …(has been brought into focus/brought to public attention).5.With the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.6.Nowadays more and more people(come to realize/be aware of)the importance of…

分析原因

1.Here are(many/a number of/ a variety of)reasons for it.First, … Second, … And finally, …

2.The reasons can be listed as follows.For one thing, … For another, …

3.What has possibly contributed to this problem? In the first place, … In the second place, …

4.… is(also/partly/solely/chiefly? Responsible for the problem.5.One may attribute this problem to …

6.A number of factors could(account for/lead to/contribute to/ result in)… 提出解决方案

1.The first key factor to solve this problem is … Another key factor is …

2.People have found many(solutions/approaches? to dealing with this problems.3.Faced with …, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.4.It is(essential/indispensable)that(proper actions/effective measures)should be taken to reverse this situation/trend.阐述主题型论说文常用句式

引出格言和谚语

1.Here is an old saying, … It’s the experience of our forefathers.However, it is correct in many cases even today.2.One of our ancient philosopher said, … Chinese people have always been holding their idea to be one of their stands of morality.3.one of the great early writers said that … 举例说明

1.…,(say/for example/ for instance), … 2.Take … for example

3.A(good)case in point is …

4.… is often cited as a familiar example of… 事实证明

1.No one can(deny/doubt/ignore/overlook)the fact that …

2.The(idea/view/criticism)is(barely/fully)supported by the fact that … 3.There is considerable evidence that …

4.All reliable(data/evidence/ facts)pile up to(show/justify)the view that … 所有的证据都表明…

5.Nothing could be more obvious than the evidence that … 结论性结尾的常用句式

1.From what have been discussed above, we may(come to/reach/ draw)the conclusion that …

2.Taking into account all the factors, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that … 3.(In summary/In conclusion/In a word/ In brief/ In short/ To sum up/ ON the whole/All in all), it is important that …

4.In summary, I would like to say that … is an issue that deserves immediate attention.5.(Personally/ As far as I am concerned/ For my part/ As for me), I am in favor of(the former/the latter).图表作文

表说明的常用句式

1.As can be seen from the chart/graph/ table/diagram, …

2.The(figures/statistics)in the chart(reflect/show/reveal/)that … 3.It is apparent from the(chart/graph/table/diagram)that … 表示数据的句式

1.… had the largest percentage/proportion of … 2.… account for/take up …

3.Compared with A, B has a higher percentage.4.At the bottom is …, which accounts for 60% 5.A is second to B.6.A is(ranked/rated)first, followed by B at 30% and C at 25%.表示数据变化的句式

1.表示增加,减少和波动的常用句式

A.The number of(private cars)(increased/rose)(suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/considerably/sharply/steeply)from … to …

B.There was a(sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steep)(increase/rise)in the number of(private cars)from … to …

C.There was a boom in the number of(private cars)from … to … D.The number of(private cars)(increased/rose)(steadily/gradually)from … to … E.The number of(private cars)(decreased/fell/dropped)(suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/sharply/steeply)from … to … F.The number of(private cars)(increased/rose)by …%

G.The number of(private cars)(fell/dropped/declined)by …% 2.表示变化不大的常用句式

A.The number of … remained(steady/stable/constant)between … and … B.There was(little/hardly)any change in the number of C.The number of … appeared to level off.3.表示最高点或最低点

A.The(situation/figures)reached(a peak/a high)at …% in year … B.The(situation/figures)bottomed out at …% in year … C.The(situation/figures)peaked at …% in year … 4.表示倍数

A.A is(twice/three times/ four times)what it was in … B.A is(twice/three times/four times)the amount in …

C.A is(twice/three times/four times)(as much/many as)… in …

D.The figure was roughly(doubled/tripled/quintupled)between … and … 5.其它表示变化的句式

A.By comparison with 1999, the number of … in 2000 increased/ rose/ decrease/declined by …%

B.The number has increased/decreased by(…%/two times and a half)as compared with … C.In the past three years, there has been a(sudden/dramatic/sharp/marked/significant/remarkable/considerable)(decrease/fall/rise/increase)in the crime rate.6.指出原因

A.The change in … mainly(results/arises)from…

B.One may attribute this(trend/change/problem)to …, but it doesn’t answer the question.C.The(decrease/decline/rise)may be regarded as a(sign of/response to)… D.A number of factors could(account for/ lead to)the change in… E.… is also responsible for the(rise/decrease)in … 专四作文考前一周强化 英语高分作文常用典型句型

一、用于驳斥的比较的常用句型 1.In general，I don’t agree with...2.In my opinion，this point of view doesn’t hold water.3.The chief reason why...，is that...4.There is no doubt that...5.It is not true that...6.It can be easily denied that...7.We have no reason to believe that...8.What is more serious is that...9.But it is a pity that...10.Besides，we should not neglect that...11.But the problem is not so simple.Therefore....12.Others may find this to be true，but I believe that...13.Perhaps I will question why...14.There is a certain amount of truth in this，but we still have a problem with regard to...15.Though we are in basic agreement with...，but...16.What seems to be the trouble is...17.Yet differences will be found，that’s why I feel that...18.It would be reasonable to take the view that...，but it would be foolish to claim that...19.There is in fact no reason for us to believe that...20.What these people fail to consider is that...21.It is one thing to insist that...，it is quite another to show that...22.Wonderful as A is，however，it has its own disadvantages too.23.The advantages of B are much greater than A.24.As advantage sounds ridiculous when B，s advantages are taken into consideration.二、用于描写图表和数据的常用句型

1.It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998.2.There is an increase of 20% in total this year.3.It has been increased by a factor of 4 since 1995.4.It would be expected to increase 5 times.5.The table shows a three times increase over that of last year.6.It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996.7.The total number was lowered by 10%.8.It rose from 10-15 percent of the total this year.9.Compared with 1997，it fell from 15 to 10 percent.10.The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995.11.It has decreased almost two and half times，compared with...三、解释原因、分析影响的常用句型及例句说明 1.Everybody knows that...2.It can be easily proved that...3.It is true that...4.No one can deny that...5.One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is...6.The chief reason is that...7.We must recognize that...8.There is no doubt that...9.I am of the opinion that...10.This can be expressed as follows: 11.To take..，for an example....12.We have reason to believe that...13.Now that we know that...14.Among the most convincing reasons given，one should be mentioned...15.The change in...largely results from the fact that...16.There are several causes for this significant growth in...，first....，second...，finally...17.A number of factors could account for the development in...18.Perhaps the primary reason is...19.It is chiefly responsible for...20.The reasons for..，are complicated.And probably they are found in the fact...21.There are several possible reasons，except that...22.Somebody believes/ argues/ holds/ insists/ thinks that...23.It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon...24.Different people observes it in different ways.四、有关文章、段落起始的常用句型

I.With the(rapidly)growing popularity of Internet surfing(computers /cars/mobile phones/pagers/.PDP television/...)in China，the quality of our lives is improving for the better.2.With the(rapid)growth of our economy(heavy industries/transportation system/market economy/population/private enterprises/housing industry/...)，an increasing number of problems，such as(water shortages/traffic jams/industrial pollution/ waste of energy/desert spreading/...)，are beginning to surface.3.As the proverb says...(It goes without saying that.../Generally speaking，.../It is often said that...)4.With the(rapid)development of science and technology(market economy/electronic industry/information industry/higher education/...)an increasing number of people come to realize that(knowledge is power/a weak nation has no International prestige/education is of vital importance/...).5.Currently，there is a widespread concern over drug abuse(high unemployment rate/wildlife extinction/environmental pollution/desertification/organized crime/widespread corruption/energy crisis/water shortages/traffic jams/increasing traffic accidents/...).6.It is quite clear that(Them is no doubt that/ Some people believe that)..，because...7.There is a wide spread concern that many large state-owned companies are in deficit(quite a few Chinese cities face the problem of water shortages，industrial pollution and waste of energy/various kind of superstition flare up/...)8.The government is(We are)seriously concerned with wildlife extinction(drug abuse/widespread corruption/organized crimes/high unemployment rate/...).9.Many people often ask such question:”...’?(More and more people have come to realize...)10.In the past two decades(In the past five years)，millions of private enterprises(private schools/supermarkets/fast food restaurants/...)have mushroomed all over China.11.In recent years，many Chinese families have owned cars(computers/mobile phones/video cameras/houses/...).12.Recently the issue of...has been brought to public attention.(Currently there is a widespread concern that.../Now people in growing number are coming to realize that...)13.Nowadays，a heated debate(discussion)about the accession to WTO(private cars/stocks/brain-drain/Chinas football/...)is under way in China.14.As the market economy(the legal system/the living standard/the higher education system/the highway network/the infrastructure/...)improves in China，free competition will increasingly replace all sorts of monopolies.15.One great man said that...16.As the public awareness of the market economy(population control/socialism and communism/wildlife preservation/environmental protection/higher education/human rights/anti-monopoly/creativity/competition/laws and regulations/...)heightens，the gap between China and the developed countries will gradually vanish(many social problems will be solved gradually).17.Recently,extensive studies(statistics/surveys/investigations/...)show(reveal/indicate/demonstrate/prove/...)that 107 Chinese cities and 1231 small towns suffer water shortages.18.These days we often tell that...，but is this really the case?

19.There are three major values of owning a car(a computer/an apartment/a mobile phone/a beeper/...).To begin with....Next....Last....There are，on the other hand，more reasons against it.First(ly)...Second(ly)....Finally.....20.There are some reasons for owing a car(traffic accidents/big fires in big cities/water shortages/destruction of virgin forests/...).21.In the past several years there has been...22.Now an increasing number of people come to realize that time is money(knowledge is power/science and technology energize economic growth/we must learn to live in harmony with wildlife/weak nation has no international prestige/cheating never pays/science and technology constitute the primary productive force/...).23.There are three basic differences between the large and small universities(cities and countryside/ceramics and plastics materials/...).In the small university，you...In the large university，you...24.There are various ways(at least three ways/possible techniques/problems/methods/approaches/...)to do something.25.Now it is commonly held that...but I doubt whether...26.The policy(The president/The major/The reform/The bidding for the 2008 Olympic Summer Games)enjoys grass-root support for three main reasons，27.Smoking(alcoholic beverage/Drugs/Guns/Firecrackers/...)should be banned from college campuses for two reasons.The first reason is that...The other reason is that...(on the one hand....On the other hand....)28.There is a general discussion today about the issue of...29.No pains，no gains.No money，no honey(friendship/work/promotion/admission/love/assistance/service/justice/...).No shirt(shoes)，no admission.30.We enjoy Internet surfing not because we are curious about new things，but because Internet represents the latest technology.31.The possible solutions of the energy crisis(water shortages/desertification/pollution/theses social problems/...)depends on three factors(and on specific situations)...32.Faced with....quite a few people argue that...，but other people conceive differently.33.How successful your job interview will be depends upon your qualification，your professional experience and your academic intelligence，and upon such factors as your social skills，your personality，your appearance and a piece of good luck.34.The three major reasons affecting(responsible for)the rapid economic growth(the widespread corruption/traffic accidents/fires/wildlife extinction/the floods/desert spreading/the collapse of new building/traveling fever/energy crisis/grass land decaying/...)are A，B，and C.35.Different people have different attitudes towards the biding of the 29th Olympic Games(access to WTO/private cars/high unemployment rate/Internet surfing/private schools/state monopoly of telecommunication/urbanization/stock...)Some are in favor of...while others are against...36.When it comes to the access to WTO(Internet surfing/private schools/brain-drain/e-business/high rate of unemployment/China’s football/recycling/widespread corruption/...)，most people believe that..，but other people argue that...37.The high unemployment rate fuels the competition in the job market(social unrest/the confrontation between rich and poor/the higher-education fever/organized crime/the grass-root hatred against corruption，injustice and crime/...).38.To lend or not to lend money to a friend(To be or not to be married)depends or specific situations.39.Heightened environmental consciousness，changing trade patterns and emerging technologies(Global coverage of Internet，access to WTO and all round open-up: to the world)are all having a major impact on Chinese heavy industries(English education in China).40.For years，extensive research efforts have been focused(centered)on decoding the book of life(development of optical computers/elimination of desertification/human organ transplantation/...).41.Nowadays，fire(corruption/higher education/drug abuse/pollution/wildlife extinction/Internet surfing/private cars/accession to WTO/biding the 30th Olympic Games/organized crime/mobile phones/unemployment/ high porce rate/ greenhouse effect/brain-drain/private schools/7-day holidays tourism/...)has/ have become a focus of attention.42.The case only reveals(exposes)the tip of an ugly iceberg of the organized crime(widespread corruption/serious environmental pollution/the lack of reverence for laws and regulations/...).43.With the aggressive conquering of nature，we are facing the serious problem of environmental pollution(exhaustion of natural resources/extinction of wildlife/...).44.In spite of these problems of the private companies in China(the home-made instruments/private cars/joint ventures)，their strengths far outweigh their weaknesses.45.All these reports reveal a painful face that corruption Is rapidly spreading like wild fire all over China;it invades every pore of our society，fueling rages of common people，hurting the international prestige，and threatening the safety of our nation.46.As far as recycling(family planning/environment protection/adult education)is concerned，there is still much room for improvement.47.Mastery of English vocabulary(Fighting crimes/Wiping out fake products/Cleaning up industrial pollution/Eradicating superstitions/Passing the National College Entrance Exams/Getting a high score in GRE/Earning tuition by students alone/...)is no picnic.48.Good manners(Social skills/Good will/Sincerity/Honesty)open(s)the door to friendship(success/grass-roots support/popularity among fellow students/...).例句说明

1When asked about the(question/problem/matter)，(some/many/most/few)(students/people/scientists/...)例:When asked about the ongoing uproar involving U.S.President Bill Clinton，most people say the affair involves a purely private matter.But many other people regard his actions as deplorable.I personally think the president committed impeachable offences.2.When it comes to(sports/seeking jobs)，(some people/John/...)例: When it comes to the increasing use of motor vehicles in Beijing，some people think that use should be limited.Others argue that the opposite is true.There is probably some truth to both arguments，but emission controls must be instituted regardless of the number of vehicles.3.According to a(n)(survey/study/investigation)，there is a(n)(increasing/growing/decreasing)numbers of...例:According to the latest survey，there is a growing number of people who support the plan.4.It is(an accepted fact that/widely known/widely acknowledged)that...例:it is widely acknowledged that extensive deforestation contributed to heavy summer flooding.Experts argue that China must introduce a massive afforestation program.But I doubt whether afforestation alone will solve the problem.5.Nowadays { more and more/many/few}(people/students/women/men)are beginning to(realize/be aware of/be alert to/notice)the(importance/significance/greatness/seriousness)of(education/science/situation/pollution)例:Nowadays many people believe that capital punishment deters crimes.But al though criminologists have conducted exhaustive research regarding the subject，little evidence exists to support the claim.6.(some/most/many)(people/students/women)are of the opinion that...例：Most people are of the opinion that wealth provides solutions to all problems.But spite of the material benefits wealth provides，I believe one should abandon the pursuit of materialism and instead concentrate on the pursuit of happiness.五、有关文章和段落结尾的常用短语、句型 1.Without computer(cell telephone/PDP television/cars/microelectronics/telecommunication/Internet/genetics advances/...)，it would he difficult to imagine modern life.2.From this point of view，we can see...(On account of this we can find that，../Therefore，these findings reveal the following information:)3.We should redouble our efforts to build China into a powerful / prosperous/better educated/...)nation with international prestige.4.We should do our best in eliminating industrial pollution(fake products/organized crimes/illiteracy/poverty in China...).5.In a word(In conclusion/To sum up).6.It is imperative for us to take effective measures to correct the situation(fight corruption/hold back a tidal wave of crime/terminate excessive exploitation of natural resources/ease water shortages/...).7.It is imperative for us to protect wildlife(to eliminate environmental pollution/to fight against organized crimes/to get ride of fake products/to ban drug abuse/to reduce traffic accidents/...)，now，before it is too late.8.Thus，this is the reason why(As far as...be concerned，I believe that/There is little doubt that / It is obvious that)we must...9.Mankind must put an end to war(pollution/desertification/wildlife destruction/hegemony/nuclear weapons/...)or war(pollution/...)will put an end to mankind.10.It is not what you say(learn/promise/know/love to do/think you can do/you feel capable of doing/...)but what you do(have done)that really counts.11.There is no immediate solution to the problem of....but..，might be helpful.(None of the solutions is quite satisfactory.The problem should be examined in a new way.)12.In the race for quality(knowledge/excellence/efficiency/creativity/truth/happiness/scientific exploration/technological innovation/...)，there is no finish line.13.At best，he does not tell the truth;at worst，he is not equal to his job.14.The problem is not the death of one man(that we cannot do it);the problem is the life of this organization(that we hate to do such nasty things).15.In order to make our world a better place in which to live，we must learn to live in harmony with all wildlife species(stop polluting our environment right away/conscientiously follow family planning).16.It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on...(Taking into account all these factors，we may safely reach the conclusion that.../The result is dependent on...)17.In short，(population explosion，environmental pollution and exhaustion of natural resources)are the major problems to be solved to make our would a better place in which to live.18.To conclude，carelessness in handling fires，misuse of flammable liquids and abuse of electrical appliances are the three major fire hazards around us(heightened environmental awareness，changing trade patterns and emerging technology are having an major compact on our economy).19.Computer(Internet/Integrated circuit/Electricity/Telephone/Television/Plastics/Science and technology/Mobile phones/Cars/Airplane/semiconductors/genetic engineering/...)revolutionizes our life(industry/economy).20.Let us work hand in hand to solve these social problems(fight against corruption / hold back a tidal wave of crimes / build China into a powerful nation /...).21.I want to be a teacher(a doctor/or to do something)not only because...，but also because...22.Who is to say that China will not be humiliated again(Chinese scientists may not provide a better theory)? 23.It goes without saying that science and technology constitute the primary productive force(knowledge is something/creativity is everything/cheating never pays/...)24.The nearer the dawn，the darker the night.(The more..，the more.)25.Living in harmony with nature(wildlife)has become a part of modern civilization.26.The state-owned enterprises(The township enterprises)have only two choices: solve these longstanding problems through reforms or go bankrupt.27.We should not let the golden opportunity slip by，On the contrary，we should seize any opportunity and face the challenge with confidence，courage and wisdom.例句说明 1.There is no(predicting/knowing/denying)that...例:There is no predicting that when this situation will become better.2.(clearly/undoubtedly/obviously/consequently)，(good health/education/a good sense/friendship)is(important/of great importance/valuable/worth while)for...例: Clearly，to be well-educated is of great importance for the change of my current situation.3.(For my part/As far as I am concerned/In my mind’s eye)，I believe that there is no(simple solution/quick answer/effective method)to the(issue/problem)of....but...might be(helpful/plausible/practical).例: As far as I am concerned，I believe that there is no simple solution to that problem，but taking some advice from professionals might be helpful.4.It is(urgent/necessary/imperative/important)that(measures/steps)be taken to...例: lt is urgent that steps be taken to prevent people from cutting trees.5.It is high time that(we/the government/students/people)did...例:It is high time that we put an end to the deplorable practice of infanticide.六、用于论证和说明的常用短语、句型 1.As it is described that...2.It has been illustrated that...3.It provides a good example of...4.We may cite another instance of...5.History may provide us with the examples of.，.6.A number of further facts may be added...7.The situation is not unique，it is typical of dozens have heard.8.A recent investigation indicates that...9.According to the statistics provided...10.According to a latest study，it can be predicted..11.There is no sufficient evidence to show that...12.All available evidence points to the fact that...13.Examples given lead me to conclude that...14.It reveals the unquestionable fact that...15.The idea may be proved by facts...16.All the facts suggest that...17.No one can deny the fact that...18.We may face the undeniable fact that...1.No one can(deny/ignore)the fact that...例:No one can deny the fact that our country has the largest population in the world.2.As can be(seen/suggested)from the above(analysis/explanation)....例:As can be seen from the above explanation，there is no doubt that the number of private cars will increase drastically in a few years.3.Take for example，a(n)(person who/matter that/affair which)....例 :Take for example，Yangtze River that once had been regarded as one of the cleanest rivers in the world now is serious staminated.4.It can be(inferred/concluded)that...例:lt can be inferred that no matter how difficult the situation is，the government will never give up.5.My(idea/view/belief)may be(proved of/illustrated that/supported by...).例: My view may be supported by the fact that more and more people are withdrawing from the city to the countryside.

第五篇：【精品】精彩人生作文

【精品】精彩人生作文九篇

在平日的学习、工作和生活里，大家都跟作文打过交道吧，作文是一种言语活动，具有高度的综合性和创造性。相信写作文是一个让许多人都头痛的问题，下面是小编为大家整理的精彩人生作文9篇，欢迎阅读与收藏。

精彩人生作文 篇1

书是心灵的慰藉，是指引方向的灯塔，是黑暗中的曙光。读一本好书会使你终身受益。一本好书犹如一位益友；在心情低落时给你安慰；犹如一位良师，在困惑的时候为你指点迷津。

有一次，陈毅到一位亲戚家去过中秋节。进门后，他意外地发现了一本自己渴求多日的好书，于是便不顾几十里跋涉的疲劳，一头扎进一间空屋子里，兴致勃勃地读起来，一边读还一边用毛笔作笔记。亲戚几次催他吃饭，他都舍不得放下。后来，亲戚只好把蒸好的糍粑和糖给他端到书桌上。糍粑本该蘸着糖吃，谁知陈毅的注意力全集中到书上去了，竟然把糍粑伸到砚台里蘸上墨汁往嘴里送。过了一会儿，亲戚给他端面条来，见他满嘴都是墨，大吃一惊，不由自主地“啊”了一声。这下子，把外屋的人全引进来了，大家一看陈毅那滑稽的样子，都忍不住捧腹大笑起来。陈毅明白了是怎么回事，诙谐地说：“喝点墨水没关系，我正觉得肚子里墨水太少哩！”

如果说陈毅元帅读书的故事用专心致志来形容，那么我的读书故事就应该用废寝忘食来形容。

小时候的我完全不理解“书”的真正含义和魅力，直到那一次的读书经历。

那一次，同学借给我一本沈石溪的《狼王梦》。我一下子就被书吸引住了。便如饥似渴的看着那本书，连妈妈叫我吃早饭都没有听见。最后妈妈气急败坏的走进我的房间，拉着我去吃早饭。可我一心只想着书中的内容，根本没有心思吃，匆匆吃了几口，便马上跑回房间看起书来。就这样，我守着《狼王梦》过了一天。到了晚上九点妈妈叫我放下书，上床睡觉。正看到精彩情节的我怎么舍得放下书呢？这时我在心里打起小主意。我假睡骗过妈妈，拿起小台灯躲在被窝里偷偷看书。不知什么时候，妈妈悄无声息的走了进来。掀开我的被子，没收了我的书。妈妈说：“你这种废寝忘食看书的精神值得‘嘉奖’。”听出了妈妈话中的意思，我只好乖乖地听话睡觉。

那一次，我读懂了书的真正意义，并被“书”地魅力深深吸引，从此书便成了我人生中不可缺少的一部分。书是一扇窗户，打开窗，给你一片知识的天空。在书中，你可以随意与世界名人促膝交谈。

读书，使心灵升华，使阅历更丰富。读书，仿佛是一场旅行，让你感受阅读的刺激。人生会因读书更精彩。

精彩人生作文 篇2

XX年5月12日，这是对全国残疾人来说极其重要的一天，也是对云南人来说及其自豪的一天，因为，在这天，全国第七届残疾人运动会在昆明隆重开幕啦！这天，和所有期待残运会的人们一样，我十分激动地守在电视机旁，等待着振奋人心的那一刻。今天，我照常打开电视机观看残运会，眼前看到的一幕让我的眼眶禁不住湿润了。

有人用14秒就完成了100米的距离，有人却用了2分43秒68的超长时间才到达终点，但后者却得到了更多的掌声，你相信吗？残运会女子t35级100米决赛的跑道上就出现这样有些离奇，却无比感人的一幕。发令枪响过之后，当其他队员都飞奔而去时，23岁的宁夏肢残运动员张磊仅仅只离开了起点不到5米。由于腿部的残疾，她走路都非常吃力，更别说跑步了。当其他队员以14秒多的成绩跑完100米时，张磊前进了不到10米的距离。因为残疾的原因，她瘦弱的身体很难保持平衡，她移动得很慢，身子依然左右摇晃着，随时都有摔倒的可能。场边的裁判认真地注视着她，并缓慢地随着她向前移动。此刻，一些女性观众

精彩人生作文 篇3

父亲这一生都没有干过什么惊天动天的大事，相貌平平，个子不高，性格倔强，甚至于已经56岁的年纪还没有去过一趟北京。他平凡、普通，但在我这个女儿的眼中，父亲的一生却是活出了任何人都羡慕不来的精彩，他俨然是坚强和责任的代名词，虽然有时候固执得有点小讨厌。

小时候家境非常不好，我跟姐姐两个人读书，家里面所有的负担开支都落在父亲一个人肩上，他没有什么特殊的才能，每一分钱都是靠替别人做短工挣来的。即便在那样的岁月里，父亲都不曾让我和姐姐受过一丁点的苦，学费总是在开学的第一天交齐，每年新年都会给我和姐姐添置新衣服，零花钱也不会比别家的孩子少，父亲总是觉得女孩家就应该是富养着的，这样长大了才不会为了一点点的物质诱惑而做出错误的选择。那段日子给我留下最深印象的是父亲每天都是精神愉悦的，脸上从来没有流露出一丝累的神情，总觉得日子很有盼头。现在回想起来，年轻时的父亲用工作、劳作、坚韧和乐观，对抗着自己的艰苦命运，这种性格和处世模式给了我很深的影响，他是一个给女儿做了榜样的父亲。

记得有一次翻看姐姐的一篇微博，很多年都不哭的我竟湿了眼眶。原文是这样的：“她看到他的时候，心里这样痛，但什么也不说，只说了一句，你等了很久吧，就直直地往前走。他跟在她身后，因为腿疾复发，走路很迟缓。但是他这样的喜悦着，他们不拥抱。在她读书的时候，学校开家长会，那时他的腿已经走不上楼梯，她下意识地扶他，他推开她的手，他从不愿意在她面前流露出任何脆弱。”这短短的百来个字好像突然戳中了心中的某个地方，万千思绪都涌了上来。父亲就是这样的一个人，即便遇到最大的苦难和不适都不会说出来，总是自己一个人扛着，他想让他的两个女儿有一个依靠，而这个依靠他想把它塑造成坚不可摧的壁垒。父亲的这种性格，让小时候的我总觉得和他有些距离，不愿意和他亲近。记得小的时候写作文，每次都爱写妈妈，很少提及父亲，总觉得那个沉默寡言又十分严肃的父亲不好亲近，不写也罢。现在想来，当时的“偏心”应该也没少让父亲伤心的。

毕业后，不顾父亲的再三劝阻，执意要去广州工作，总想着趁着年轻要去大城市闯荡闯荡。去的前一个晚上又跟父亲吵架了，他说我性格太过柔弱又胆小怕事，出不了一年肯定就要回来。当时因为父亲的看不起，我气得鼻孔都要冒烟了，心里面暗暗想着：等着吧，我三年都不回来了，让你小瞧我。结果第二天也没有跟父亲打招呼，背着行囊就踏上了去广州的汽车。不知天高地厚的我啊，一切都如父亲预言的一样，我在一年的时间里换了三份工作，每次月薪都不超过四千块，在广州这样的城市里，除去房租、水电、车费，每个月连吃饭的钱都要精心算计着花，再加上永无止境的加班，极其恶劣拥堵的交通，让习惯了安逸生活的我一刻都呆不下去了。打电话回去跟妈妈抱怨，想回去的意思非常明显，但又因为当时的信誓旦旦，碍于面子，不想这样灰头土脸的回去，怕被父亲看不起。“过得不舒坦就回来吧，做个老师就挺好的，我和你妈也没指望你挣大钱。”父亲硬硬的一句话，让我心里面又长出了小脾气，但一年的`摸爬滚打也磨平了不少的菱角，傲气也不似从前了。虽然觉得父亲好像在讽刺我点什么“看，叫你不听我的吧”，但生活的艰辛也让我顾不上这一点点小脾气了。

回到家的第一个晚上，妈妈在厨房里张罗着，父亲坐在客厅看电视，我在妈妈后面跟进跟出的，一直絮絮叨叨跟她说广州的一些事情，父亲则一直保持沉默。妈妈看不过去，叫我去客厅跟老爸聊聊天，我怄气不肯去，他都不欢迎我回来呢。“别跟你爸怄气了，你要回来不晓得你爸有多开心，跟我唠叨几天了，生怕你改主意，昨天还特意去山上给你采厥，你也晓得你爸的腿不好，只怕现在还疼着呢”，听完老妈的这一番话，心里面竟生出许多得意来，也不再想着灰头土脸逃离广州的事了，总觉得这件事上还是自己胜了老爸一筹。而今回过头来想想，都不免觉得当时的想法幼稚可笑，我的父亲，在我喧闹时、冷静时、狼狈时、失败时，教会了我旁观、思考、克制和自嘲的能力，而我还在沾沾自喜于那些无足挂齿的东西。

而今，姐姐已经在广州打下了属于她的一片天地，足以让一家人过得富足而悠闲，我虽然不争气但也好歹考到了老家的检察院，挣钱少但平淡踏实。父亲也由原来的为我们俩工作的事情操心到忧心起我们俩的婚姻大事来。唉，他这一辈子就从来都没有闲下来过。每个周末都爱回家，父亲还是那样嘴硬，抱怨说我浪费车费，但是眉眼的喜悦是无论如何都遮掩不住的。坐在院子里，躲在橘子树下听歌，父亲忙着摘鸡毛，弄完后又拿着个扫帚来回清理垃圾，他这一辈子都不肯停歇下来，永远像一个陀螺一样，围着他的儿女、他的责任转呀转，忙碌而满足。

父亲没有读过什么书，但是他教给我的东西，却比我从幼稚园到大学学到的还要多。生活的艰辛没有磨平父亲的菱角，他依旧这样又硬又固执，就像母亲常常抱怨的“你啊，有别人一半的花花肠子，我也不用跟着你受那么多的苦。”呵呵，母亲不知道，就是父亲的这种性格，才会有姐姐今时今日的成就和一步步慢慢成熟起来的我。

我不知道怎样去给“精彩人生”这四个字下一个定义。不是说你拥有纵横捭阖的能力，倾国倾城的长相，亦或是三宫六院的胸怀，株连九族的家势就能说精彩的，在我看来，责任、自足、坚韧、快乐，才算得上精彩。或许我这一生也真的做不了什么大事，但是只要是能让我的家人觉得长脸和满意，也就算的上精彩。

精彩人生作文 篇4

“伟大的成绩和辛勤的劳动成正比例，有一分劳动就有一分收获，日积月累，从少到多，奇迹就可以创造出来。”这是妈妈经常用来勉励我努力学习的一句名言，以前我总是不明白这句话的意思，但是随着年龄的不断增长，逐渐懂事的我慢慢悟出了其中的真谛。如今我已经懂得了只有用努力拼搏才能创造属于自己的精彩人生，我也正是在一次次的失败中享受到了成功的喜悦。说起学习书法，我已经坚持了四年。回顾这四年来每个星期的勤学苦练，我有多少次都是想放弃的，可最终还是坚持了下来。还记得刚开始时，我的进步是非常快的，没过几天就可以练习古诗了。受到了老师的表扬，我得意洋洋，自己认为很有天赋，练习起来就有些马虎了事了。字帖也不仔细看，每一笔每一划也不认真描了，每个字摆放的位置也就不琢磨了，慢慢地进步慢了，成了原地踏步。得不到老师的表扬，我就有些气馁，心想：算了，不学了。妈妈知道了我的想法，狠狠地批评了我。她翻出精心收集的我的一张张练习纸，边用红色圈画出写得好的字，边语重心长地对我说：“如果每个人在学习本领的时候都一遇到挫折就半途而废，那怎么可能收获成功呢？要知道每一个成功者的背后都是浸透了汗水的。”听着妈妈的话，我感到非常的惭愧。我曾经放弃了学了两年的画画，坚持了半年的电子琴也是无疾而终，如果再做这种半途而废的事那真的要一事无成了。“好好思量你过去的种种失败，其实都是你自己一手造成的。”妈妈的话彻底地让我醒悟。我暗下决心，再也不能轻言放弃了。一年后，我顺利通过了书法四级的考试，初尝收获的果实，我终于懂得了成绩与劳动的正比例关系。如今在我的不懈努力下，我已经拿到了七级的证书，并且能用三种字体：楷书、隶书、行书，书写不同的作品。每当把作品上传到博客中，受到博友们的赞美时，我的自豪感油然而生；每当把自己书写的春联张贴在屋门上时，我总是庆幸自己的坚持是值得的。

有一首歌这样唱到：阳光总在风雨后，不经历风雨怎能见彩虹……回顾自己的成长道路，我坚信只有付出才有收获，而成功就一直在不远处微笑着向我们招手。同学们，努力奋斗吧，我们一起去用努力创造属于我们自己的精彩人生吧！

精彩人生作文 篇5

蝴蝶的五彩班斓为历代文人墨客所欣赏、赞美，可又有谁，了解它破蛹而出时所受的艰辛磨难呢？

时间回到两千多年前，伟大的儒家代表人物孟子说过：“天将降大任于是人也，必先苦其心志，劳其筋骨，饿其体肤，空乏其身。”这段话告诉我们，一个人只有经历过磨难，才能成就大业。

由此看来，无论是动物还是人，都是要通过磨难的小路走向成功的大门。这样的道理无处不在。

看过这样一个故事：“石佛总是被人膜拜，而石阶总是被人踩在脚下，石阶心理很不平衡。于是它就对石佛说，你我来自同一座山，为何大家踏着我们的身躯而向你顶礼膜拜，却没有人给我们磕头？石佛说，你可知石匠在塑造你们的时候，只需几次刀劈斧砍就成台阶，但在塑造我时却需要成千上万次的雕琢和打磨。人们之所以尊敬我，是因为我经历的磨难、痛苦比你们多。”的确，人如果离开了磨难，就会一事无成。马云可以说是家喻户晓了，谁没有在他的阿里巴巴上聊过天？谁没在他的淘宝上买过东西？可是，你们知道马云光荣背后的艰辛吗：前后参加过4次高考才考上大学；创业时18个人的团队只能挤在一张床上，连翻身都翻不了；他当过英语老师、卖过花，甚至还销售过医药。终于，在经历过无数的艰难险阻后，他成功了。可以说，如果没有如此多的磨难，现在的马云，也只是一个普通的英语教师。

“宝剑锋从磨砺出，梅花香自苦寒来。”只有受过磨难的人，才会意识坚定、永不放弃，而这，恰好是一个成功者所要具备的条件。“不经历风雨，哪能见彩虹。”只有痛苦的磨难，才能造就精彩的人生。

精彩人生作文 篇6

很久很久以前，那时，姥姥将我搂入怀中，语重心长地教育我说：“傻孩子，你知道吗，命运是不能百分之百地掌握人的一生的，然而，人也无法完全战胜命运，我们只能不停地追逐梦想，角逐梦想，改变命运。”我望着姥姥，似懂非懂地点了点头。

将时光倒回到六年以前，那时，我还是个才貌都不出众的女孩，也不只怎的，那时的我较腼腆，但也听话，可是老师，同学们就是都不喜欢我。那时，我最大的梦想大概就是想让所有的人都喜欢我吧。于是，我将这个梦想告诉了爸爸，爸爸也为此而高兴，并保证会协助我完成梦想。后来。在接下来的日子中，我也慢慢发生了改变：姥爷说，我变孝顺了；妈妈说，我变懂事了；老师说，我变优秀了；同学说，我变友善了。我还是我，可如今我奔跑在追梦路上，而曾经的我却是迷茫在十字路口上。因为追梦，我是人生变得不一样而精彩。

诚然，每个人都拥有自己的不同的梦想，每时每刻，每分每秒的梦想都不一定相同。不同的梦想造就不一样的精彩人生，如果梦想是成为一位医生，那么你就要拯救人们的生命；如果梦想成为一名警察，那么你就要维护人们的权益；如果梦想是成为一位科学家，那么你就要造福余人们。每一个梦想的实现，都是人们为之而努力，奋斗的精彩结局。现如今，我又有了一个不同于往常的梦想——当名画家。知道为什么我想当个画家还不同于往常吗？我猜你们也肯定猜不出的，因为这个理由也不同寻常——拿着画笔，绘出更加绚丽的祖国。我想当一名画家，哪怕四处飘泊，居无定所。哪怕是一名小小的画家我也心满意足。我想乘着梦想的翅膀飞得更高更远，将祖国的大好河山描绘的有声有色。相信，因为这个追梦，我的人生又会再一次变得不一样而精彩。

到底怎样才能过上不一样的精彩人生呢？答案只有一个：坚持不懈地跑在追梦路上。

精彩人生作文 篇7

夏日，阳光明媚，青葱的树木耸立在山河，溪流在河床上舞蹈着，拍打着石头发出哗啦哗啦的声音。躺在河床上的鹅卵石正享受着太阳赐予的温和和深山赐予的幽静。

一颗外表极为光滑的鹅卵石也躺在河床上，它正静心地聆听着小鸟的歌声，还不断和从它身上经过的溪流打招呼：“小溪流，你好啊，我很高兴见到你。”溪流们纷纷回应说：“我们也很高兴见到你。”

“啊，不行了，这天好热啊，我都快被晒枯了！”岸边的一棵刚长出来的小树叫道，“太阳公公，你真没有良心，我新长出来的小叶子就快被你晒死了。”太阳公公笑着说：“小树啊小树，我也不是很热呀，再说我可是在帮你长身体，吃这点儿苦算不了什么，等你长成参天的大树后就知道感谢我了。”“哼，不理你了，真可恶。”小树有些生气地说。

在一棵大树下长着另一棵小树，它听了小树的抱怨后带着几分骄傲的神色对小树说：“你可真倒霉，看我，一出生就由一棵参天大树为我遮风挡雨，你就羡慕去吧！”长在岸边的小树无奈地低下了头。

河床上的那块鹅卵石听了它们的对话后，默默地为长在大树下的小树叹了口气。它什么也没说，什么也没做，他认为只有时间才能给他们好好地上一课。

几个月以后，河岸边的小树越来越能适应太阳的温度了，而且还感觉很舒服。慢慢的，河岸边的小树认为能静静地晒太阳是一种莫大的幸福。它还利用太阳光进行了光合作用和蒸腾作用，制造了许多它所需要的能量，并且还把根深深地扎进土里，吸收土里的养分。但是树下的那棵小树的根一直浮在表面，土壤表层没有太多水分和养分，所以它一直营养不良，长得也很慢。在连续几天的太阳后，土壤表层的基本被晒干了，树下的小树就更吸收不了多少水了，它的叶子都发黄了，就像生病了一样，没有一点精神。

不久，大树下的小树枯死了。而岸边的小树却越长越壮，越长越绿，最终成了一棵参天大树。这棵大树总会告诉那些小树，让它们不要害怕吃苦头，不要害怕挫折，因为只有经历了风雨才能见彩虹。正是因为在成功道路上多了这些绊脚石，才会使我们的道路，我们的生活更充实，更精彩。

河床上那颗外表极为光滑的鹅卵石见了也笑了。其实使卵石臻于完美的，并非与生俱来，而是水的且歌且舞。

精彩人生作文 篇8

——读《鲁宾逊漂流记》有感

他是一个不断探索、不断追求的人；他是一个乐观自信、积极向上的人；他是一个永不满足、不畏艰难的人……他就是《鲁滨逊漂流记》中的主人公——鲁滨逊。

鲁滨逊的一生充满传奇色彩。他不贪图安逸的生活，不愿死守父亲的家产，雄心勃勃，把遨游四海作为自己的理想。在一次航海中，船在南美洲海岸触礁了，船身破裂，水手和乘客都淹死了，只有鲁滨逊活了下来，他被海浪卷上岸，在一个小岛上艰难求生，28年后终于回到英国。鲁滨逊的经历告诉我们：只要有志气，有毅力，爱劳动，会创造，就可以做出不凡的事业。一个具有大无畏冒险进取精神的人，即使在恶劣的环境中，也终将会成为一个成功者，一个英雄。因此，我们无论遇到何种困难，也决不能放弃希望，有时候，希望就在眼前，比我们想象的还要近得多。

我们熟悉的张海迪阿姨就是一个很好的例子。张海迪身残志坚，以顽强的毅力创造了奇迹，她说的一句话最令我感动——“即使跌到一百次，我也要一百零一次地站起来。”是啊！如果我们也能像她一样，拥有百折不挠的毅力，那还有什么事不能做成呢？ 夏洛蒂姐妹也是一样。她们在逆境中成才，不怕打击，勇敢地向传统的观念和陈腐的偏见宣战，终于成为文学史上最亮的星星。

还有海伦。凯勒、霍金……他们这些人不都像鲁滨逊一样吗？面对困难永不放弃，勇敢拼搏，付出汗水去劳动，运用智慧去创造，终于战胜了命运。沉思中，我想到了自己，有时面对挑战和困难时，我丧失了信心，胆怯畏缩，未战先逃。如今，我读了这本书，知道了“害怕危险的心理比危险本身还要可怕一万倍。”以后，我要做像鲁滨逊一样，做一个有着大无畏冒险进取精神的人。鲁滨逊勇于探索，善于发现；勤于劳动，乐于创造；他教会我们面对困难不畏惧，要学会生存，学会坚强，学会为创造精彩人生而努力奋斗！

精彩人生作文 篇9

只有经历过地狱般的磨练，才能炼出创造天堂的力量；只有留过血的手指，才能弹出世间的绝唱。——泰戈尔

人生不可能永远一帆风顺，必然会有一些挫折。这些挫折就是我们进步的阶梯，就是我们成长的足迹，就是我们宝贵的财富！挫折能挖掘深藏于人心的潜能；能磨砺人们创造出更多的力量；能使人逐渐走向成熟。如果人生是一场长跑，那么挫折就是我们的起跑线；如果人生是一棵大树，那么挫折就是树的养料；如果人生是一片碧海，那么挫折就是海中的浪花。经历过挫折的人在生活中会小心翼翼，“夹着尾巴”生存。即使当挫折再一次来临，他们也会泰然自若，从容面对。人生如果一帆风顺，没有挫折，怎么能叫完整的人生呢？

张海迪，一位名噪中华的女人。在她的人生历程中，挫折总是和她相伴。她５岁时患脊髓病、高位截瘫，下肢从此失去知觉，生活不能自理。但是在残酷的命运挑战面前，张海迪没有沮丧和沉沦，她以顽强的毅力和恒心与疾病做斗争，经受了严峻的考验，对人生充满了信心。她虽然没有机会走进校门，却发愤学习，学完了小学、中学全部课程，自学了大学英语、日语、德语和世界语，并攻读了大学和硕士研究生的课程。1983年张海迪开始从事文学创作，先后翻译了《海边诊所》等数十万字的英语小说，编着了《向天空敞开的窗口》、《生命的追问》、《轮椅上的梦》、《绝顶》等书籍。其中《轮椅上的梦》在日本和韩国出版，而《生命的追问》出版不到半年，已重印3次，获得了全国“五个一工程”图书奖。在《生命的追问》之前，这个奖项还从没颁发给散文作品。从1983年开始，张海迪创作和翻译的作品超过100万字。她取得了多么大的成功啊。即使是我们这些健全人又有几个能达到她的高度。面对挫折，她没有放弃而是选择了奋斗，选择了拼搏。挫折对于她来说已不再是挫折，而是她成功的动力，在命运的挑战下，在挫折的磨砺下，她一步一步迈向了成功，最终取得了如今的成就。

“故天将降大任于是人也，必先苦其心志，劳其筋骨，饿其体肤，空乏其身，行拂乱其所为，所以动心忍性，曾益其所不能。”回顾历史我们不难发现，那些功成名就的人在他们成长的历程中，挫折总是必不可少的。孟子的这句话也许是一个规律，被古往今来的名人们所践行。大仲马说过“在人生中总是会有一块顽石，那就是挫折，然而我们可以利用这些顽石成为我们登向成功的垫脚石。”挫折人人都会有，正是因为有了这些挫折，我们的人生才变得精彩！