第一篇:六级作文-教师用
大学英语六级作文培训
(教师用)教学步骤:
1.考试题型和要求
2。应试策略
3历年题型分析
4。议论文分类
5。常用句型讲解 6. 作文实践
7。范文讲解
一、考试题型和要求
目的是测试学生运用英语书面表达思想的一般能力。考试时间为30分钟,要求写出不少于120个词的短文。六级考试作 文的出题方式有:命题,作文看图画或图表作 文,根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要 或大意,给出关键词作文等。考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识,不涉及 知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。对作文的要 求是:切题,文理通顺,表达正确,意思连贯,无重大语言错误。内容切题,文字连贯,条理清楚。一)作文评分标准
1.CET检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规 定的六级教学要求,对作文的评判应以此 要求为准则。
2.CET作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。
3.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评 判。内容和语言是一个统一体,作文应表达题 目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,也 要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想,也 就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障 碍。
4.避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括 满分;该给低分的给低分,包括0分,一名阅 卷人员在所阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的 几种分数。(二)作文评分标准 1.本题满分为15分。
2.阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分 及14分。各有标准样卷1、2份。3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照样卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该 分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,即可加 一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但 不得加或减 半分。
4.评分标准: 2分……条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎 或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性 差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清 楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中 有一些是严重错误。11分……切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。14分……切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小 错。[注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有 几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。
5.字数不足应酌情扣分 累计字数 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 70-79 <69 扣分 1 2 3 5 7 9 [注]1.如题目中给出主题句,起始句,结束句,均不得计入所写字数。2.只写一段者:0-4分;只写两段者:0-9分(指规定三段的作文)3.为了便于问卷人员掌握评分标准,现将各 档作文分相当1百分制的得分,列表如下,称 为得分率。其中9分的得分率为60(相当于百 分制的60分)。作文分 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 得分率 100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7 从1997年6月起,有“作文最低制”标准,足见教委对作文之重视。作文0分,总分即为0分,作文低于6分,总分中要减去6分,然后再加实得作文分。
二、应试策略
1.)阅卷老师的弱点:
1,快,要求一分钟一份,实际上有老师50秒一份,字迹潦草很吃亏。2.好多老师只看第一段、最后一段,或只看前三、五个句子。
3.对大词、好词的偏爱。如wonderful而不是good,pretty而不是beautiful。
2.)作文题目本身的局限:
1. 字数要求只是泛泛而谈,并不深入,有话可说,不必猜题。
2.规定了主题句,不存在新思想。它说金钱是万恶之源,就批判,说是幸福之本,就推崇。3. 没必要一定写出自己的观点,可以挑好写的写。如my favourite TV program,最好的新闻、体育,而不是“非诚勿扰”。
3} 保证基本正确 四、六级考生的最大问题不是写得太简单,而是严重错误太多。基础一般的同学即使使用小学或中学词汇和句型,只要使用得基本正确,也可以得到及格分数。考生最常犯的语言错误有三类:语法、拼写、标点。最常犯的语法错误包括:时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单复数等。
4)争取丰富多变,拿高分
基础较好的同学,要想取得四、六级写作高分,应做到丰富多变。丰富多变体现在词汇和句型两方面。同一词语在一句话、一个段落乃至一篇文章中最好 不要重复出现,应尽量使用同、近义词替换(无法替换的关键词除外)。例如:think可以替换为suppose,reckon, assume, argue等词。如果想不到同、近义词,可以使用上义词进行替换。此外,句型也应富于变化,不要拘泥于主谓宾句型,可以使用主系表、过去分词和现在分词短 语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句等多种句型。
六级只需12句左右。全文应以短句为主,长短句相结合。句子长度的最佳排列:三长两短,所谓短句是指10个词左右的句子,不能全篇都是5、6个词的短句。同时,全文应有一定数量的长句,一般15~20词即可,太长则易冗赘。精炼的短句可以放在段首表示强调;复杂的长句可以进行具体的论证、举例或描述。
5)打开思路:第一招问为什么,比如写汽车的坏处,为什么有坏处-太贵-我国经济不发达-处于第三世界-人口多-多修停车场、道路-占耕地、拥挤等等,最后整理一下思路。
第二招,对立统一,先抨击对立面。如“大学生要了解社会”,先说有人认为大学生深入社会是浪费时间、干扰学习,世俗化等。
第三招,用比喻。比如说书的好处,像灯塔导航,像良师益友,像粮食,就生动 第四招,举例子,生动,容易理解。第五招,用排比。6)注意起承转合
7)审题、构思、列出可能用到的闪光点(句式)、把想到的好词、好句用上、检查 提高英语写作要多读、多背、多写、多改。多读、多背是首要任务,是积累输入的关键。考生应大量积累经典英文句型、表达和范文,平时勤于背诵。
上述的高分策略是提高四、六级英语写作水平最有效的方法。在练习写作的初始阶段, 可勤查语法书和字典等工具书, 背记常用词和短语,以扩大词汇量,拓展知识面。背单词时要深刻理解所背词语的内在含义,并了解其使用环境。备考时,熟记一些过渡词、句型和范文,并进行仿写。考试时,使用学习过的、熟悉而有把握的词汇和句型,没有把握的句子,尽量采取“回避政策”,切忌自编自造汉语式的英语词组和句型.三、历年题型分析(1993-2010)
1.Cycles and City Traffic.1.近年来中国城市中的摩托车
2.摩托车的优点和缺点
3.你对我国城市中摩托车发展前景的看法
2.My View on Opportunity.有些人认为机会是极少的,另一些人则认为人人都有某种机会。你的看法如何?写出你的观点,说明你的理由并举例。在你的文章结尾处不要忘记写出你的结论。
3.We Need to Broaden Our Knowledge.1.科学技术是社会发展所不可缺少的2.社会科学和自然科学相互渗透
3.现代大学生需要广博的知识
4.My view on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements.1.现在有些不良的商业广告
2.这些广告的副作用和危害性
3.我对这些广告的态度
5.Should Firecrackers Be Banned? 1.有人认为放鞭炮是好事,为什么?
2.有人认为放鞭炮是坏事,为什么?
3.我的看法。(Suggested key words: firecrackers 鞭炮 set off / let off [放鞭炮])
6. Why I Take the College English Test Band 6.1.有人认为没有必要参加大学英语六级考试(简称CET-6)。
2.我参加CET-6考试的理由。
7。Health Gains in Developing Countries.1.以下图为依据描述发展中国家的期望寿命(life expectancy)和婴儿死亡率(infant mortality)的变化情况。
2.说明引起变化的各种原因。
8。Haste Makes Waste 3 1.为什么说“欲速则不达” 2.试举例说明
9。My View on Job-Hopping
1.有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作,因为......2.有些人喜欢经常更换工作,因为......3.我的看法
10。My View on Fake Commodities
1.假冒伪劣商品的危害。
2.怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品。
11。1998年
6、Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? 1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运。
2.我认为数字和运气无关,......12、1999年1月Don’t Hesitate to Say “No” 1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们说“不” 2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不” 3.该说“不”时不说“不”的坏处
13、Reading Selectively Or Extensively? 1.有人认为读书要有选择
2.有人认为应当博览群书
3.我的看法 14、2000年1月How I Finance My College Education 1.上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多种途径解决
2.哪种途径适合于我(说明理由)
15、2000年6月 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? 1.很多认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是......2.也有人持不同意见,......3.我的看法和打算
A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test(CET).16、2001年1月How to Succeed in a Job Interview? 1.面试在求职过程中的作用
2.取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是......17、2001年6月CET作文题目
write a letter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday.You should write a t least 120 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.4 1.表示欢迎
2.提出对度假安排的建议
3.提醒应注意的事项
A letter to a Schoolmate
June 23, 2001 Dear Xiao Wang,Yours,Zhang Ying 18、2002年1月A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus:
假设你是李明,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。
January 12th, 2002 Dear Mr.President, 18、2002年6月Student Use of Computers.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
1.上图所示为某校大学生平均每周使用计算机的时间: 1990年(2 hours)、1995年(4 hours)、2002年(14 hours),请描述其变化;
2.请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明);
3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。
19、2003年1月It Pays to Be Honest 1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象
2.诚实利人利已,做人应该诚实 20、2003年6月Changes of Ownership of Houses in China 图表内容是1990,1995,2000的公房和私房变化柱状表,趋势是公房越来越少,私房越来越多。字数150以上,时间30分钟。提纲:1.简单描述一下图表内容
2.变化原因
3.这个变化对个人和社会的影响21、2004年1月Reduce Waste on Campus
1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重
2.浪费的危害
3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 22、2004年6月 设想你买了一本英文词典,发现有这样那样的质量问题,书店的服务态度又不好,因此给报社编辑写信。信中必须包括以下内容:
1、事情的起因
2、与书店交涉的经过
3、呼吁服务行业必须提高服务质量 23、2005年1月Your Help Needed
1、对病人的简单介绍:目前的病情和家庭情况
2、目前的困难:无法继续承担医疗费用,需要护理
3、希望捐助,联系方式 23、2005年6月18日 “On Piracy” of no less than 150 words.1.目前盗版的现象比较严重。
2.造成这种现象的原因及危害
3.我们应该怎么做
Useful words and expressions
盗版piracy(n)
盗版产品pirated products
知识产权intellectual products
侵犯版权infringe sb’s copyright, copyright infringement 24、2006年1月
Directions: For this part.You are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer.You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.对公司提供职位表示感谢
2.解释为何不能接受所提供职位的原因
3.希望予以谅解,并表达对公司的良好祝愿.25、2006年6月题目:国外旅游
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游
2、出现这种现象的原因
3、这种现象可能产生的影响 26、2006年12月The Importance of Reading Classics阅读经典著作的重要性
1、阅读经典著作对人的成长至关重要
2、现在人们越来越少阅读经典著作,原因是„„
3、作为大学生,你应该怎么做27、2007年6月Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed 1.有的人认为应该有回报
2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报
3.我的看法 28、2007年12月The digital age 1.如今,数字化产品越来越多,如„
2.使用数字化产品对于人们学习工作和生活的影响 29、2008年6月Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?
1.随着信息技术的发展,电子图书越来越多
2.有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书,理由是„„
3.我的看法
范文一:
The number of E-books is constantly on the rise as a result of the rapid development of information technology.It is thought by some people that E-books might replace traditional books in some time because of various advantages of E-books over paper ones.A great variety of reasons are held by people with the above viewpoint in which economy is the key factor to make such prediction attainable.To start with, since all E-books could be downloaded from the internet, most of which are free of charge, whereas paper books in book stores are relatively expensive.Besides, the popularity of E-books could reduce or even avoid the waste of paper.Finally, E-books can be easily stored in our computer or other portable disks while paper books usually occupy too much space on our shelves.In short, E-books have obviously become more and more popular in our daily life.As long as we can ensure the safety of E-books, we can enjoy a better life.范文二:
With the advancement of science and technology, there’s a steady increase in the number of E-books, or electronic books.Some experts have claimed that these books will be prevalent, thus rendering all traditional ones in disuse, however, other authorities maintain that the traditional books are here to stay.From my perspective, I’m firmly sided with the former.There are several reasons responsible for my point.For one thing, it is convenient for people to carry E-books around.Therefore, readers will be no longer concerned about the heavy burden within their bag.What’ more, a considerable number of E-books can be stored away altogether in the reading gadget thanks to their digital pattern, which is a huge leap from conventional books given its cost-reducing and space-saving nature.Above all, people might finally find a workable solution to deforestation, a result brought about by paper use.To sum up, traditional books will still be the leading means of reading, however, sooner or later, the age of paper books will be ultimately outlived by E-books.30、2008年12月 How to improve student's mental health
1、大学生的心理健康十分重要
2、因此,学校可以......3、我们自己应当......Students' mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life.There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains.Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems.Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation.To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention.What's more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats.Teaches may have a chance to find them in advance.Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time.Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others.(学校)
From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions.For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good 9 way to release pressure.Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue.(我们)31、2009年6月
On the Importance of a Name
有人认为名字(名称)不重要;
有人认为非常重要;
你认为呢?
On the Importance of a Name
A name is the representation of a person or an entity.It plays an important role in social recognition, just as the old saying goes: a thing is the entity of a name.However, people have perse opinions on the importance of a name.Some people say that name is important, while the others maintain the other way round.But I think name is of great importance because it is the symbol that distinguishes one thing or person from the others.We cannot deny the importance of a name, be it for a person or a thing.In the world today, no one can live without identification because they must get social recognition, and name is the symbol of the identification.Once a person or a thing gets social recognition, people will remember their names, and they will get further improvement.Besides, a good name will bring people some nice association.A person with a special name may be easily accepted by a group or a community because of the deep impression the name leaves.As for companies or products, a name is also vitally important.Years ago, a computer company spent millions of dollars for the name “Acer”.Since then, the company caught the attention of potential customers and became one of giants in the field.However, another company was facing bankruptcy, for the name of its product implies unfavorable meaning thus cannot be sold out.Can we say that name is not important?
A name may affect the whole life of a person, and a name may also influence the future of a company and its products.Therefore, we must treat names carefully.http://www.feisuxs/slj/ShowArticle.asp?anclassid=155&nclassid=1377&ArticleId=219566 32、2009年12月should parents send their kids to art classes? 1现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班 2对这种做法有人表示支持,有人并不赞成 3我认为
范文(1)Should parents send their kids to art classes?
With the development of our society and economy, parents become more concerned about the future competition of children , so more and more parents manage kinds of ways to enhance the ability of children in every aspects , like they sent their children to art class after schoo or at weekends in order to promise their kids a more competitive future.The majority parents have the above view on this issue, beliving it is a good way to cultivate the children’s interests and hobbies, paving their future path in life.while there are also some people who think that this will give kids heavy burden, not really good for their growth.In my opinion, we should respect our kids and do something to child's own interests and hobbies rather than blindness.Second, do not give too much pressure on kids, giving them a healthy environment for growth is much more than attending art classes.范文(2)Should parents send their kids to art classes?
Nowadays,it has been common that parents send their kids to various art classes such as music, drawing dancing ,etc.at weekend or during holiday。
Some people take it for granted and think through this method, their kids can make use of leisure time to learn more skills and be prepared for the future fierce competition in the adult world.Nevertheless, there are still some sounds against this phenomenon, saying that it shouldn’t be encouraged。
As far as I’m concerned, I stand by the latter side, because its disadvantages far outweigh than the advantages.Above all, for children, play is their nature.It will do great harm to both their physical and mental health if they are deprived of the right to have enough free time.For another thing, most kids are sent to art schools to learn thing they are not even interested in.Consequently, they will be reluctant to cooperate with the teachers resulting only in the waste of time and energy.Thus, obviously, it is better to set children free to do things in which they passion actually lies, rather than forcing then to go to art classes 33、2010年6月 Due Attitude Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese
1、近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文的现象
2、出现这种现象的原因和后果
3、为了改变这种状况,我认为„„
In recent years, the ignorance of Chinese has been prevailing among the students.In contrast, more and more students attach great importance to foreign languages 11 since the economic globalization.In this essay, I will discuss the factors and consequences of this phenomenon and offer my own view on it.There are a number of factors which can be attributed to this situation.One of the most common factors is that the majority of people hold a view that English is the dominant language in the world and we should give priority to it.Moreover, although Chinese is a compulsory course in higher education, most professors and students haven’t given due attitude to it as fewer courses and credits are distributed to Chinese and fewer students attend the class or choose it as their major.And the fundamental factor is that most students take it for granted that Chinese is their mother tongue and they’ve already mastered it.As far as I’m concerned, this ignorance may be the very first step to furthermore overlook Chinese cultures and in order to avoid this consequence--to the students, they should read more Chinese articles not only to gain knowledge but also to broaden their scope;to the schools and colleges, they should alter the traditional teaching approaches to interest more students to study Chinese such as speeches and dramas.To live, to learn, our Chinese still need to be promoted.总结:以论说文居多,少数有信件和图表作文。六级考试写作主题大多是校园生活,其次是和人们日常生活相关的热门话题。其实考什么不重要。重要的是从不同的题目中找到写作共同的规律。分析以往试题,大多文章的结构一般是简要描述现象,主体部分是分析原因或者列举影响,最后大多是总结和建议。有时会有一些变动,基本结构是类同。
作文的主题也不是考生担心的问题,因为考试的中心是语言,内容不偏题就行。在我们课堂讲解中,对于这种文章大家都会有一些成熟的句型或模式,关键是灵活应用这些句型,另外英语重变化,课堂中教的加法句、减法句、插入句等等都是可以用的。最后要提醒的是减少语言错误。
四、议论文分类
信件:注意主题、信件格式(称呼、语气、结束)
图表:把图表转化成文字,信息,说明什么问题,表达观点 论说文:解决问题(how to),正反观点、陈述型
五、常用句型讲解
六、作文实践
七、范文讲解
第二篇:六级作文万能
六级作文万能模板4--原因现象型
With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful.The phenomenon of _______(主题现象)is an example of the former / latter one.There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with, __________________(原因1).Furthermore, ______________________(原因2).Eventually, __________________________(原因3).Good as ____________(主题现象)is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages.The apparent example is that ___________(缺点例子1).In addition, ___________(缺点例子2).On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society.There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate __________(主题现象)and make our life more comfortable.六级作文万能模板3-分析利弊型
(1)模板一
Nowadays many people prefer __________(主题)because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.On the one hand, ________________(主题的优点1).On the other hand, ___________________(主题的优点2).But everything can be pided into two.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________(主题的缺点1).To make matters worse, __________________________(主题的缺点2).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________(主题)itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.六级作文万能模板2-分析原因解决问题型
With the development of the society, with the advent of _____________(相关事物或现象), we have to face a problem that ______________________(主题问题).What are the reasons for it? In the following paragraphs, I’ll venture to explore the reasons.To
start with, _____________________(阐述原因1).Moreover, __________________(阐述原因2).In addition, _______________________(阐述原因3).In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken.For one thing, it is high time that people all over China realized the importance of __________________(解决主题问题).For another, the government should issue strict laws and regulations in order to put the situation under control.六级作文万能模板1-问题解决多方法选择型
With the development of modern industry, more and more people are concerned about the problem that ______________(主题问题).Accordingly, _______________________________(伴随主题问题出现的新问题)is becoming more and more serious.Confronted with ___________________________(主题问题), we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, _________________________(解决方法1).For another, _________________________________(解决方法2).Finally, _________________________________(解决方法3).As far as I am concerned, the best way out is ________________________(解决方法3).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ____________________(解决方法3的优点和好处).
第三篇:六级作文模版
六级万能作文公式 开头万能公式:
1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是8,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
经典句型:
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”(适用于已记住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(适用于自编名言)更多经典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.结尾万能公式:
1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.… 写作绝招
写作的“七项基本原则”:
一、长 短 句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、主 题 句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句).Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
四、短语优先原则
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其
一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其
二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
五、多实少虚原则
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
六、多变句式原则
1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语:
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语:
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如
果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
举例:This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
When to go, Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一举)
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(气势恢宏)
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、挑战极限原则
既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
写作绝招
文章主体段落三大杀手锏:
一、举实例
思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型:
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比较
方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语: 相似的比较:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比较:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
三、换言之
没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子:
I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语:
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
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第四篇:六级作文
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Clean Your Plate Campaign 光盘行动
The campaign, Clean Your Plate Campaign, is initiated by nongovernmental organizations and activists, which urges people to save food by not wasting anything on the dining table.The campaign, launched on weibo, is soon joined by millions of netizens across China in a bid to curb food wastage and appreciate the virtue of being thrifty even in times of plenty.Every Chinese student is taught this Tang Dynasty poem: Farmers weeding at noon, sweat down the field soon.Who knows food on a tray, thanks to their toiling day.In the Chinese original, the word “food” receives emphasis, literally meaning: “every grain on the plate is an embodiment of hard work”.Chinese parents would use this to teach their children not to waste food because it is the product of farmers' exhausting labor under the scorching sun or in rainstorms.Yet, when we dine out, we'll be astounded by the amount of food squandered.The estimated annual wastage of grain in China is estimated to be 50 million tons, enough to feed about 200 million people for one year.The campaign to finish up one's plate, or “guangpan” in catchy slang, is meant to drill some common sense into a vanity-conscious society that food is meant for your mouth and too much of it will not make you an important person.People from across the social pide should support the Clean Your Plate Campaign.
第五篇:六级作文
话题:Open Courses
1.现在网络公开课很盛行;2.网络公开课有不少好处,也存在一些问题;3.我对此的建议。
范文:
Online open courses are gaining popularity in recent years.Follwoing globally famous universities like Yale and Harvard, some universities in China have also started to offer online open courses.Those courses have attracted people from all classes with different occupations.The courses have brought many benefits to people.Many of the courses are provided by universities in foreign countries, and thus offer fresh ideas to us.Through them, we can keep up with what people are thinking all over the world.But that can also be a problem.Some of the courses may not be very suitable for Chinese students because of cultural differences and may cause chaos on Chinese campus.In my opinion, online open course is useful and we should make use of it to broaden our horizons.But we should also remember to have our own thinking and not be brainwashed by improper ideas.题目:On Blind-date Show
1、目前电视相亲节目很流行
2、出现这种现象的原因是:
3、我对此的看法
范文:
Nowadays, the blind-date shows are becoming more and more popular.Whenever we turn on TV, those incredible senses of blind-date shows would pop up on the screen.Many people, from teenagers to the elderly, are so crazy about these shows that they never miss a single chance to watch them.Three reasons would contribute to the popularity of these blind-date shows.To begin with, there are over 180 million people who remain single long after they have reached the official age for marriage.Moreover, a great number of people would like to amuse themselves by watching other people dating.Last but not least,more and more television producers add a couple of attractive elements to cater for the different tastes of the audience.In my view, the government should impose restrictions to these blind-date shows.Many of these shows advocate money-warship and materialism;quite a few of the guests’ identities are artificial.If these problems are not solved, the misleading effects can be disastrous.题目:Self-help Traveling
1、越来越多的大学生选择“自助游”
2、也会带来一些问题
3、我的看法
范文:
Self-help traveling enjoys great popularity among college students today.The reason may be that they can save a lot of money by arranging the routes, booking cheaper hotels and deciding cheaper transportation tools all by themselves.Convenient and economical as self-help traveling sounds, they still have some potential problems.Perhaps the most important one is the safety problem.Being alone without a group or a tour guide, a traveler may be helpless in face of danger, i.e.robbery, wild animal attacks, etc.In addition, they are more likely to be at risk of getting lost when traveling alone in a city strange to them or in the remote countryside.In my view, self-help traveling can be exciting and challenging and is worth trying.However, before setting out alone, travelers should make good preparations.Besides, they should bear safety and security in mind all the time and keep in touch with their friends or relatives.Thus, they can enjoy both safety and pleasure of exploring different places.题目:On Adversity
1、每个人都会碰到逆境
2、人们对逆境的看法不一
3、我的看法
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Everyone meets setbacks and frustrations in life,and each tries hard to avoid them, only to find that they are just like your own shadow accompanying you all your life.When confronted with adversity, different people make different response.Some people consider it a stumbling block on the road to success,and get depressed or even sink into despair, others consider it the stairway to great accomplishments and try to overcome it with constant struggle.The latter, therefore, will recognize their disadvantages from their temporary defeat,draw lessons from it,and grow stronger each time they have coped with a difficulty.In my opinion, adversity often leads to prosperity.Painful and depressing as it is, overcoming adversity endows us with great confidence that is crucial to success.Great people are not born successful, they are great only because they have tempered their personality and remedied their deficiencies through experiencing countless adversities and defeats,which is actually a goddess of blessing in disguise.Traveling Abroad
In recent years, more and more citizens are traveling abroad.In 1995, the number of people who choose to travel abroad was about 10000.The number quadrupled to nearly 40000 in 2000.And in 2005, the number further climbed above 12000.There are several reasons for the shocking rise.To begin with, the improvement of the life standards makes traveling abroad affordable to more and more people.Moreover, the convenient transportation facilities make more destinations accessible.The last but not the least, after visiting most famous scenic spots throughout our country, exotic cultures seem to appeal more to many citizens.And gradually, they begin to treat traveling abroad as a new fashion.This trend is beneficial for people on the whole.On one hand, it is a very interesting and romantic way to spend one's vacation.On the other hand, it enlarges people's vision by having a look at what is going on in a different country.话题:树立目标
1.树立目标很重要2.原因是„„3.如何设立和达到目标
The Importance of Goal
There is no denying that setting a goal is very important.We find that successful people are always those having and achieving their goals.They set goals, short-term or long-run, to help realize their visions.Why is goal-setting important? By setting goals you are taking control of the tempo of your life.It is having a map to guide you to where you want to head for.With a clear direction, and with certain plans, you will straightly get what you want.On the contrary, without a goal ,you will live a wandering life.You do not know where to go, what you want and why you are listless.Then your life becomes dull and meaningles just like the dead water in a muddy lake.From my point of view, goals are not difficult to set and realize.First, you should make clear what you really want, which constitutes your goals.Then you make detailed palans and follow the through, as many wi话题:How to Enhance
the Sense of Happiness
1.人们对于如何提升幸福感有不同看法 2.幸福感提升不仅包含物质层面,也指„„
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The sense of happiness is of great significance.As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future.However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it.In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also refers to several others aspects.Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of inpiduals admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love.Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness.It is health that enables them to build up a solid foundation for anything significant.As a college student, I am convinced that never can money equal happiness.To enhance our sense of happiness, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich their knowledge, broaden their horizon and cultivate their ability.1.当今社会,社交网站很流行 2.各人对此看法不同 3.我的看法
话题:Social Network Sites
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Social Network Sites
In recent years, social network sites like Renren and Kaixin have rapidly gained popularity among all kinds of people.Many people spend a lot of time on those sites chatting, making friends and playing games.Those sites have become a part of their life.The public hold different views on this phenomenon.Some are in favor of those sites for they provide many opportunities to know other people and to know what’s happening in the world.Besides, they’re very convenient to access.One can use a computer or cell phone to log on at home, in a restaurant, or even in the subway.But some people don’t approve of the social network sites.They say that people are wasting too much time on the sites.Some even get addicted to them and abandon their real life.After all, they don’t live in the virtual world.In my opinion, the social network sites can be very helpful when we want to keep in touch with friends, but we must remember that the real world is the most important in our life.1.有人相信知识能改变命运2.有人则认为当今社会光靠知识已经很难改变命运3.我认为„„
Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?
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Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?
Some people have always believed that knowledge can change their destiny.Most of them are those from undeveloped areas, and by knowledge they usually mean diploma.They believe that if they send the kids in the family to college and that the kids get a diploma, they can change the kids’ destiny from doing farm work to enjoy a modern and advanced life in the city.However, some hold a different view.They say that in today’s society, knowledge alone is not enough to change destiny.To succeed in this complicated age, one needs not only knowledge, but also good communicating skills and a wide horizon, which cannot be easily learned in class.Knowledge itself is also more complicated than before.With technologies constantly advancing, one needs good learning ability to keep up with the time.In my opinion, knowledge is essential, but it is not everything.To change the destiny, one needs to keep learning various skills, to widen his horizons, and to keep pace with the latest trend.