雅思A类满分小作文经典示例

第一篇：雅思A类满分小作文经典示例

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雅思A类满分小作文经典示例

Writing 1 Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write your answer in a word processing program on your computer.The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.Club satisfaction survey table

Range of activities--------Very satisfied---------Satisfied---------Not satisfied

Ferrale members---------------35%----------------------35%-------------------30%

Male memebers----------------55%----------------------40%---------------------5%

Club facilities

Ferrale members---------------64%----------------------22%-------------------14%

Male members------------------63%----------------------27%-------------------10%

Opening hours

Female members---------------72%----------------------25%--------------------3%

Male members------------------44%----------------------19%-------------------37%

范文:

The table compares the opinions of male and female club members about the services provided by a city sports club.We can see from the responses that the male members are generally happy or satisfied with the range of activities at the club, with only 5% dissatisfied.In contrast，资料来源：教育优选 http://www.teniu.cc/

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however, only about two-thirds of female members were positive about the activity range and almost a third were dissatisfied.The genders were more in agreement about the club facilities.Only 14% of women and 10% of men were unhappy with these, and the majority(64 and 63% respectively)were very positive.Finally, the female respondents were much happier with the club opening hours than their male counterparts.Almost three-quarters of them were very satisfied with these and only 3% were unhappy, whereas nearly 40% of the men expressed their dissatisfaction.Overall, the table indicates that female members are most unhappy with the range of activities, while male members feel that opening hours are the least satisfactory aspect of the club.资料来源：教育优选 http://www.teniu.cc/

第二篇：浅谈雅思A类小作文核心

说起雅思写作，很多考生都会觉得很迷茫。一边拼命记忆句式和模板的同时，拿到作文题后还是一脸茫然。上海环球雅思朱雅婷老师为大家提供一些方案来解决这些问题。

其实在雅思写作过程中，尤其是在写雅思A类的小作文的时候，笔者认为句式都并不是那么重要。重要的是还原图片信息。因此，在写雅思小作文的时候，首先要做到的就是“准确”而“有条理”的对图上信息进行描述。

首先，关于“准确”，是指能够准确罗列图上的相关信息，能够精确的表述图上的趋势，变化，涨跌幅度，占据比重，流程步骤等。例如增长，我们可以说rise 或者 increase, 我们也可以用creep up 表示较平缓的增长，boom 表示较快较高的增长，用rocket 表示急剧的飙升。

其次，关于“有条理”，是指在表述不同数据的时候能够按照两两数据间适当关系进行有序的罗列。比如说：简单的分数或者倍数关系，两个数据间的联动关系等。

因为在图表类作文中，我们应该把考官当做一个蒙着眼的听众，考生需要通过语言向考官描述整张图表的信息。这就需要考生客观准确的还原信息，同时以有条理的表述清晰的罗列有迹可循数据。

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第三篇：雅思小作文之书信类

雅思小作文中经常会出现书信的形式，而要想拿到高分，就的首先了解雅思书信格式是怎么样的，为此上海环球雅思写作老师特意给大家整理了雅思书信写作的格式，分享给大家，希望对大家有所帮助。

雅思考试一般要求称呼语、信的主题内容和结束语三部分

称呼语： 在考试中，如果是给熟悉的人写信可以直呼其名或用他们的昵称，比如：“Sonic” 或 “Kitty” 等;如果与对方不是很熟悉可以使用“Dear Mr.Lee”或 “Dear Sir or Madam”等。

信的主体： 一般题目中除了会对写信的背景进行介绍，还会提供3-4个子标题作为提示。在信的主体部分，考生应该尽量清楚直接的书写信件。第一段应该说明信的主旨，然后在后续的段落里提供细节，清楚的说明你希望收信人该如何做进一步的反应。

结束语： 在结束语中总结心境或写信的目的。在写信人的名字前加上“sincerely yours”，“thankful”或 “obedient”。这种总结与没有什么真正的目的，但确是应有的礼节。一封信若是没有礼貌的结束语则没有敬意可言了。

创作一封清晰、简明的书信关键是要通过选取正确的语言，并利用清晰的方式(结构和逻辑)表达出来。写每一封书信前都需要了解这封信是写给谁的及收信人与你之间的关系，同时要明确写信的原因及场合等。

以上就是雅思写作书信格式介绍的全部内容，分享给大家，希望对大家有所帮助，最后上海环球雅思写作老师祝大家都能考出好成绩。

第四篇：雅思G类小作文及翻译

5.1.2 范例5-1 投诉信

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to you to complain about the CD Player which I bought in your store in January．After only two days，things started to go wrong．我正写信给你投诉一月份在你们店里买的CD播放机。仅仅两天后，东西就出问题了。

The first problem was the CD drawer，which opened and closed too quickly．I nearly trapped my fingers in it．The next day，I recorded a CD onto a cassette．Everything worked，but the sound quality was very poor．On the following day，the CD Pause button stopped working太快了。我差点把手指卡进去。第二天，我将一张CD刻录到磁带上。一切都正常，但声音质量很差劲。第二天，CD暂停键停止工作。

Naturally，I returned the player to you for repair．Your assistant said I would have to wait only a

week．After two weeks，the necessary spare parts had still not arrived．Eventually，nine weeks later，I collected the stereo．The CD player worked properly，but there was no improvement in the recording quality．自然而然地，我将播放器还给你们返修。你们的助理说我只需要等一个礼拜。两周后，必要的配件部分仍然未到。最后，九周后，我将音响组装起来。CD播放器工作正常，但刻录质量没有得到改善。I am not satisfied with the equipment nor with the service I have received．I am therefore writing to ask for a full refund．I will return the player to your shop on Monday and I expect to receive a cheque for $250退给我$250。

Yours faithfullyJohns琼斯

(181 words)

范例5-2 道歉信

Dear Mr./Ms.,亲爱的xxx女士/先生，I received your letter yesterday complaining that the central heating system in your new house had not been completed by the date promised．I feel awfully sorry that the problem has been caused by my mistake about the date for completion on referring to our earlier correspondence．我昨天收到关于您新房中央供暖系统到期未完工的投诉。对此我感到非常抱歉，这个问题是由于我参照原来的合同弄错了完工时间。

I mistook your date of completion for next week due to my inattention，so the working team installed the system according to the wrong date．I realize the inconvenience that our oversight must be causing you and will do everything possible to avoid any further delay．I have already given instructions for the work to have priority and the engineers working on the job to be placed on overtime记错成下周，所以工程队根据错误的时间安装系统。我意识到我们的疏忽给您带来的不变，我们会尽可能地加快进程。我已经下令将您的事宜优先处理，工程师们会加班完成工作。

I assure you that these arrangements should see the installation completed by next weekend．I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your wishes意。

The fault is entirely mine and I deeply regret that it happened．(159 words)这个错误完全在我，我对该事深感抱歉。

Yours faithfully,您忠诚的，Johns

Dear Mr.and Mrs.JohnsI have arrived home safely．I am writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality to me during my recent stay in your beautiful home.我已安全到家。我写信来感谢近期在你家这段时间对我的款待。During my stay，I was overwhelmed by the enthusiasm expressed by you and your family．We had interesting discussions on my training program．I have found these discussions very informative and useful．I sincerely hope we could have more exchanges like this one later人所展现的热情，我受宠若惊。我们曾经就培训计划有过愉快的讨论。我觉得讨论非常有意义。我真心的希望以后还能像上次一样彼此交换意见。

Moreover，there is one thing I need your help．I left my laptop computer in the bedroom I lived in your home．It is a silver one with the black keyboard.I wonder if you could send it back to me．Enclosed please find a cheque of 25 dollars．I hope it will cover the postage我把笔记本电脑落在你们家卧室了。是银色镶黑色键盘的。能不能请你们将它寄给我。请附上一张25美元的支票。我希望这够支付邮费。

I am looking forward to your early visit to China when I will be able to pay back some of the hospitality I received during my memorable stay in your beautiful country．我希望您们能早点来中国，好让我稍微报答在你们国家的美丽之旅期间受到的款待。

With kind personal regardsFaithfully yours, Mary

Dear Sir／Madam，亲爱的先生/小姐，Your advertisement for a Network Maintenance Engineer in the April 10 Student Daily interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking．你们4月10号在学生日报上发布的网络维护工程师这一职位吸引了我，因为你们描述的职位听起来正是我在寻找的。

According to the advertisement，your position requires a good university degree，Bachelor or above in Computer Science or equivalent field and proficiency in Windows NT 4.0 and Linux System．I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements．I will be graduating from XXX University this year with a MSC．My studies have included courses in computer control and management，and I designed a control simulation system developed with Microsoft Visual and SQL Server．根据广告，你们的职位要求有好的大学文凭，学士及以上的电脑科学或者相关专业，并且熟知Windows NT 4.0 和 Linux 操作系统。我觉得我满足这些要求。我今年会从xxx大学毕业拿到MSC学位。我的专业当中包含电脑控制管理课程，并且我用Microsoft Visual 和 SQL Server设计了一个控制模仿系统。

During my education，I have grasped the pinciples of my major subject area and gained practical

skills．Not only have I passed CET-6，but more importantly I can communicate fluently in English．My ability to write and speak English is a good standard．在学期间，我把握了我的专业领域并且获得了实践技巧。我不仅通过了大学六级，而且能用英语流利交流。我的英语口写能力优秀。

I would welcome an opportunity to attend you for an interview.Enclosed is my resume and if there is any additional information you require，please contact me．我希望能得到机会面试。附上我的简历，如果你们需要更多信息，请联系我。

Yours faithfully, 你忠诚的，John琼斯。

范例5-5咨询信

Dear Professor Moss, 亲爱的摩斯教授，I am Sandy，a junior student of the Department of Electrical and Computer Engineering．I am writing to inquire about your African Literature and Culture course．我是珊蒂，一名电子计算机工程学院的大三学生。我写信来咨询您的非洲文学文化课程。

Just a few days ago，I found the course when we were asked to choose optional for next semester．The name of African Literature and Culture aroused my great interest．Because of your reputation and my enthusiasm in literature, I hope I could study this course in next semester．Except the name，however，all I know about the course is that it is a two-hour one held on every Thursday afternoon．I want to get more details of the course．First of all，I would like to know the brief outline of the course．Moreover，I wonder if there are some relevant books that you can recommend for me to read before the course．几天前，当我们被要求选修下学期课程时，我看见了这门课。我对非洲文学文化非常感兴趣。由于您的声望和我对文学的热情，我希望下学期能学习这门课程。但是，除了名字，我只知道这门课程每周四下午上课2小时。我想知道更多的细节。首先，我想知道这门课程的大纲。还有，我想您能不能推荐基本参考书让我在开课之前阅读。

I also heard that another course of yours，Chinese Literature，is held every Friday afternoon．If the registration of this course hasn’t closed yet，I will be so glad to participate in your class．我还听说了您的另外一门课，每周五下午上课的中国文学。如果这门课的注册还未关闭，我也很想学习这门课。

Sorry to bother you．Your help will be greatly appreciated．(191 words)打扰您了。承蒙您的帮助。Sincerely yours,您忠诚的，范例5-6

Dear Mr.Clinton,I hope that this unintended letter would not surprise you．I used to study in your school, and this

letter is basically concerned about some courses I had been through.It is too bad some problems

occurred.Otherwise, I was very satisfied with my learning experience there.The management course is generally satisfactory．I have been especially impressed with the books the

lecturer had recommended.However，it has come to my attention that some of your lecturers are so

young that they seem to have deficient experience in the field of management．They should connect

those theories with the real world．I trust that your school can manage to improve this situation．Those

lecturers are undoubtedly aspiring，but I personally suggest that they can undergo more practical

training，and learn more about the application of theories．

Thanks a lot for your concern．I am looking forward to improvement, although I am no longer your student．

Sincerely yours，(192 words)

5-7

Dear Sir/Madam，I am looking for a single-bedroom apartment in London．Please let me know if you have any suitable

vacancies．I would be happy to give you a deposit to hold it.I am about to attend a training course in London during the months of July and August，and St．Atlas

Polytechnic College，the college where I will be studying, is at Queens Street．If possible，I would like to

have an apartment that is within two or three miles of the college．The apartment is preferably spacious，air conditioned with a private bathroom，a telephone line and Internet access．I will appreciate it if it is

quiet，comfortably furnished，because I think it will help me focus on my studies．I am willing to pay up

to ￡500 a month．

I

would appreciate hearing from you within the next two weeks．My email address is

xiaoyan@xtra.co.cn.Sincerely yours，Johnson Lee

范例5-9

Dear Sir／Madam，I am writing to inform you that I lost my shopping bag in your museum and I would like to ask for your help.我写信来通知你们我在你们博物馆丢了书包，我想向你们求助。

I paid a visit to your museum on May 13，2004．When I visited the hall of modern art and history，I left my handbag in the hall because of my carelessness.It is a black leather bag．There are some important things in it，including my passport，ID card，credit card，some checks and US $1,000．But the most important thing is my business address book，which records all my clients’ phone numbers and

appointment agenda in the following two weeks．我2004.3.13号去博物馆参观。当我游览现代艺术历史展厅时，我由于大意将书包落在那里。是个黑皮包。里面有些重要东西，包括我的护照，身份证，一些支票和1000美元。但最重要的是我的通讯录，里面记录着我的所有顾客的电话和接下来两周里我的约会日程。This bag is very important to me．My friends suggested me that I contact your department to seek help，so I write this letter to you anxiously．I hope you and your staff can help me find my lost bag．Your meticulous and warmhearted help will be greatly appreciated．这个包对我来说非常重要。我朋友建议我联系你们寻求帮助。我以我焦急地写信给你们。我希望你和你们员工能帮我找到丢失的包。对此我将感激不尽。

For more information about my lost thing，please contact me in the following ways：

Mobile phone：XXXXXXXXX Home phone：XXXXXX Office phone：XXXXXX 想知道更多关于失物的信息，请用以下方式联系我：电话xxxxxxx 家庭座机xxxxxxx 办公室电话xxxxxxx

Yours faithfully,Eva

范例5-8

Dear Jacky,I am pleased to invite you to join our little celebration which is currently planned to be held on Feb 23rd．So far we have not yet decided the precise time，but there are a collection of choices about

locations，which I want your suggestions．我很高兴邀请你参加我们的小聚会，暂定于2.23好举行。目前为止还没有确定确切时间，但有一些地址可供选择，我需要你们的建议。

Your earliest response will be highly appreciated，and I will definitely take into consideration all suggestions from you or anybody else being invited． The celebration is mainly concerned with my latest promotion．我会对您的反馈做出及时回应，我会考虑所有人的建议。庆祝会是关于我最近的升迁。Without your thorough support，it is impossible for me to be promoted，as I have been merely working for the company for half a year．Meanwhile，I feel it a precious chance for us，a group of friends，to come together to hold a relaxing talk and have some delicious food．没有你们的支持，我是不可能升职的，因为我才到公司半年。同时，我觉得这是一次珍贵的机会，让大家聚在一起聊天享受美食。Please do not bring anything but yourself if you can come over．If you can add some amusements to the celebration，for example，some jokes，I will be greatly pleased．I am looking forward to your reply，and waiting to meet you．聚会时只要人来就可以。如果您能为聚会助兴，比如讲笑话，我会很欢迎的。我期待您的反馈，希望您能来。

Yours truly，Mary

第五篇：雅思满分作文欣赏

雅思满分作文

It is certainly true that today traffic in cities throughout the world has become a major problem.This is obvious from the number of vehicles on our roads and the amount of pollution they cause.Probably the traffic problem is due to inpiduals travelling for work, study or shopping purposes, and this is evident in the rush hours we experience every morning and evening.It is also true that, these days, such daily commuting is not always necessary because people can do these things from home.We can see this in the options Information Technology gives us today.For instance, on-line work, distance learning and shopping facilities are all available via the Internet.However, even if everyone had access to the technology and the opportunity to work from home, it is unrealistic to think that everyone would want to.Even though the technology for working, studying or shopping on-line makes this option a possibility, nevertheless it would mean people had less freedom of choice and less social contact in their lives.This would have a large impact on society as a whole.So, in conclusion, I think that while this practice could reduce the traffic problems in our cities, it is most unlikely to be an acceptable solution.In terms of other solutions, perhaps we need to think more carefully about facilitating public transport and limiting private cars in our city centres.The development of public transport that is not road-based, such as sky trains or subways, would probably be a more acceptable alternative measure to reduce jams on our roads.-------------

首位雅思作文满分的学生感言

西安市庆安中学高中二年级的陈晨，一个17岁的小女孩，喜欢书法、爱练太极、打乒乓球，像别的女孩子一样爱漂亮。但不同的是，05年2月，国际英语雅思考试(IELTS)的考场上，这个来自西安市庆安中学高中二年级的女孩，仅用了40分钟，以一篇漂亮的作文得到了雅思历次考试有史以来全国首个作文满分近日获得新东方教育科技集团首次颁发的高分特等奖。同时，她的听说读写综合成绩为7.5分。看到这个成绩，陈晨自己也感到非常意外。

从开始上雅思辅导，到参加考试，她一共才用了一个多月的准备时间。而这一个多月的背后则是长达数年的不断坚持。

兴趣就是最好的老师

说起自己当初学英语，陈晨笑言，这是一个美丽的意外。正经开始学英语应该是从初中开始。但初一的时候，她并不喜欢英语。因为当时她的英语口语特别不好，加上这种学习是和考试挂钩的，功课的压力，让她很难对这门难学的功课产生好感。但到了初二，这种局面就完全转变了。初二的时候，陈晨班里来了一位外教。他的课堂内容几乎是全英语教学。但陈晨非但没有发怵，反而通过这位外教老师活泼轻松的课堂教学慢慢喜欢上了这门不久前还毫不“感冒”的课程。直到现在想起来，陈晨还一直感激这位引领她踏上英语学习之路的老师。

培养纯正英式思维

很多人都懂得阅读是英语学习的基础这个道理。但真正能做到这点和凭借这点确实取得成绩的人却仍是少数。陈晨认为，自己取得今天这个意想不到的好成绩，绝大部分功劳还属平时的阅读功底扎实。对于阅读，她有自己独到的体会。陈晨说，自己平时阅读的英文大多数都是报纸和杂志，对于那些大部头的经

典英语原文名著，她倒不是很“执着”。听英语广播、看英语原声电影和英文杂志、参加英语角，都是她课余时间的最大爱好。“我喜欢听布莱尔演讲。当你发现外国人说的话你大多能听懂时，就会希望自己能听得更多、说得更多。”这次雅思作文能得满分，陈晨和她的老师都认为全都要归功于她地道的“英式思维”。而这正是她平时大量阅读英文报纸、杂志所积累的扎实的基本功。

对于目前的雅思考试，学生完全可以通过大量做题、背作文、背模句来应考。但结果大家也都看到了，最好的成绩不过如此。但真能把英语吃进去，并且融合出适合自己的东西的人太少了。其实陈晨这次的雅思作文满分，就得益于她地道的英式思维。她的作文内容并不深奥，词汇也并不艰深，但能得到雅思考官的认同，就因为他们在中国看到了一篇从未见过的典型性英式文章。

字典是个宝

常见学英语的学生都随身携带着小巧的电子辞典，每每在做题的时候抱着这个小玩意儿狂按。对这种学习辅助工具的依赖几乎成了所有学生的通病。谈到这点，陈晨很肯定地说：“我从来不用那种翻译工具。”但她选择了另外一种辅助工具——字典。陈晨最喜欢的一部字典是《牛津大词典》。她告诉记者，从开始学英语一直到现在，她从字典里获益良多。

这种权威性强的字典往往会对一个单词有全方位的解释和剖析。通过结合词组、句型等方式，可以帮助加深对单词的记忆印象，而且字典内的举例完全是英式的思维方法，都是典型的英式英语。陈晨说，她自己有好多小本，每个小本上都是从各种英文资料上摘抄的例句。有的是从英文杂志上摘抄的，有的是从字典里摘抄的，就是这一个个小本子，使陈晨的思维模式、英语表达越来越像一个标准的英国人。陈晨笑言，好在打基础的时候就走对了路，没有落下什么中式英语的毛病。这次的作文满分也就是成功摆脱了固有的中文翻译式作文。

个性思维能力比较强

除了英语学习外，打乒乓球、练太极、写书法等等都为陈晨所爱。正是由于对各类知识的广泛涉猎，陈晨的个性思维能力比较强。据张亚哲介绍，其实雅思考试主要考查的还是学生的个性思维能力，必须要言之有物才能得到考官的青睐。所以平时注意积累自己的观察事物能力，练就总结归纳能力，也是取得高分的必要手段。