英语短文写作句子改错练习_高级综合英语(含答案)（优秀范文5篇）

第一篇：英语短文写作句子改错练习_高级综合英语(含答案)

英语短文写作句子改错练习<2>

1．指代方面

1）Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.改为:Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden the students have to bear.2）People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, but it often proves useless.改为:People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, which often proves useless.3)Television provides us with a vivid, colorful world, which enables us to enjoy life thoroughly.改为:Television, which enables us to enjoy life thoroughly,provides us with a vivid, colorful world.2．修饰方面 1）To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.改为:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases, to the countryside.2）Without television, people can't get information which comes from other parts of the world immediately.改为:Without television, people can't immediately get information which comes from other parts of the world.At the age of six, my father began to teach me English.3）When I was six, my father began to teach me English.改为:4)Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people's living standard has greatly improve 改为:Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved living standard.To improve one's writing skill, regular practice is essential.5)To improve one's writing skill, we need regular practice.3．平行方面

1）While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.改为:改为:While the number of vehicles is reduced, the speed of traffic can be increased.The price of milk isn' t higher than grain.2）The price of milk isn' t higher than that of grain.改为:The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, the world, and human beings.改为:The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, to the world, and to human beings.4）But other people argue that everyone has a certain opportunity and a wise man will never lose it whenever it arises.改为:But other people argue that everyone has a certain opportunity and that a wise man will never lose it whenever it arises.3）5）Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.改为:Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and of the length of it.Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as its improvement of 6）our environment, its contribution to our industry and its making our cities beautiful.改为:Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as its improvement of our environ-ment, its contribution to our industry and its beautification of our cities

4.语法方面

1）Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.改为:Narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents.2）A great change has been taken place since then.改为:A great change has taken place then.3）But it may occur some new problems.改为:But some new problems may occur.4）Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.改为:Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.5）Green trees can protect our air from polluting.改为:Green trees can protect our air from being polluted.6）Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.改为:Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.5.搭配方面

1）However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.改为：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.2）In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.改为:In the past the price of milk was so high that most families could not afford it.3）We should study/learn as much knowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared for the future.改为:We should get as much knowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared for the future.4）The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be smaller if one cannot speak English.改为:The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be less if one cannot speak Eng-lish.6.赘言问题 1）改为:In my opinion, I believe the free medical system is in need of reform.People try to find a solution to solve the problem.2）改为:In my opinion, the free medical system is in need of reform.People try to find a solution to the problem.3)Many visitors who visit our city have the impression that there are few trees in the street.改为:Many visitors of our city have the impression that there are few trees in the street.The reason why people choose to live in the country is because there is no pollution or noise there.改为:The reason why people choose to live in the country is that there is no pollution or noise there.5)1 have to rewrite my composition again.改为:1 have to rewrite my composition.4)1）Traffic is a serious problem, one of the reasons 7.汉化问题

My level of English has thus been improved.2）改为:My English has thus been improved.is that Shanghai has over ten million people.改为:Traffic is a serious problem, one of the reasons is that there are over ten million people in Shanghai.3）Nowadays young people who seek to go abroad are becoming more and more.改为:Nowadays more and more young people seek to go abroad.4)With the development of cities, green land becomes more and more less.5)改为:With the development of cities, there is less and Smoking will do harm to our body.改为:Smoking will do harm to heath.less green land.We should put out hearts into the study.改为:We should pay attention to the study 6)

第二篇：经典英语短文改错20篇（定稿）

经典英语短文改错20篇（1）

来源：高考宝典发布日期：2012-03-14 22:27 短文改错是英语高考复习的一个重点和难点，是影响学生英语高考分数的一个重要知识点。高考英语怎么样才能取得高分？是很多高三学生特别关心的一个问题。高考宝典特地总结了此部分的高考复习资料供同学们使用！（2009.全国卷I）短文改错

After five years away in my hometown, I find that

76.________________ The neighborhood which I used to living in has changed

77.________________ a lot.The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop

78._______________

across the street from our middle school were gone.79.________________ There exist now a park that has a small river running

80.________________ through.The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and 81._______________ Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports 82.______________ center has been built in their place.The market at the corner of 83._____________ Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to

84.________________ a supermarket.Besides the bookstore next to our middle

85._______________ school is still there.【解析】

76.【答案】in→from。句意是我离开家乡五年，away from属于固定搭配。

77.【答案】 living → live。used to 后跟动词原形，表示“过去常常做某事请”。

78.【答案】older → old。句中没有比较的意思。

79.【答案】were → are。根据上文可知饭店和鱼店消失都陈述的是现在的情况。

80.【答案】exist → exists。主语a park是单数第三人称。

81.【答案】正确

82.83.84.85.【答案】sports前加a。sports center是可数名词单数，表示不确定。

【答案】their → its。前文中提到了名词The factory是单数，因此把their改为its。【答案】去掉been。短语give way to“让路”，用主动语态。【答案】Besides → But。前后表示转折关系。

经典英语短文改错20篇（2）

来源：网络资源

发布日期：2012-03-14 22:27 短文改错是英语高考复习的一个重点和难点，是影响学生英语高考分数的一个重要知识点。高考英语怎么样才能取得高分？是很多高三学生特别关心的一个问题。高考宝典特地总结了此部分的高考复习资料供同学们使用！

短文改错（共15小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分）

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。I am very thankful you for inviting me to go 76．_____________ and stay with 77．____________ Nanjing is a 78．____________ longing to see

you my

again English this lives to ．

that

I ．summer the and misses

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can And

get I

more am

．79．____________ from you in 80．____________ I can’t come 81．____________ grandmother, who 82．____________ again and again 83．____________ together with him

study

you

Nanjingcity

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often

heard have

that

beautiful that been

help

afraid

coming in go She

vacationsMy

country, spending me I

so wish

asked the

vacation that could

much I

I 84．____________ have no choice but obey her85．____________

and see you at the end of this year．

【答案】

76．you前加to 77．heard---hear 78．去掉that 79．正确

80．And---But 81．vacations---vacation 82．asked前加has 83．spending---spend 84．him---her 85．but后加to

第三篇：经典短文改错练习

短文改错.1.Anita Mei was a very famous pop singer in Hong Kong.Together 76.with her mother, she began to perform in the age of four.In the early 77.1980s, she took part in a local singing competition but won the first 78.prize.The song “Bad Girl” made her famous.The following years see 79.Anita play in many movies and made many records.Some of her songs 80.were very popular.She was always ready to help others, she made 81.a lot of good friends.When SARS hit Hong Kong in 2004, they 82.organized several pop concert with other pop stars, calling on Hong 83.Kong people to bravely face the disease.Sad, Anita died of cancer 84.in December, 2003.The brave and the beautiful lady will always be 85.remembered by people.2.When Joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory.76． But after he had been worked there for some years, he decided 77． to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers, 78． saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would 79． like to have.One of the answers he accepted was from a man 80． was looking for a job, too.This man wrote to him, “Dear, sir, 81． when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and 82． address to you present boss as I have been trying to find 83． a position like yours for a long time.” After he reads the letter, 84． he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish.85．

3.Every day John goes to work by trains.He always 76.___________ buys a piece newspaper to read on the train, so he feels 77.___________ that the time pass more quickly.One day on the train he 78.___________ was reading a report about important football match.79.___________ The report was such interesting that he forgot to get off 80.___________ at his station.He didn’t know it until he saw the sea.81.___________ He got off at the next station, and wait a long time for 82.___________ a train to go back.He arrived very lately at the office.83.___________ His boss was angry to him when he told him why he 84.___________ was late.“Work is more importance than football!” 85.___________ 4.In the first day when I went to work in a very famous 76．___________ restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few 77．___________ people coming for dinner.So I am “invited” to have a meal in 78．___________ the restaurant.After ordering two French dishes and some food, 79．___________ I began to look frequently at watch timing the serving of the 80．___________ meal.Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything 81．___________ else wrong there.I wrote something improper down secret.My 82．___________ meal was not serving yet.I looked at my watch ：32 minutes 83．___________ passed!I realized that wait too long for service was the main 84．__________ reasons why the business was poor.Then I wrote a report about 85．___________ my findings and presented it to the boss.5.Last month we bought our two-year-old daughter a little dog.There are not many children of her age there we live, 76． and we thought a dog would make her less alone.We were 77． right.They play together happily all days.Our daughter now 78． smiles and laughs a lot more than she used.In a way it 79．

is like having two children in the house.All of them are 80． very untidy, but they cry when they do not get what they 81． want.The dog is easy to look after than my daughter.82． He always eats up all his food and we don’t have piles of 83． dirty clothes to wash.My wife is also happy because of 84． I have given up smoke.The dog doesn’t like the smell.85．

6.I went shopping with my wife.We have a lot of things to 1._________ buy them.We drove to the center of the city and stopped 2._________ our car in front of the shop.An hour late, we came back 3._________ to the car.But it was strange that we couldn't open 4._________ the door.So we asked policeman for help.He was 5._________ glad to help us.A few minute later, he got the door open.6._________ Just then a man came up and shouted angrily.“How are 7._________ you doing with my car ” We were surprising and went to 8._________ see the number of the car.What you think we did then 9._________ We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.10._________ 7.To my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages 76.______ traveling both by plane and by train.Travel by plane is 77.______ time-saving, comfortably, and you can have a good rest 78.______ on the trip.but it is too expensive.Unless you travel by 79.______ train, it is not expensive and quite safety and you can 80.______ appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides of the 81.______ railway.However, it was too crowded and time-wasting, 82.______ and we can take a good rest.So you can see every 83.______ coin has two sides.You'd better to choose either of 84.______ them depending on your own interest or economy.85.______

8.Dear Worried, I have accepted your letter and I'm glad to give you some 76.__________ suggestions.First in all, don't be disappointed.Many students 77.__________ find it difficulty to write well.In my opinion, if you want to 78.__________ improve your writing, and you can do several things.First, 79.__________ do some study with phrases and sentence structures.Second, 80.__________ read as much as possible.There are many things can't be 81.__________ learnt.You must see it in books many times.Then you'll 82.__________ be able to use them correctly yourself.But, in order to write 83.__________ well, you must learn to read much.Finally, you'd better to 84.__________ recite some good passages.Good luck for you in your writing.85.9.My cousin and I usually stay out late with some friends on Saturday evenings, left Grandpa alone at home.71.___ It was so cold yesterday, however, that none of us wanted 72.____ to suffer from the frozen wind outside.So after dinner we 73.____ stay at home sitting around a fire and listening to Grandpa 74.____ tell his experiences in Second World War.In fact they 75.____ sounded familiar to us, so we were still listening attentively 76.____ so as to make him be happy.Now and then we asked Grandpa 77.____ some questions, that he answered in a humorous way.We 78.____ burst out laughing from time to time and he laughed too.79.____ Full of joy, we all felt especially warm in the cold evening.80.____ 10.As is known to all that the Internet is playing 76________ a more and more important part on our daily life.77________ On it, we can not only read news at home or abroad 78_________ but also get much information as possible.For instance, 79_________ we are often send e-mails or make telephone calls 80 _______ to our families as well as our friends.However, 81 _______ we can go to school on the net, read different 82 _______ kind of books and even teach ourselves English.We can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer games.We can even do shopping without left our homes.83 _______ 84 ________ 85 _______ ⑴ 76.√ 77.in---at78.but---and 79.see---saw 80.made---make 81.∧and/so 82 they—she 83.concert—concerts 84.Sadly 85.the ⑵ 76．job 77．去掉been 78． a 79．experience 80． received 81．去掉was/加who 82．your-my 83．√ 84． read 85． really ⑶76.trains 改为 train 77.去掉 piece。78.pass 改为 passes。79.important 前加 an 80.such 改为 so。81.此行无错。82.wait 改为 waited。83.lately 改为 late。84.to 改为 with。85.importance 改为 important。

⑷76.in--on 77 a / 78 was 79 right 80.at the /my 81that--whether /if 82 secretly 83.served 84 waiting 85.reason ⑸ 76．there改为where 77．alone改为lonely 78．days改为day 79．used改为used to 80．All改为Both 81．but改为and 82．easy改为easier 83．无错 84．去掉of 85．smoke改为smoking ⑹1.Have改为had 2.them去掉 3.late改为later 4.正确 5.asked 后加a 6.minute改为 minutes 7.How 改为What 8.surprising改为surprised 9.What 后加do 10.speak 改为 say ⑺76.To—In 77.Travel—Travelin9 78.comfortably--comfortable 79.Unless--If 80.safety--safe 81.正确 82.was—is 83.can后加not 84.去掉to 85.or--and ⑻76.accepted→received 77.in→of 78.difficulty→difficult 79.去掉and 80.对 81.things后加that 82.it→them 83.But→So 84.去掉to 85.for→to

⑼71.left-leaving 72.none-neither 73.froze-freezing 74.stay-stayed 75.in 后面加the 76.so-but/yet 77.be去掉 78.that-which 79.正确80.in-on ⑽ 76.As →It 77.on →in 78.or →and 79.get ⌒much as 80.are81.However →Besides 82.∨ 83.kind →kinds 84.watching →watch 85.left →leaving

⑾ 76.accepted→received 77.去掉more, 78.because后加of, 79.other→another 80.say→said 81.and→or两,三天用two or three days.82.family前加the这里特指家庭的其他成员.83.fast→soon fast指动作的迅速,soon指时间“尽快地”.84.√ 85.happily→happy

⑿ 76.√77.is→are 78.felt→feel 79.Therefore→However 80.∧little→a a little boy 81.去掉not 后的to 82.play→playing 83.like→as 84.grade→grades“分数”, 85.for→in

⒀ 76.have→had 77.√ 78去掉but 79.去掉him 80.shoulders →shoulder 81.taking → taken 82.was后加 not 83.He→I 84.explain后加to ⒁ 1.calling—called 2.walking前加was3.and—or 4.and—but5.dead—died 6.√7.All—Both 8.去掉not 9.great前加a 10.danced—dance

第四篇：短文改错练习

短文改错专练：March 29th, Dear Diary, I’m writing this at my room.It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep.I’m thinking about my future!Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don’t know!My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun.Also I’m really bad at biology at the school.My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!

Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed.I can think about my future in bed.I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.I have known my friend Rebecca for a long time.We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years before.We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place.We listened to the music together and soon became best friends.Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them.It is great.We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage.Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach.We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs.Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town.Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.Dear Joe, How are you? Thanks to your post — good to know when you’re OK.I’ve got news too.I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school.We’re going to stay on a farm with four days!We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding.I’m sure I’ll love it.You know how crazy I am about the animals!I want to learn all about the cows or the horses.I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too.Well, right now I’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday!I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours, 4 Nadia People had always been interested in bees.This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make.In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years.In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey.They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard.Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees.In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”.Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees.They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other.Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.Yesterday afternoon, I took the No.6 bus to go home.It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones.Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry.When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus.My ID card and ten books were in the bag.I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help.Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag.I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name.How a good man!

I read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today.According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way.He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification.Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way.They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.Last weekends, I went shopping by myself.It was a sunny day and I feel very happy.When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus.Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop.Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room.I had to wait the next bus.Suddenly, it started to rain.I had no choice but to call a taxi.Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down.I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by.Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain.What an unlucky day!

My name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor.I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going.I enjoy serving others.Additionally, I have vary interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer.I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions.I am confident that I can do the job good.Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies.For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students.Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax.I believe I am the right person to this post.Dear Sarah, I’m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week.I’m really sorry.I know we said 8:30, and I would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly.I was late because my watch broke and I didn’t know what the time it was.So you see, I would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t broken.Then I have to walk because I’d missed the bus.And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing.Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late.I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone.Anyway, I hope you aren’t too angrier with me.Hope to hear you soon.Yours, Jack

Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip.I get up at six o’clock and we set off by bus.On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked.We all had good time.Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome.After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees.It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time.Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air.Finally, we went home at half past four.Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.Both my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad.They think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent.Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future.Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn’t agree with them.He thought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners.Besides, the cost is too much for his family.In my opinions, I should continue to study in China.As long as I study hard at now, I’ll make great achievements in the future.Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market.It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars.But there is one serious problems with this.The information are actually very often misinformation.It tells us the products’ benefits but hides its disadvantages.Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality.“Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us.And it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.My grandfather had had enough of his cat.He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess.So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town.He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her.A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep.My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather.He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention.He decided he will never give her away again.Bedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society.This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did.People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past.Customs and beliefs have changed very slower.They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better.Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next.Yet changes do take place.All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other.In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.My uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof.They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter.Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police.After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to.It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly.The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground.Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit.There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema.But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities.As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired.But it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic.Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active.In a word, exercise is good for the health.Dear Sandra, You’ll never guess where I’m writing this email.A cave!You know we’re on holidays in Spain.Well, we spend a few days in Barcelona first.We had a good time there, though one day I didn’t feel very good.I think I ate too much ice cream the day before.Anyway, when I left Barcelona, we came to spend a few days in Granada.However, we couldn’t get a hotel — too many tourists and not enough bed!Then the hotel owner said, “Why don’t try the cave hotels?” We thought he were joking.Living in caves? But there we are and it’s wonderful.We’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to leave.We’re never going to have enough time to explore for everything.Take care!

Ben

My uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite television.He decided to set up himself.He climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his houses.After he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the TV.The next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch TV.That afternoon they heard lots of shouting outside.When they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on fire.Fortunately, the fire was putting out.It turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the fire.Christmas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards others.It is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to ourselves.But do we think of the other people when we sat down to our Christmas dinner? Of course not — we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with Christmas.We are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better than the one we received.They forget to think of the sick and the homeless.The whole idea of Christmas has complete changed.What a shame!

A thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on him.Looking up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless eyes.At first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the door.Therefore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t move.Eventually, my parents returned to and found the thief in our house.When my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a toy.But it was too late and she was arrested.My father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.21

Nowadays more and more students were found cheating in exams.Some copy from each other;some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note;others use modern communication tool such as mobile phones.Cheating in exams will cause some worse effects.For one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright students.For another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the future.So how can cheating in exams be stopped? On my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from cheating.At the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their honesty.Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you will come Beijing to learn about Chinese culture as an exchange student.At the moment, I am studying English in my school but I always get better grades in my class.I’m good at the spoken English, so I’m sure I will communicate with you frequent.Beside, my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates.I believe you will be one of their friend too.Therefore, I invite you to live in my home during you stay in Beijing.I’m willing to helping you as much as I can.Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

第五篇：英语短文改错专项训练

英语短文改错专项训练（第一周）

Passage 1 Last Sunday, it was my father’s funny day.After supper, my father went to see the film.But in our surprise, he came back just about half an hour later.I asked him what was the matter.He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema.He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers.Surprising, they looked at their ticket carefully, only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different.So they looked at the tickets carefully.After a while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, “Sorry, I make a mistake.Take this seat, please.” The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.Passage 2 It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival spent with my parents when I was 12.In the early morning, my parents and I went to the park at their car.There were lots of visitors stood in the front of the ticket window.We waited a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents.I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck.Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions.Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.Passage 3 One week ago, we finished our mid-exams.Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over.Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates.As result, the hurt in my foot became bad.Now I know I’m wrong.We can tell others our need for help and accept his help.Some day we can not help others in return.In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.Passage 4 Patience is of great importance in our daily life.Once I waited a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past, but no bus came.Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet.But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it.If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes.Only then do I realize my problem.Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in.Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.Passage 5 How harmful cigarettes are getting now!My grandmother died of lung cancer at age of sixty on Jan 27, 2009.Only then did I know cigarettes were the mainly cause of her cancer.She knows smoking was harmful, so she just couldn’t quit.She always hid her addiction, hoped that I would never start smoking.My grandmother was my role models and I loved her so much.Now I still wake up in every day wishing that smoking has never been invented.Our promise to her is that I will never smoke as long as I live, so that I don’t have to go through which she did.Passage 6 Today it was a sunny day.In the morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads.After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand.On the way I met my next-door neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog.We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather.As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell.As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it.Five minutes late, I was back at the store to buy bread again.Passage 7 An most interesting thing happened to me last winter.During my winter vocation, I spend my lucky money on a special gift for Grandma.One Friday afternoon, I went to a cell phone store and chose a larger button phone special designed for seniors.I gave them to my grandma when I came to visit her at the weekend.Upon receive the phone, Grandma was very happy and eager learn how to use it.I had patiently explained all the important functions she needed.Grandma learned carefully but wanted to have a try straight away.Under my help, she successfully called her good friend.That afternoon Grandma proudly told the neighbor that she could make calls with the new phone I bought her.They all praised what thoughtful I was.英语短文改错专项训练（第二周）

Passage 1 Last month, the 18 Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school.Luckily, the Students’ Union organize an English Speech Competition.At first I didn’t show some interest and wasn’t very much confident.Then my English teacher Mr.Smith encouraged me.Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it.Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn.Glancing at my teacher’s smiling face, I built up my confidence.Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner.But my teacher’s encouragement, I couldn’t have won the first prize.I’m proud of Mr.Smith or the wonderful experience.Passage 2 As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited.Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night.A car hit a motorbike.The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospital.After a while, the traffic police came.Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth.The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control.At last he was taken to the police station.All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously.It often causes many thpeople lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu.It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.Passage 3 Dear Sir/Madam, I write this letter to you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service.A few days ago, I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency.I found a little differences between your advertisement and action.As you say, you will provide a large air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus with any air conditioner.Yes, you served us lunch, and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand.We didn’t enjoy any kind of shower.In fact, we only bathe in cold water.As for sightseeing, the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time.As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen.We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again.Passage 4 As we all know, playing is one of man's itself characteristics.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play.All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports.Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games.One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to move happily.In other words, they help to keep people strong and health.If people are playing games, they move a lot of.Having fun with their friends make them happy.Many people enjoy sports by watch others play.So that is why sports are good activities for people’s health.Passage 5 Last Sunday I went shopping with my father.We have a lot of things to buy.We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop.An hour late, we came back to the car.But it was strange that we couldn’t open the door.So we asked the policeman for help.It was glad to help us.A few minute later, he got the door open.Just then a man came up and shouted angrily.‘How are you doing with my car?’ We were surprising and went to see the number of the car.What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.Passage 6 Yesterday, it was just on the point of big shopping this season.Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据）.When she got there，she refused.The salesman said that he wouldn’t take it back if she showed him the receipt.Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left.Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her.They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful.Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing.Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.Passage 7 Changes create happiness.Fortunately, great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil．Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing．

英语短文改错专项训练（第三周）

Passage 1 It was for Alice to attend a chemistry class on Monday.Unluckily, she was not on time for school in this morning.She looked little tired when she met her chemistry’s teacher, Miss Green.She apologized for her being lately.Miss Green asked her if there was something wrong with her.The girl said that he was all right, so she didn’t have much sleep last night.She went to a football game and took some pictures.After she came home, she was busy developed them.She stayed up till midnight.Miss Green told her to get more sleep at night.Alice promises not to do that again.Then Alice showed Miss Green her beautiful picture.Passage 2 Nowadays, mobile phones are more and more popular in our society.Even many students of high schools have got their own mobile phone.The mobile phone does offer a lot convenience to us.With a mobile phone, we can call the others not matter where we are.We can also send short messages.But, the mobile phone brings trouble as well.The signals of the phone disturbed our living space too much.Sometimes it will be unsafe or impolite to use a mobile phone.What’s more, it can be bad for the students who pay too more attention to it.It seems it’s not necessary for our middle school students to have a phone.In a word, if they use the mobile phone in a proper way, it can help us a lot without bring us troubles.Passage 3 An advertisement is really playing an important role in our daily life or not? We can see advertisement here and there.TV, radios, lifts, buses, newspapers, magazines, and even the cars carrying the information of the products and services to a wide audience.Advertisements are delivered your hands, your shopping bags, your mailboxes, your house, etc.They are there you are.The advertisements have brought greatly convenience to people.If someone wants the information of a product, he doesn’t have to go in personal to the shop.What he needs to do is to look at the ads which he can find them everywhere.Sometimes, however, some ads misleads the consumers, for they exaggerate the benefits of their products.So far as the consumers are concerning, they had better have their own judgment and not were puzzled by ads.Passage 4 More and more families are now rich enough to have their own cars.Cars do benefit the families as well the society in many ways.With a car, it is convenient for the family members to travel to or from work.They can also drive to the countryside on the weekends.At the same time, the development of motor industry will sure give a push to many other related industries, it is obviously beneficial to the social economy.In the other hand, the boom of private cars is also causing traffic and environmental problem.Waste gases from cars are causing serious pollution to the air, which do great harm to people’s health.With an increased number of cars on the roads, the traffic has become very heavily.Passage 5 Throughout history man has changed their physical environment in order to improve his way of life.With the tools of technology that he has changed many physical features of the earth.But, man’s changes to the physical environment has not always had beneficial results.Today, pollution of the air or water is a increasing danger to the health of the planet.As we know, massive destruction of environment has brought in negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence.Therefore, effective measure should be taken and laws pass to conserve environment.Otherwise, man is certain to suffer the serious consequences causing by this lack of care for his living surroundings.Passage 6 In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Many students are trying his best to go abroad.There are many advantages in attending schools in abroad.First, students study abroad can make friend with people of different cultures.Second, they can learn many more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries.Third, they can learn foreign language more quickly.But mostly of the students are so young to live by themselves without any living experience.However, it is the first time for the most of them to leave the main land.Be far away from their motherland, they may feel lonely and homesick.英语短文改错专项训练（第四周）

Passage 1 Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player.The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmate playing table tennis.Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good.Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn our techniques.Then I kept practicing while I became confidently enough to challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players of my class.I really take proud in this experience, because it helped me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve to our goals through hard work.It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”

Passage 2 How can a person recover from emotional problems? A popular opinion suggests that he watches humorous films.And a recent study proves this to be wrong.The study also shows that watching at sad films can make getting over a negative mood a easier job.Emotionalexperiences is important to people’s well-being.People are less likely to share their feelingswith these who have had similar experiences.Similar, people prefer movies that reflect theirmood.That’s the reason ^a sad film can contribute to comfort a sad person more than a pleasant one.Passage 3 I used to be a very self-centered person, but in the past two years I really changed.I have started to think about other people after I think about myself.I am happy that I am becoming the different person.I think my change started when I was at Palomar College.At first, I just want to get my degree and be left alone.I thought I was smarter than everyone else, so I hardly ever talked to anyone in my classes.By the end of my first semester, I was really lonely.That seemed as if everyone besides me had made friend and was having fun.So I tried an experiment.I started asking people around me how they were doing, and whether they were having trouble, I offered to help.That was real a big step for me.By the end of the year, I had several new friends, two of them are still my best friends today.Passage 4 My friend Davis kept birds.He asked me to feed them for him in one day because he would be away for a week.He said that he have left the key in his mailbox.Unfortunately, I forgot all about birds until the night before Davis were to return.What was worse, it was already dark when I arrived at his house.I soon found the key left by Davis can’t unlock either the front door nor the back door.I was getting worrying.I was just about to give up while I noticed that one bedroom window was slightly open.I climbed up and opened the window.Just then a policeman and one of Davis’ neighbor arrived.I felt like a completely fool at that time.Passage 5 I often go to a weekend school.So did many of my classmates.This seems popular among students.Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies.Besides, we get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life.So every coin has two sides.Our school work is already a heavy burden.Extra lesson often take up too much of our time.In addition, pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects.We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school..We should think seriously about this issue and make best use of our time.Passage 6 In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Many students are trying his best to go abroad.There are many Ladies and gentlemen, It is special pleasure to welcome our new staff member, Mr Tony White, who has come here to America.Mr White has recently graduated from the University of Chicago where he has majored in English Literature and minored in Teaching English as the Second Language.He will working with us here for at least two years.One of the goals of our school are to promote understanding and cooperation between the young people of our two countries.By have Mr White, who is willing to sacrifice the comfort of his friends and family to come to a strange country, we feel we are very lucky and our goals will be easily realized.On behalf of the whole school, I’d like to extend to you, Mr White, your sincerest welcome.We are indeed happy to have you here, and we wish you all the better during your stay in China.Thank you.Passage 7 Dear Sir，Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school.As for your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends.Of all the subject I’m learning at school, I like English best.I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly.So I really hope to take this chance improve it.If possible, I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in England, that I’m particularly interested in.I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.Yours truly，Li Hua